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Posted: 3/30/2008 2:42:36 PM | DISCLAIMER: I am not a professional, just someone that wants to help !
If you would like for me to take a look at your profile and give you some suggestions, I would love to help out !! Most of the people on here giving advice are much younger, so maybe someone a little bit older may give you a different opinion !! Give me a chance if you like !! | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 3:08:20 PM | Oh go on then, I'll be your first to break your cherry... although, I am only here for Talk/Email, so am not really looking to attract anyone.
Besides, have had enough mails all saying I should put mine up seeing as I reviewed so many | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 4:03:18 PM | Cranky Amy,
Well I am not quite sure what to say about your profile lol.. it is very Interesting, witty, funny, and scary. lol..Since you are only looking for talk/email buddies, then I don' t think it needs any changes. I am sure that you get a lot fo different type's of replys. Good Luck with the new babbies, i'm sure you will have your hands full.
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Posted: 3/30/2008 4:11:21 PM | Billy2heads
Well yours is gonna be tough. lol.. First off I would get rid of all your pics and start over again. Have someone take some nice pics of you to post on your profile. You seem like an attractive man, but the pics you have posted are not good ones.
You also need to type some info in about yourself and your interest. Tell the ladies all about youself and what you are looking for in a partner. Show off your personality and add in some humor. Also let your prospects know what you are looking for in a lady. What your likes and dislikes are. Give them something to think about !!! The angel is nice, but come on now that is a little corney, ("I'm an angel " ) . I have faith that you can do better than that !!! Spend a few minutes and put some words in there. I know it will pay off. Sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 4:33:46 PM | Trevalicious
Ok here we go !! Ready !! First off you are a very nice looking guy. But most of your pics don't show that off. I would get rid of the 2nd and 3rd pic and the black and white one. They just don't do you justice. I really love the last pic and would make that your main pic for now. I would get a few more pics of yourself with one containing your whole body. Ladies like to see the whole package you know !!!
I would put more information in your profile about yourself, Like more of your interest's, and just what it is you are looking for in a lady. You don't have to say you are 29, they can see that in your main info of your profile. I would also remove the lines about the proper english and spelling abilities. You can find that out in their profile when they contact you. If you don't like the way they speak or spell, just delete !! It just comes across in your profile as being a little demanding, and may scare some ladies away.!!
Put in some info on just what type of lady you are looking for. What you look for in a relationship. What you have to offer a relationship. Make the info about you and about her in paragraphs, not seperated lines, it just looks better.
Well I hope this helps you out, and the changes will spark up a lot of interest for you. I don't think the ladies know what they are missing out on with you, so let them know !!
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Posted: 3/30/2008 4:42:45 PM | I feel like I should go stand in the corner or something. ha ha. Thanks for your input. You ever stop to consider I might just be a real Angel?.
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Posted: 3/30/2008 4:51:47 PM | Pa_Born
ok here we go !! You need a lot of work sweetie !!!! First off your pics are not good ones. The first one looks like you are scared to death. The second is ok, but not great. The last one is to goofy. I would start all over and get you some new pics. Some that show off your personality. Some that you don't look so stiff and rigid in. Have one of your fiends take some pics of you outside, have some fun with it, show some personality. You are a cute guy, but none of your pics show that off.
First you need to put in what your profession is, don't leave people guessing or thinking you are already keeping secrets. Then you need to remove all that you have typed and start over with it. Type in a nice Paragraph all about you and your interest's. What you enjoy doing for fun, and what you are looking for in a relationship. Add in a little humor, ladies like that. I would also change that you are looking for just someone to hang out with. Any lady that is looking for love will not respond to you. If you are looking for a relationship then you need to put that.
Then type in a nice paragraph about the type of girl you are looking for. Don't put that you are not looking for any specific type of lady, that sounds like you will settle for anybody that pays you a little attention. Spell it out, if you like a romantic, fun, passionate, down to earth lady, then put that, but put something !! make it sound like you are a man that knows who he is and what he wants in life and in a partner. I think if you get some better pics and put some more info in about yourself and what you want in life you will start getting some action on your profile.
I hope i have helped you out, and good luck with it !!!
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Posted: 3/30/2008 4:53:47 PM | Hi stephen,
Sorry I didn't mean to make you feel like you were being punished or anything.. I do believe in angels and who knows maybe you are one !!!! But you did ask my opinion...
(((Smile))) Sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 5:10:13 PM | Vadim321go,
Wow I am almost speechless. First off I love all your pics. They are great and nice and clear. They show off all the different sides of you and your personality.
Now as for your heading "you're all freaks and snobs", that is really negative and a huge turnoff. I would immediately click off your profile and not read on once I saw that. Also all that you wrote about yourself was very negative and demanding to me. You mostly talked about yourself only and not what you are looking for in a girl or a relationship except that she must be over 18.
I can feel what you are saying in your profile, but the profile is not a good place to speak it. I think it will turn against you. I love the date part and what you wrote. It was nice and cute with a little humor in it. If you could just incorporate that part of you into the body of your profile, you would have it made. You are a cutie pie and I think you deserve a nice sweet lady, but i'm afraid you won't get a lady like that, with the way your profile reads right now. Personally It scares me lol.. Re-do it and make it nicer and more like the date info. Then you will not be able to keep up with your emails I bet. I hope my opinion helps you out. Good luck. Sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 5:11:09 PM | Hey absolutely nothing to appologise for. Am on here for laughs and you made me smile so it's OK. Think me and the other boys should get together and go to photography classes?.
Love & Kisses
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Posted: 3/30/2008 5:20:24 PM | Stephen.
Lol you are to funny. Well when I first put my profile on here my pics were really bad and terribel and my profile was bad also. I had mine reviewed a few times and they were really honest like I am trying to be. I got a little offended but they were right and I made a lot of changes. It worked and I have a olot fo mail and have met some really nice people on here. It paid off for me, so I thought if I could help someone else out like I was helped that that would make me feel great. I'm trying to not be to harsh but still honest. I read a lot of these ""profile reviewers" and they are just all sweet and dont really give the people any HONEST advice, so I thought I would give it a try. Hope I don't offend anybody !!!!  | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 5:42:41 PM | Hi Sherrita,
What a sweet lady, I just want to reach out and hug you !!! Ok, you are the typical profile on here.
I like your pic, but you need some more of them. Have someone take a few more pics of you, and have some fun with it. Show off that great personality that I can tell you have tucked away in there. Put on different outfits with each pic. Go outside and take some pics. Take a full body pic, guys like to see the whole you. It just makes them feel secure or something..lol
I think you should change you email age requirements to maybe 30 to 45. Now you are 33, so if some sexy 32 year old man wanted to email you he couldn't !!!! yikes.. Now I know you would love to meet that sexy 32 year old man. Think about it, I think it would be a good move to drop the first number a few years.
Next, you need to expand on telling us all about you. So just what are all the fun things you like to do ? spell them out one by one. Are you romantic ? passionate ? great cook ? who are you sherrita ? sell yourself to these men !!! What are you looking for in a man and a relationship ? Do all this in a nice paragraph.
Then do the same, tell us what kind of man are you looking for ? what qualities should he have ? what do you admire in a man ?? let them know you are a woman that knows who she is and just what she wants for herself and for her children !!!
Also in your personal info, put in what your profession is. Dont put in the written part of your profile that you are 33 and divorced, they will see that in your personal information. Well I hope I helped you out. I think with a few more pics and some more info on your profile, you will be doing good. !!! Good Luck and let me lnow how it works out for you !!! sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 6:36:15 PM | To Have,
Okay here we go, ready !!! Lets start from the top of the profile !!! lol..
I would change your subject line "so whats your story ? " you sound a little like a counselor !!! think of something a little catchy . Next you should put what your profession is not the little comment you have in place of it. You are 40 right ? lol...
Your first line states that you have photos !!! So where are they ? why aren't they on your profile ??? come on now !!!! You will get better responces with pics and we all know that !!! lol...
Ok, you have a HUGE list of interest I must say. I got tired just reading ALL of them !!! I would suggest to shorten your list a little. It is a little overwhelming I must say .. Now is the beginning of your profile a poem or something ? Whatever it is I would remove it all. The rest seems to be you telling us everything that you AREN'T and all that you don't have !!! I would remove all that and replace it with what you have put in your "First date " section: The following is what you wrote ::
"""I like Cooking together, exploring, laughing, doing silly stuff, listening to music, concerts,art, driving,looking at wild things or wild places, swinging from vines, skipping stones,reading to each other,telling naughty jokes,visiting an old relative,making out in the park, flying a kite,catching a fish, choosing a puppy, dancing like the Peanuts in a Charlie Brown Christmas, looking at old photos, baking bread, riding a sled, or groovin' to the good old grateful dead......"""
This is great and should be in the place where you describe yourself.
Now in the section where you describe what you are looking for sounds more like a documentary on women that anything else. !! lol.. I'm sorry but it does !!! I think you should just write out what kind of woman you are looking for, what qualities, what interest and the like. Should she be romantic ? passionate ? good cook ? what are you looking for >? If you don't tell us then we will never know !!!
Well I hope I have helped you some or a lot, lol.. Good luck with the profile and the fishing. Sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 7:02:39 PM | Hi Sweet Vic,
WOW. My heart go out to you my love. I will try to be gentle here. lol..First off I LOVE you profile Line ""Holy Smokes, you gotta see this !!"" I LOVE IT ......
The first problem you are probably having is the fact that you are ""Seperated""... Thats a dirty word in the womens dating book !!!!! I read all through your profile and the impression it gave me was you were looking for someone to fix you. Someone to help you through all your pain. Someone to make it all better. Your words were so full of pain it broke my heart.
The whole profile told of all you have done wrong and all that is wrong with you, right down to the captions over your pics !!! The situation you are in right now is very scary for a new lady to walk right into.
I think you should wipe out all that you have written in your profile and start over. You can simply explain that you are seperated but the divorce is almost final and will be soon. That is all I would say. the less the better. Then I would tell us positive things about yourself, like what are your interest's ? what do you do for fun ? Don't tell us anyting negative, or anything you can no longer do. If you want to talk about your weight then do so in a positive manner. Like you are starting an exercise program and working on improving yourself for yourself. Then tell us what you are looking for in a lady and a relationship. What kind of lady are you searching for ? what qualities should she have ? I would remove the captions you have over your pics and either leave it blank or put something funny.
Also maybe a couple more pics showing your personality. It is always a good idea to have at least 1 full body pic of yourself. My love I hope I have helped you. I am so sorry for the pain you are going thru, but hopefully this to shall pass soon.
My best suggestion I can give you is be POSITIVE not negative about you, your situation, and what you are looking for. Ohterwise you will scare everyone away !!
Good Luck !!! Sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 7:17:44 PM | BennyLeaf,
I think you have a really good start to a good profile. I would maybe put a few more pics in. Maybe a few outdoor shots showing off your sweet personality. hey maybe you can find a horse to get on a show us you are prince charming !!! lol just kidding..lol
It is is good idea to have a least 1 full body pic in your profile. !!!
I would suggest to take out all you wrote in the first date column and just put something short about what you would like to do on the first date. Most women like to make the choice anyway !! lol..
In your section where you describe yourself and what you are looking for needs a little tweaking. I would write a nice paragraph about who you are. what do you do for fun ? what are you best qualities ? what can you offer a relationship ?
Then another paragraph about the lady you are seeking. What qualities should she have ? what type of personality should she have. What you need from a woman in a relationship. Humor is always a good thing !!!!
I think with these few tweaks and a few more pics you will be on your way to a lot of emails . Hope my suggestions help. By the way beautiful grandbaby !!!! Sweet | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 7:20:31 PM | | Thank you so much!. i change the "about me a little bit. i guess i can go into what i do on a regular. i just don't want to "scare" anyone off, lol. I am looking for some pics to scan. | |
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Posted: 3/30/2008 7:27:09 PM | Sheritta
you are very welcome. I hope that something i told you will help you out. When Mr right comes along there will be nothing that can scare him away !!!! It is so hard in this day and age to meet a really nice guy. We can only hope and pray that we will find our man. I have met a few men off here but the trouble I have ran into is that all of the men I have met ended up having 10 to 20 year old pics on here. I believe that if you are dishonest about that you will be dishonest about anything. Honesty is very important to me. Well add a whole bunch of good stuff for them to think about. Make them feel that you are the best catch in this big pond of fish !!!!!! You can do it !!!! debi | |
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