| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/5/2008 8:57:19 AM | | It is funny because I am a writer and can express myself well when I meet people, but writing/putting together this profile was pretty difficult. Any tips/suggestions/ideas would be appreciated! And because this post hasto be 200 letters long (as I was just informed by the pop-up box), I am including this sentence to put me over the top!!! | |
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| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/5/2008 11:06:17 AM | Sounds like you have a very interesting life and I bet you have many amazing moments to tell. Tell some of them as if you were talking to that special person. You have an advantage over many others, use it!
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| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/5/2008 11:13:11 AM | Your main pic should be of just you -- not you with Tibetan monks or giant tortoises or gandmothers or anything else. Just you.
Your profile sounds more like a bio about your experiences in the world. While interesting, it tells us only about some interesting things you've done, not who you are. I'd consider adding or changing your "about me" to reflect more about your unique personality.
While you're at it, you could add some lines about what kind of perosn you'd like to meet. Feel free to be as creative as you like. | |
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| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/5/2008 12:52:09 PM | Shirley, I just added a pic of me and my goddaughter on the bottom shots. I'll probably make that the main pic -- I don't seem to have any where I am the only one in the pic and there is nothing else interesting going on in the background. Truth is, I don't like having pictures taken of me.
Oh, and I added a bit of what I am looking for. Thanks to you both for the feedback.  | |
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| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/6/2008 2:36:56 PM | | Personally, I think your profile is great, you sound like a very interesting person, and the pictures are interesting as well, they give a little more info about who you are then the standard shirtless pic, or the pic with dead fish or sportscar.... | |
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| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/6/2008 2:53:29 PM | | Your profile seems really good to me. The only thing I would suggest is perhaps changing your main photo. Personally I like a more close up shot for the main profile pic. Sometimes if I get a message from a guy and I can't see their face clearly I won't bother looking at the profile...just my opinion...Good Luck!! | |
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| Yes -- I, too, am asking for feedback on my profile please:) Posted: 4/7/2008 4:25:43 PM | | Ok sorry travelingdave this is not a reply to your message, but a request for somebody to please look at my profile and it dose say in the rules if the topic all ready exciseces dont make a new one,.......anyway back to why im posting i would be very greatful if somebody dont care if your male or female would please look at my profile and tell me what im puttin wrong if anything I personaly cant see anything wrong with it, then again they do say you can look at your own profile a million times and not see anything wrong but as soon as somebody say's well i would change that oh and put this it jumps out at you...yes i get lots of people looking but nobody messaging and those that i do message ok they read my message and look at my profile but thats about it :(. Dont want to sound like the wow is me type of guy but it dose get you down when you sit here for over an hour trying to write a message that is fun and catch and will make them want to reply, even more disheartening when you message somebody and they dont even look at your profile and just delete your message...anyway im starting to drone so bye for now | |
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