| Review my Profile please
Posted: 5/10/2008 3:36:41 PM | My 3 day probabation period is in so now I can post on the forums. Since I'm new here could you please review my profile and let me know what I can change? I've asked a few different members to review it and have changed a few things but would like some more opinions.
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| Review my Profile please
Posted: 5/10/2008 3:54:51 PM | Kurtdogg I know for sure I am not your target audience but after reading your profile I can see the reek of conceit from headline to first date.
Shirtless pictures are a turn off and you will see that in a lot of the forum postings.
The second last picture should be your main picture.
Can you come up with a specific profession other than too many to list?
Girls, Sex, and Working Out come across as a man that likes to love and leave you.
I saw this on the first date of going skinny dipping and sex on the beach. Profile is more deemed for an *Intimate Encounter* than *Dating*.
Good thread to read;
http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts1262627.aspx
This is this spinster's verdict on your profile 
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Posted: 5/10/2008 3:59:32 PM | | Yep, I agree with the spinster. Change the dating to seeking intimate encounter, and you are all set. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 4:31:45 PM |
You've got three, count 'em, THREE mostly-nekkid pics. Technically, the guitar one *is* naked, not 'mostly'.
I agree with the idea of just changing it to 'intimate encounters' and you are set. Either that or M4M... you have an almost twinky appeal in some of those pictures. Probably not the look you were aiming for, but hey, at least the M4M side of the site can enjoy your profile too! | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 4:42:57 PM | Get rid of the half-dressed photos, especially the one with the guitar. We get it...you think you are the hottest man on this site. An exboyfriend of mine once said that a woman who is fully clothed is far more attractive than one who leaves nothing to the imagination. Same holds for you as a young man. The photos in which you are fully clothed are very nice.
Your profile makes you seem very conceited. Conceit only holds a woman's attention for a moment, while caring, humor, intelligence, and respect go a long, long way.
Take out the rambling about wanting a woman to hook up with. Not meaning to preach here, but if I saw that in a Christian man's profile I would move on to the next profile. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 4:45:27 PM | Uncle Crazy - lol yep. You've got to watch how far you take it. It will backfire on you bro! You may have crossed the orientation gap and didn't even notice.
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Posted: 5/10/2008 4:48:42 PM | well youve been on here 4 days and allready your on 4 faves, i once made it to 14 faves - my highest ever fave position in nearly 2 years so your not doing bad on that score.
yeah i too say ditch the shirtless pics.........................too tacky. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 8:37:49 PM | Thanks guys and girls. By a hard man is good to find I don't mean that I can get a boner which I can. It means that my body is hard
As for my shirtless pics, I'm gonna leave them on, but I'll put a fully clothed one as my display picture and I'm not gonna put intimate encounter for what I'm looking for, becasue that wouldn't be true. I'm looking for friendship and then possibly a relationship. As for the skinny dipping and sex on the beach, maybe that would be better suited for a second date, but if everything is going good why not?
Anyways, keep the reviews coming. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 8:52:05 PM | | If you are not willing to at least consider the merit of what the reviewers suggest, why bother asking them? | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 8:59:29 PM | | What are you talking about? I did take into consideration what they said, I changed my profile picture and moved the skinny dipping and sex on the beach to a second date. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:08:46 PM | Yes....you have changed the order of your photos, but have done absolutely nothing to improve the body of your profile.
By the way, the photo with the heading "I'm bored" is a much clearer, nicer one than the one you chose for your main pic.
I still don't think the "sex on the beach" is something you should post for all to see. Why not leave something to be discussed between you and that special woman who catches your eye, or you hers? | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:13:02 PM | | Alright, I'll take out sex on the beach, but should I leave skinny dipping? | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:16:08 PM | Depends on how many quality replies you are hoping to receive.
Good luck in the pond. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:21:46 PM | | Do you think if I got arid of skinny dipping I would get more replies and how about the base of the profile, anything I should change? | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:28:37 PM | Holy man...are you sure you are not looking for an intimate encounter? LMAO at the girl who falls for that drivel: We will go back to my place and crash.
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:31:33 PM | | OP, if you expect to have sex with a woman on the first date -- or even the SECOND -- then you should probably leave it in your profile. Women need to know the way you think so they can decide if they want to go spend an evening f*cking-and-forgetting a slutty guy like you, or spend their time actually getting to KNOW a better man. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:38:20 PM | I want to get to know the girl, but it doesn't mean you can't have sex on the first date. You could spend weeks building up to a date taking on the computer and over the phone. And just because you are on a first date doesnt mean its the first time you've met.
And just because somebody goes back to your place doens't mean you hae to ****! | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:42:46 PM | | Kurt...I don't know about your world, but in mine, going back to someone's place TO SLEEP OVER on the FIRST DATE exponentially increases the odds that some F**CKING is going to happen. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:44:22 PM | It could if everything goes well, but if both parties just wanna settle into bed and cuddle there should be nothing wrong with that.
As for having 4 on my favorites, there was 5 but I deleted one, haha. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 9:46:36 PM | OMG, there is no point in trying it to explain to this guy, let him leave his profile as it is and then he can post a pity thread in the forums when he gets crabs or something worse.
He. Just. Doesn't. Get. It. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 10:02:02 PM | whatever you say hun, I'm not gonna be going home with dirtbags like you anyways. | |
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Posted: 5/10/2008 10:08:02 PM | | LOL! Major. "All reviewers report the lounge, All reviewers report to the lounge. Mission has been aborted. First round is on me!" | |
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