| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 5/3/2008 7:51:22 AM | Hello everyone! I'm pretty new to this and I'd like a profile review please.
I would really appreciate some specific suggestions. Why would or wouldn't you message me? What do you like, what do you hate?
I'd appreciate any ideas to make the profile more attractive. You know the drill...
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 5/3/2008 10:48:32 AM | Of all the people asking for a profile review I chose yours to look at. Why? The screenname. "Wheekers"? What's that?
Luckily, you explained it in your headline, "Guinea pigs go WHEEK." Indeed they do. This is so very true, and funny, too. A little weird, but funny.
Couple of things I wanna say:
1) Body type looks more like "thin" than "average" to me.
2) Man looking for "hang out" on "dating" site find little luck and many lonely night. I have no idea why I sound like a fortune cookie here, but it's true. Consider changing it to "dating." Girls here on dating site to find man to date.
3) "Separated" man might want to say when divorce is final. Some people leery of separated, thinking man might reconcile with ex. Show them it ain't so.
Forgot what you said on "first date" idea. Will go check.
Edit: Now I know why I forgot what you said in your "first date" idea. What you need here isn't dithering about making people comfortable, etc., it's a solid idea of something you think sounds fun. Use a little creativity and make it memorable.
Consider easing your age restrictions to at least 5 years older than yourself, if you'll go 7 years younger. | |
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Joined: 2/13/2008
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 5/3/2008 1:07:29 PM | Thanks for the tips and words of encouragment.
I've made some changes to my profile and I guess we'll let it go and see what comes back.
Take care! | |
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 5/3/2008 3:18:48 PM | I know you're lots younger...but feller...ya wore me out !
But I guess that's good. You seem to do lots of stuff, have stable interests that will last you a lifetime...I hope.
Do you flibbity jibbit from one activity to another? If you do, that's good.
Alot of people who are starting all over, do that. But that's what I see. A busy, busy man !
But all in all a great profile.. Good Luck ! | |
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 6/21/2008 8:33:03 PM | So it's been a few months and I've changed my profile up a bit. Hopefully for the better.
I'd love to have my profile reviewed and any suggestions or criticism would be appreciated as usual.
Thanks all! | |
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 6/21/2008 8:35:24 PM | Oh darn, I forgot to mention something about the seperation part. As in should I include the bit about being separated? I know there's a stigma surrounding separated people. My Ex and I will never get back together. Sure we split without any drama and while the reasons for our split may seem inconsequential, it's definitely over. Done deal. I’m not to sure if this adding this part to my profile makes me sound a bit desperate.
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 6/22/2008 3:21:33 PM |
I’m very loyal, somewhat humorous (I'm no comedian, but I can certainly make you laugh), honest, and maybe just a wee bit on the shy side. Ok, maybe a schmidge over the wee side, but not to the point where I'm frozen like a deer caught in headlights. Easy going and relaxed is another one of my traits. It takes quite a bit too really get me all upset and even then I’m calm and level headed about resolving the situation.
Easy going AND relaxed = TWO not "another one of my traites" Check the spelling on traites, I think I spelled it correctly?
So what am I looking for? First of all I'm looking for a woman that is fun to hang out with. No brainer there…
No need for no brainers here. DELETE
I also have to mention that I am currently separated from my ex. I wanted to be forthright and upfront about that right now.
She is NOT your ex if you are seperated.
First DateIf your itching to hook up over a coffee, I’m sorry, but I may have some issues with that. Problem is that I don’t drink coffee as I still haven’t mastered the whole drinking a hot beverage thing without burning one’s tongue.
This is negative and pointless,DELETE
Best wishes
OFCB | |
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| Asking for some advice on my profile.
Posted: 6/23/2008 4:41:29 AM | Who is Abbie? You could clarify in your caption.
Speaking of photos, you are wearing a pleasant expression throughout, but I wouldn't call it a smile (except for the Abbie interaction). Maybe lose the bottle/slippers/holiday shot and include a happy head shot instead.
What is the "grouse grind," or is that something regional/local that your potential fishies will understand?
HTH | |
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