| what do you guys think Posted: 3/30/2008 2:37:05 PM | hey guys let me know of what u think of my profile. i think its pretty straight forward. any comments would be greatly appreciated. plastic surgery is out of the question though! 
bah this is just filler................................................................ | |
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| what do you guys think Posted: 3/30/2008 6:41:11 PM | Well, I don't think a person who says all this in his "about me:"
I cant stand people who always **** and complain about everything around them... There is enough negativity in the world, yours is not needed...I am tired of the games and the drama... -- should have as a headline, "You're all freaks and snobs." Perhaps you're being ironic. Perhaps not. Either way, it does not engage the reader or make her wish to know you better.
Follow your own advice and remove ALL the negative statements from your profile and reword them as positives. For instance, instead of saying how dumb and immature high school girls are, say instead how you prefer women college-age or older.
I would also advise you change what you're looking for from "friends" to "dating." In my experience, most women are on this dating site to date; we already have our own friends. | |
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| what do you guys think Posted: 3/30/2008 8:28:42 PM | To be honest your profile really sucks. You talk about negativity in the world ,yet in your profile is all i read. Now don't get me wrong , as i am not perfect myself, but then who is perfect. You have to be more flexible in what you seek in a partner. As for you saying you seen it all and know it all, at 21, just finished uni, lolol you haven't even begun to experience life, So just practice what you preach. You ideal first date, cut it down, to much yak yak, you are boring the ladies.Oh yes in the pics you have two of ladies, ditch em, women see them as competition, or see you as a player not the type who wants to settle down with. You asked to be reviewed, it can be harsh but it is how people perceive you through your text via your profile. | |
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| what do you guys think Posted: 3/31/2008 3:52:39 AM | Hi HeritageMale, Want my honest opinion? Maybe as Shelly recommends, take some of the negative stuff out.
As I see it my young friend, your profile is perfect! You seem like a wonderful young man who is going places in life. Your thoughts are very mature, and your pics, well they speak of a kind, young gentleman. Especially the last picture of you holding your baby brother is enough to melt any woman's heart.
I have a 23 yo daughter, and I wouldn't mind at all if she got to know someone as nice as you. Keep the faith kid. She's out there. You have what it takes! Change nothing else and be the best you can be!
Greg | |
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| what do you guys think Posted: 3/31/2008 4:33:10 AM | What she said. All good advice. What you wrote sounds angry & bitter. good luck | |
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