| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 4:15:59 AM | Okay I have watched this forum for a while now with an almost morbid curiousity thinking, why would you lay yourself bare to such scrutinisations.
And here I am....exposed and vulnerable, almost sacrificial.
I offer my profile for your thoughts...comments. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 6:21:03 AM | | Your pictures are beautiful. Though maybe just a wee bit more in the "About" me section. Maybe how friends have described you. A few of the things you enjoy, maybe a few things you'd enjoy sharing with a partner. Things like that. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 6:39:49 AM | Well, there's not a whole lot of thoughts I can provide since you don't have a whole lot on there. The pictures are ok, but without them there is not a whole lot to get my attention.
If you were not looking for a mate, and didn't care who contacted you, then the profile might be fine. You're looking for Long Term but you tell nothing (or very little) about you or the type of man you want to meet.
Your pictures are about the only thing that will spark any interest, and I'm sure you don't want someone who only considers you eye candy... or maybe you do.
"We will not need to understand each other..."
Just noticed this, and pretty much confirms you're promoting yourself as eye candy or a "trophy" woman. If that's what you want, more power to you. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 6:54:31 AM | Your profile is very good. I'm impressed with your first photo. Modest and yet shows you have nice legs. And photo 3, though blurry, shows you have a nice figure and the other two show your face.
I thought your about me was original and creative. Overall your profile advertises very well. And, isn’t that the purpose? You can learn about each other after the first message. I don’t suggest any changes unless you receive too many messages. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 9:46:45 AM | a photo with a smile would be nice.
I am not sure your "About Me" entry will bring you anything other than Internet trolls.
Your 43 anything happen to you prior to today. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 11:36:49 AM | I think you need to add more in general. Not enough to work with here.
You clearly realise that most guys will judge mostly on the photo and I expect you then rely on your own judgement of their profile to determine whether you're actually compatible. I can understand that but there are some of us that look a little bit deeper, and to be honest they're not likely to contact you as you just haven't given them anything to work with.
Your profile will attract only people who go for gorgeous pictures, there's no denying that you are gorgeous, but show us a little about you.
Speaking of pictures, your main picture is fantastic, but doesn't work as a thumbnail. Swop it for one of the face pictures, I'd go with the colour one. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/10/2008 2:24:22 PM | To be honest I got nothing from your profile other than you like to drink and you are looking for an alpha male. I'm not sure if you are trying to find a particular person but an alpha male is pretty general. Do you care if this alpha male is a moron? Some would say George Bush is an alpha male but he's a douche. Are you looking for another George Bush?
I like the artistic attempt with the third picture but it's just too blurry. This site is horrible when it comes to our photos so I'm not sure if that played a part or if that picture was always blurry. I would also have to question the handbag on top of the fireplace mantle. It's just too cluttering in my opinion. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 2/26/2008 8:23:47 PM | let's see you have 104 people favouriting you.
You're hot at 43.
You dont really need a profile. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 3/24/2008 2:38:09 AM | | All style and no substance. Not a vast amount of style either - next......... | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 3/24/2008 9:20:35 AM |
Okay I have watched this forum for a while now with an almost morbid curiousity thinking, why would you lay yourself bare to such scrutinisations.
And here I am....exposed and vulnerable, almost sacrificial.
I offer my profile for your thoughts...comments.
I'm really not sure why you want to get a critique on your profile. Are you having problems meeting men? getting response? interest? you're on 126 favorites lists, I'd think you'd have your pick of men by now :)
If you want to meet someone and aim for a long-term relationship, you'll have to put a little bit more meat in your profile. Right now it either shows you don't really know how to express yourself or you just want to "look good, no need to talk anyway" type of image. Not very appealing. I don't think men would know how to deal with you. The "artsy" type is sooooo confusing and not many people have the time or the patience to pull teeth when they contact/meet someone.
As another poster said, it lacks substance. Beef it up a little bit and see where it goes. Assuming, that is, that you need help. | |
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| Your critique...please
Posted: 3/24/2008 11:00:04 AM | Please don't be upset with my reply.
What you have typifies what a lot of women do. Post good pics, but absolutely nothing else! Men are generally guided by looks, so it's not surprising you have like 125 favs'. What kind of man are you attracting with this? I don't think a good one.
At least make an effort to tell us about your 'inside'. One, or two honest paragraphs.
I KNOW you have something good in there.
I'd pass right over you because you only have two lame lines. Again, please don't take offence. Just trying to help. Feel free to critique my prof.  | |
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