| Male profile review
Posted: 3/2/2008 5:04:16 PM | Please take a moment and read over my profile and answer me two things.
1. What did you like and why?
2. What turned you off and why?
Thank you in advance and help this guy sell himself better! It will be your good deed for the day! | |
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| Male profile review
Posted: 3/2/2008 5:24:52 PM | i thought it was decent. well spoken and u get ur point across with plenty of pics to go with it. maybe a lil less emphasis on ur nerdier tendencies, if u want to change it...but i would keep it the same and go from there! | |
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| Male profile review
Posted: 3/2/2008 5:48:28 PM | hey cyberghost, you are attractive and if I was 20 yrs younger and lived in Iowa it wouldn't matter if your profile said you are an axe murder.(lol).....however I did read it Ithink your ad is honest and I think you should be satisfied. Come on you geekettes make him a happy man.  | |
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| Male profile review
Posted: 3/3/2008 6:46:24 PM | | Thank you too you both. I'm not getting any fish to bite so I thought I'd better check my alLURE. :-p | |
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| Male profile review
Posted: 3/3/2008 7:35:26 PM | To start off I’d like to say you have some good structure. You’re clearly confident and comfortable with your geekiness and confidence always wins. I think your profile could use a little bit more fleshing out. Try some more personal anecdotes such as what musicals and plays you preformed in and your favorite parts of performing.
When you go on to describe the kind of woman that you want it would be a great idea to at least take ONE super vague adjective like “great sense of humor” and describe what you mean by that. Like a great sense of humor might be: “A woman who will get all my amusement with the ToTo Toilet and humor my sporadic Luke Skywalker fantasies.” It’s just an example of how you might add life to such a standard adjective like (A good sense of) Humor. It’s all about giving personal accounts of things you do and what you liked about them.
And remember: Stay positive. | |
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| Male profile review
Posted: 3/3/2008 8:37:58 PM | | Thanks for your tips, I added a couple of them to my profile. | |
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