| Ladies wanted for profile input!
Posted: 4/2/2008 6:55:59 PM | I re did my profile top to bottom including pics, with the help of a couple female friends, a few days ago.
i still don't seem to be having any luck, so im looking for feedback, both good and bad.
im beginning to think im one notch below Shrek at this point!
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| Ladies wanted for profile input!
Posted: 4/2/2008 7:16:35 PM | Hi js,
Well.... for starters your profile is giving a mixed message. You said you have started a diet and workout regime and want to be healthier... and yet your profiles says "beer , beer, beer all over it!". It is your main identity here. Honestly, while you may love a great beer, I really think you need to downplay that. I would definately remove the bar, beer and hat pic.... it doesnt do you any favors. And I would only mention that you like a great imported beer or enjoy beer tasting just one time.....the whole profile. And instead of saying you have started a diet.... talk about how you are making lifestyle changes..... eating healthier and exercising. Tell the women that you would love someone to join you in some of those healthy activities.
Finally, you might introduce some humor and start out with a catchier opening line.
Hope.. that didnt sound too harsh here, but really trying to be honest. Wish you all the best, js!!
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| Ladies wanted for profile input!
Posted: 4/3/2008 12:37:20 PM | js4ltr...I just read your profile, I see that you switched a few things. Great idea taking advice from msg. #2. It's alot clearer!
Good luck to you... | |
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