| Profile help?
Posted: 5/7/2008 3:38:55 PM | . .
Hey can you check out my profile,I'm a little new at this so I'm not too sure I am coming across right.Be honest lol does it suck............................................Thanx | |
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| Profile help?
Posted: 5/7/2008 11:17:13 PM | Hi,I'm a fun down-to-earth type of guy,I don't sweat the small stuff and I'm usually spotted with a S#!7 eating grin on my face that would have to be surgically removed because I'm always having a good time!I'm a bit of a jokster when you get to know me and I love a good inside joke...I like humor that's on the spot and "had to be there" kinda stuff!! I'm good at finding the positive side cause Life is good!!I'm all about the laughs..they make the world go round! The people I get along with best enjoy sharing the same qualities :)
I like to get out of the city when I can and I'm happiest when surrounded by the mountains.Just throw the tent in the truck and go!!Nothing like playing a few tunes on my guitar around a campfire with good company after a day of hiking,fishing and venturing around outdoors! I like meeting new people and trying new things.With spring finally here and summer just around the corner there's always something to do.I like to hop on my bike and go for a ride on the trails,I'm into photography though I'm still learning,I like to cook..different food has always been kind of a hobby,I'm into live music and just about any random thing that sounds like fun at the time!!.Travel has been on mind since Mexico and I just got my passport so I'm just itching to see foreign places to meet new faces.There's more to tell so just drop me a line!!
I'm here to make friends,meet new people and see what happens! The kind of girl I'm interested in is independent,comfortable and happy with herself,she also carries a free spirit and a sense of humor...open your mind and your heart will follow!!
take care and keep smilin!
cheers
I have seen much worse,but it needs a little tweeking.
1. You use (or maybe I should say waiste)a whole paragraph telling us how funny you are. The problem is,if you are going to stress funny,then your profile MUST have humor,otherwise you look like a blow hard. So either remove the paragraph,or insert some humor.
2. "There's more to tell so just drop me a line!!" This is counter productive,remove it.
3. The what you are looking for section is not great, (should be more discriptive) but it could work.
4. Your username shows NO CREATIVITY WHATSOEVER, this would be a place to show the ladies your humor.
Best wishes
OFCB | |
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| Profile help?
Posted: 5/8/2008 1:14:39 AM | | Your profile is good enough, above advice is helpful but in my opinion, you don't really need to change a thing. When single and searching profiles I first skim over the profile and don't read everything if there is a lot to write. Look at the pictures. Age, sign etc. And if still interested will go in for the body. From first appearance you look like you have fun in life, and the fact that you're smiling in your pictures is a bonus. Nice job. | |
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| Profile help?
Posted: 5/8/2008 5:56:16 PM | | Thanks for the input!! I'll maybe change it up a little here and there | |
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| Profile help?
Posted: 5/12/2008 7:39:18 AM | | There...that a little better..lol...I keep changing the thing...i think it's getting longer..maybe too long...haha | |
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| Profile help?
Posted: 5/12/2008 7:44:39 AM | | Hey! I really liked it this time around. It reads funny, intelligent, and kind. LOVE the headline, good job on that. I can't think of anything to change, and the pics are really good. Good luck to you . (Oh, and it is not too long, but you shouldn't let it get much longer, imo.) | |
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