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 jambz1987

Joined: 12/16/2007
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How is my profile?
Posted: 1/19/2008 5:53:24 AM
Hey everyone how is my profile?

I know it has to be unique but Im not really good at writing that kind of thing. I never seem to get messaged too so I guess it needs to be improved in some way.

Any ideas or constructive criticism?

Cheers

J
 garnet73

Joined: 1/2/2008
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Posted: 1/20/2008 1:19:04 AM
I wasn't sure if I should field this one, but having looked at your profile, I figured I'd have a go.

You're looking for: Hanging out. Your first date: Something nice and romantic. Those two things just don't jive.

You've also got some (terrible) shots of yourself bare-chested. I say terrible because they're out of focus and you're the one holding the camera. I'd get a friend to take a decent still shot if you're going to bother. Of course, showing off your form says "intimate encounter" which doesn't really fit with the above, either.


Humour... Without it life would be shit! and no one would smile.
You managed to swear in your very first line, might put some off.

I love to see smiles... and love someone making me smile as well!
That's good, nothing wrong with this!

If I can make someones day by seeing if I have nose hairs, by all means I did my job!!!!
I hope this doesn't mean what I think it means. I hope I have no clue what it means. Either way, it's a problematic statement.

I also love attempting to keep fit :D and consider myself an immense footballer!
Only attempting to keep fit?

Sometimes less is more, but I really think you need to give people (and by people I mean ladies) a bit more to get excited about. I'm talking about what you have to say, more than your profile picture.
 offstride

Joined: 8/18/2007
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Posted: 1/20/2008 7:16:37 AM
I agree with garnet 73 for the most part. You need to make your profile longer. 4 lines is not going to grab much interest. You need to tell more about yourself and what you like to do. I'd lose about half of the pictures you have up, especially the ones with the drinking buddies. I'd stick with pictures 1, 4, and 6.
Good Luck
 insatiable girl

Joined: 11/11/2007
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Posted: 1/20/2008 9:12:05 AM
Well, firstly, looking at your photos, the posters all over your wall, make you look like a teenager, little bit jouvanile and love to drink, get drunk and party really hard. The topless one? not very clear but women arent really looking for topless photos.
Groom up, wear somthing smart and perhaps SMILE as you say you do, the main pic is wayy too intense, feel IM going to be mugged on a date.

Your about me section, not alot about you really, put in what makes you really happy in life, what kind of person you are and what makes u tick, the more u write the better.

Im not being a ****, I'm just honest.
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