| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 3:09:46 AM | (((( Copied from Haiku #1 )))))
would like to start something new here I searched for it but could not find anything with a haiku game. This game works like first line last line but must be in the form of a haiku. If there is one and I just didn't see it let me know so that we can delete this and I will post on there. For those of you who don't know the rules of first line last line, you have to make your haiku starting with the last line of the haiku above you, and for those of you who don't know what a Haiku is. It consists of five syllables in the first line, seven syllables in the second line, and then back to five syllables in the last line, and I believe it doesn't rhyme either. If I am wrong please correct me and I will post the correct version of a haiku. This doesn't have to be perfect so If we miss a few syllables here or there or add extra ones, I am more concerned with having fun and trying to see what you can come up with from the other persons line above you.
I'm starting this thread in memory of Haiku #1. Don't know why you locked up and died last night but I'm having withdraws!  With that being said ... LET THE GAMES BEGIN!!!! Lucky!
In the sun I see
spots wrinkle my eyes
mother was right.
mother was right
he should not have spent the night
Now I'm hooked for sure
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 3:49:06 AM | Now I'm hooked for sure
Strange things certainly happen
Here we go again
The original First Line Last Line thread locked up too. Just way TOO many posts :)
RIP Haiku I. 444 pages is not a bad effort for a very little used poetry form in most western nations.
Well done all Haiku'ers! | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:10:50 AM | ((( Morn'n Jax Happy Mother's Day to all the Ladies! ))))
RIP Haiku #1
Here we go again
Invitation to all friends
Welcome, come on in ......
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:14:39 AM | welcome come on in
will likely be hit or miss
standing in the door
Good morning....... | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:21:01 AM | ((( Hiya Salty and Montana ... great to see y'all ))))
standing at the door
watching the lightening storm
what will be hit next? | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:28:32 AM | what will be hit next?
not my heart, still too shattered
storms of life and love
good to see you too lucky!! | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:39:05 AM | storms of life and love
throw all thoughts of *us* away
Now, *your* first new day!
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:44:15 AM | Now, *your* first new day
sounds simple , yet so very hard
minute at a time | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:46:42 AM | now "your" first new day
when i start letting you go
unpeeling my heart
unpeeling my heart
its strings were wrapped up in you
no longer lovers | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:48:48 AM | minute at a time
hold you in my heart today
take the pain away
(((( Morn'n eyedream2 ... opppps did I land on ya?)))))) | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:49:21 AM | minute at a time
still feeling your touch, your skin
good bye satin lips
(whew i was sure missing my H fix -- TY TY!!)
DANG y'all to fast 4 me!!! it was a soft landing -- Happy M Day! | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:52:21 AM | no longer lovers
Good Lucky, let the games begin
:I'm "gamey" for you
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:53:13 AM | good bye satin lips
where did Mr mustache go?
Try him on for size ....
((( (((Morn'n EyeGuy .... turns out I wasn't the only one having withdraws ))))))) | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:54:00 AM | i'm gamey for you
after night of torrid love
a shower will help
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 4:58:03 AM | a shower will help
bring it back down to true size
love to watch it shrink!
(((( Get your minds out of the gutter .... ))))) | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:00:01 AM | love to watch it shrink
then rise again like phoenix
light the candles please | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:04:14 AM | light the candles please
as phoenix spreads her new wings
eyes afire with glee
[pokes tongue out at eye] | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:04:24 AM | light the candles please
you knew I was a boy scout
Sleeping bag for two | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:07:16 AM | love to watch it shrink!
What a cold hearted woman...
You think I'm a dink | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:07:31 AM | Afire with new glow ((edited))
sleeping bag for two
snuggle in the warmth | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:07:53 AM | eyes afire with glee
as the two becoming we
quickened breathing starts
(WHICH eye gets the tongue???) | |
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:10:04 AM | you think I'm a dink?
OMG!! You crack me up!
Shrink=Satisfied!!
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:13:37 AM | Shrink = Satisfied
loving my psychiatrist
passion take me home
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:16:28 AM | Shrink=Satisfied!!
Tis my "B-Day today girl
You Be sweet to me
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| Haiku Game #2
Posted: 5/11/2008 5:18:40 AM | be sweet to me
it will get you much further
towards your pleasures
(happy EYE day -- XO!!) And Happy Pentecost!!!!
Bye all !
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