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Posted: 4/26/2008 5:40:16 PM | | So I seem to be getting messages but not from the 'right' people. A lot of one liners and people who are obviously the opposite of what i'm looking for (or even what they say they are in their profile). I basically want the typical nice guy that I can grow into a healthy relationship with. Do you see anything 'wrong' with my profile? | |
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Posted: 4/26/2008 5:56:42 PM | Very good looking young lady, expect that stuff to always happen. They are not reading your profile at all, just messaging based on the pictures.
"p.s. if you want a reply, try and make it more than a generic one liner" - Anyone sending you one liners will have not actually gotten to that part of the profile. No point in having that there.
As for the profile, seems alright. A little light on the ground, may want to include a little more information, this will help people who do actually want to get to know you write a more meaningful email. Space it out a tad too- just an extra line break in there will tidy that up as it is. | |
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Posted: 4/26/2008 8:19:04 PM | Well you do let your character shine through and I can see you are outspoken, which I like.
Do space it out like Crazytimes advised and it will make it easier to read.
All the best in the "Big Pond"  | |
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Posted: 4/26/2008 8:30:15 PM | | I think you have posted a well written and succinct profile that over time (unfortunately) will most certainly garner the results you desire. Honestly, I wouldn't change a thing. Best of success and good cheer always! | |
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Posted: 7/20/2008 8:06:36 PM | | I like the profile. Pic's are a little dark they distracted me from your profile. All I wanted to look at was the hot lady in the pic. You are introverted like myself. I have not seen too many introverted people through out my life. | |
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