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 indeepshitnow

Joined: 2/15/2004
Msg: 1
Touched Within
Posted: 9/14/2004 5:33:33 PM
Touched Within


When you come near, I suffocate, you take my breath away...
Choking on the words I've found, yet don't know how to say.

Everytime you look at me my heart begins to grin...
Don't know what to say except you've touched me deep within.

Fascinated by the way your life resembles mine...
Praying for another day so we can share some time.

Opened up and spilled it out-the things you hear from me...
Saying things I've never said to anyone, you see.

And here I am, an average guy who's bent on seeing you...
And there you are, I don't know why you see the things you do.

Sometimes, I want to pinch myself, ensuring that you're real...
My dreams can't even hold a match to how you make me feel!

A hug alone from you's enough to send me in a spin...
Don't know what to say except you've touched me deep within.



Copyright ©2004 Michael Andreas Beckham
 Gordo59

Joined: 9/13/2004
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Re: Touched Within
Posted: 9/14/2004 5:35:30 PM
THIS IS GOOD....
 indeepshitnow

Joined: 2/15/2004
Msg: 3
Re: Touched Within
Posted: 9/14/2004 5:38:34 PM
Thanx... I have a few published... I love poetry, it's an awesome way to vent feelings good/bad... MIKE
 Spirited_Wolf

Joined: 8/21/2004
Msg: 4
Re: Touched Within
Posted: 9/15/2004 12:52:45 AM
i love the title and i really like your middle name lol

you should keep up the good work

you both write really nice poetry

welcome to the korner ...

z
 sweetredhead23

Joined: 9/27/2004
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Re: Touched Within
Posted: 10/6/2004 11:43:42 AM
you know, i sit here and read all of these excellent poems written by you and it just takes my breath away!!!bravo!
 indeepshitnow

Joined: 2/15/2004
Msg: 6
Re: Touched Within
Posted: 10/6/2004 4:37:38 PM
THANX SWEET! ;)
 xchuck

Joined: 6/11/2004
Msg: 7
Re: Touched Within
Posted: 10/7/2004 10:35:15 AM
very good indeep...you have a knack for expressing emotions...i'm impressed
 indeepshitnow

Joined: 2/15/2004
Msg: 8
Re: Touched Within
Posted: 10/7/2004 1:44:32 PM
thanx alot chuck...
 sweetredhead23

Joined: 9/27/2004
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Re: Touched Within
Posted: 11/18/2004 7:40:02 AM
IDSN,
The feeling and emotion behind your work makes my heart skip a beat with every word I read...never before have i been so profoundly touched by anothers writing...keep it coming please its one of the only reasons i keep coming back to pof.

Christina
 lickinglizard2280

Joined: 10/14/2004
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Re: Touched Within
Posted: 11/18/2004 10:12:54 AM
Hey yet another one that pulls on my heart strings. You write so well and I love to read your poems. Keep it up!!
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