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 shredready

Joined: 1/15/2008
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Help with profile, any input would be appreciated
Posted: 1/18/2008 6:43:36 AM
I asked friends but they all said great, but maybe friends men and woman are not the best judge. I now something is missing are off, compared to succes rate to friends of mine.
Any impute would be greatly appreciated , love to hear from woman, since that who the add
is geared to. Or, guys who are successful with their profile. Thanks in advancde
 JustJaiJai

Joined: 8/18/2007
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Posted: 1/18/2008 7:20:38 AM
OP: I just read your profile. Now going from memory here the only two things I can remember about what you said is politics and dogs. You mentioned each about 3 times. So if I clicked on your profile and had to try and remember something about you....it would be those two things. I wouldn't be thinking "oh yeah that guy with the great sense of humor" or "oh yeah that romantic guy" or "oh yeah that guy who sounds like a ton of fun". Nope I'd remember politics and dogs. Ask yourself, is that the impression you want women who read your profile walking away with? If it is...then you've done a great job! If it's not, then you need to re-vamp it.

Also your pictures are good. You have interests listed...that's good. You need to do a spell check. There are quiet a few grammatical and spelling errors. Big no-no. Make it more exciting, more fun because at this point if I'm a non-political cat lover I'm moving to the next profile. Good Luck!
 shredready

Joined: 1/15/2008
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Posted: 1/18/2008 9:30:20 AM
thanks it helped rewriting it and having it checked for grammer
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