| Seeking a review from men and women
Posted: 3/18/2008 4:44:41 PM | Hello,
After fumbling around here for a while with different profiles and messages, I am now seeking some opinions on my profile. Let me have it, I can take it.
I have messaged hundreds of women and received less than a handful of responses. Obviously something is not right in what I am presenting, whether it is the photo, the body text, or the subject line. Any insight would be welcome.
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| Seeking a review from men and women
Posted: 3/18/2008 5:22:47 PM | Mr Dali
Well... hon, this is how I see it... sounds like a million other profiles. Hey! it seems as if you are smarter than the average Joe and creative too, so knock it up a notch or two, let that shine through. Lets see some action verbs, a few well choosen adjectives, a few picture of your manly face and body (leave the shirt on however) and list a job in the appropriate place, gals your age what to know if you even HAVE a job... women are funny that way. There is a whole big section that gives plenty of advice on how to write a good profile, take notes , write a new one and give it a test drive - go get 'em tiger!
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