| Touched Within Posted: 9/14/2004 5:33:33 PM | Touched Within
When you come near, I suffocate, you take my breath away... Choking on the words I've found, yet don't know how to say.
Everytime you look at me my heart begins to grin... Don't know what to say except you've touched me deep within.
Fascinated by the way your life resembles mine... Praying for another day so we can share some time.
Opened up and spilled it out-the things you hear from me... Saying things I've never said to anyone, you see.
And here I am, an average guy who's bent on seeing you... And there you are, I don't know why you see the things you do.
Sometimes, I want to pinch myself, ensuring that you're real... My dreams can't even hold a match to how you make me feel!
A hug alone from you's enough to send me in a spin... Don't know what to say except you've touched me deep within.
Copyright ©2004 Michael Andreas Beckham
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| Re: Touched Within Posted: 9/14/2004 5:38:34 PM | | Thanx... I have a few published... I love poetry, it's an awesome way to vent feelings good/bad... MIKE | |
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| Re: Touched Within Posted: 9/15/2004 12:52:45 AM | i love the title and i really like your middle name lol
you should keep up the good work
you both write really nice poetry
welcome to the korner ...
z | |
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| Re: Touched Within Posted: 10/6/2004 11:43:42 AM | you know, i sit here and read all of these excellent poems written by you and it just takes my breath away!!!bravo!  | |
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| Re: Touched Within Posted: 10/7/2004 10:35:15 AM | | very good indeep...you have a knack for expressing emotions...i'm impressed | |
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| Re: Touched Within Posted: 11/18/2004 7:40:02 AM | IDSN, The feeling and emotion behind your work makes my heart skip a beat with every word I read...never before have i been so profoundly touched by anothers writing...keep it coming please its one of the only reasons i keep coming back to pof.
Christina | |
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| Re: Touched Within Posted: 11/18/2004 10:12:54 AM | Hey yet another one that pulls on my heart strings. You write so well and I love to read your poems. Keep it up!! | |
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