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Posted: 1/22/2008 11:42:18 PM | I will offer you guys some profile reviews
tell you what I like and what I dont like and some suggestions to what I think you could do to make your profile better.
Now its just my opinion so please dont get too upset if I dont like it, but I am willing to help you out to get a girls opinion on your profile. | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 1:05:27 AM | | Hi Nikki can you take a look at my profile and let me know what you think? id appreciate it thanks hun | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 1:13:19 AM | | But Nikki, shouldn't you be good at writing a profile before being able to offer advice on writing a profile? | |
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cw81
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Posted: 1/23/2008 10:57:07 AM | Willing to hear some of your advice as well, thanks in advance!
Be brutally honest. | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 2:22:58 PM | Some assistance would be greatly appreciated. :) Thank you   | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 2:25:32 PM | well start helping please not getting no email.makes me sad please HELP!!!!!! | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:20:35 PM | hi monkeykoder
well first off I think you need more pictures, I personally dont like it when a guy just has one pic, you need varity, show yourself dressed up, or dressed down, out with your friends, things you do for fun. Ya know?
I love your opening in your about me, I never really thought of that, makes me wonder about it. The other stuff kinda bored me, you made it sound like your breaking down a relationship to a science. Like if u match me then thats it. I dunno... I got kinda lost. But overall your profile is good.
I think if you want more girls to respond get more pics, and kinda lay back in your about me... im sorry if im not much of a help | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:25:58 PM | hi pjcj
I really like your profile
You made me laugh, you seem like a great guy. Your about me was perfect in my sense, not too much information but enough where I can understand who you are. I can also see your sense of humor through your profile great plus!
but with all this humor... your pics dont match... you have the same expression in almost every pic, which is fine but it would have been perfect if you had some pics where you were uhmmm smiling!!! I like how you have alot of different pics, different locations etc.
also liked your headline hahah funny.. :) | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:29:07 PM | that sam i am....
no my profile doesnt have to be perfect to give advice... im helping guys out on a girls opinion of there profile... mine doesnt have to be right... i like my profile: short and sweet and if you dont like it i dont really care, i get plenty of messages and i dont seem to have a problem on here. These guys sometimes wonder why girls dont respond or if somethin sounds dumb or too much whatever... im just offering my opinion and thats it. thank you... | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:34:14 PM | hi real9
Im sorry but your profile to me made you come off a bit c o c k y. Rubbed me the wrong way. Like if I would have read your profile I probably would not have responed. It started off good till you kinda went over board, calling yourself a King and saying you like sex. Girls dont want to hear that unless thats all they are into really.
Also in your pics they are good but who is the little one? people would ask, if you have that pic up you should say who she is in your about me or somethin, hopefully I didnt miss it anywhere... | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:37:41 PM | hi starad
One of your pics really scared me haha is that from halloween? In a way I did like it though shows you like to have fun. I like your about me, short and sweet just like mine. I personally dont like it when a guy puts way to much info in their about me, I can learn all that stuff later. But I do think you could put a little more info but you really dont have to its over all good.
I like your first date comments too.
O and also with your pics put one up with you smiling! You guys need to smile! It brings so much you dont even know. | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:41:09 PM | Hi gromangr
ok well your profile is short but its not so sweet.... There is not much there, I guess its good in away I can get to know you, but through in there some more dont just be like I like this, this, and this. Its kinda repetative ya know?
I love your pics, different shots and your smiling.
First date... hmmm... I dont like it when a guy says depends ... just think of a date you would love to take any girl on, dont think about what type of girl or what she might not like.... I like to see guys ideas and build off that, also shows things we might have in common | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:47:39 PM | hi qps junky
one thing I just have to point out before I forget... dont, dont! put "please give me a chance", It shows lack of confidence or desperate (turn off)
I like your pics, shows you like to have fun and you also look like a sweetie haha
I think its so cute how you are a "redneck" and you like meat, too me you sounded like a very nice gentleman who knows how to treat a woman but also with the sense of humor to have some real fun. You also are very smart, which is a def plus. I liked your about me, you didnt put alot of information but def enough to make me smile. | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 9:53:07 PM | hi cw81
your headline made me laugh.... so whats the diff between a girl and a woman? You can just pick one you dont need to put girl/woman.. haha that was cute
One thing your profile does need is more pics! you can never have enough pics, unless its like almost the same shot with same expressions. Show pics with you have fun, dressin up, dressin down, out on the town etc.
Your about me was good, I always like profile about me that are short and sweet and too the point without sounding boring i guess.... you can put some more information but overall it was good | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 10:00:02 PM | Hi Imeridian
whats up with all the ( comments) just say them dont have to put so many of those
Your pics are great! I loved your pics, showed what you like to do and all that stuff.
Your about me well... to be honest kinda bored me and im not very bright either so some of the words you used I didnt even know what they meant, kinda scared me, I felt well maybe I am too dumb to even get with this guy, which is probably what some girls might be thinking. I liked how you put what you are looking for but in away you sounded very picky which can be a turn off to some girls. Overall your profile wasnt so bad. | |
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Posted: 1/23/2008 10:03:41 PM | Hi MountieHoo
awwww I love your headline, "looking for me sweetheart" so perfect.
Your pics and about me is great too I dont really see why you would ask for my advice all is well on your end! | |
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