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 snowbunniesweetie

Joined: 5/4/2008
Msg: 1
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Posted: 5/11/2008 7:40:52 PM
Hey, if anyone feels like taking a look at my profile and giving me advice what i should include or what i should leave out, also picture feedback would be good. At first I just had the first photo up, then I uploaded the others and I'm not sure if I like them. Thanks
 Havoc1970

Joined: 3/23/2008
Msg: 2
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Posted: 5/11/2008 8:03:25 PM
Hey snowbunnie,

Not bad at all. The fourth pic I'm not sure about. What's going in it? Who are they? Your third pic would be perfect for your main photo.

Good interests. The "about me" is pretty good. You could expand just a little more on who you are.



I would like to meet someone that I am attracted to.




I am looking for chemistry and someone that I'm compatible with.


These two lines can be thrown out. Everybody wants to be attracted to the person they meet. Without chemistry and compatibilty what's the point, right? No need to state the obvious. Just expand on what kind of guy you're looking for.

Hope this helps get you in the right direction. Good luck.

Havoc
 LolaMaxwell

Joined: 9/4/2006
Msg: 3
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Posted: 5/11/2008 8:28:41 PM

I like to be outside, but I don't like snow too much.

Then why did you call yourself "Snow Bunnie Sweetie"?

Your profile is fine for someone your age. It's a little cotton-candy sweet for me, but I'm old now. People your age don't worry about diabetes.

More pics of your cute self, and you should do just fine.
 OldFashndMntMan

Joined: 6/20/2006
Msg: 4
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Posted: 5/11/2008 8:48:26 PM
About me: I am a freshman at LSC in Vermont. I was a tv production major and now I'm sports management but I'm looking to transfer schools and go into hospitality management. I like to cook. I love animals. I like to be outside, but I don't like snow too much. I like the water, I like to dance and I love cheerleading. I am pretty laid-back. I listen to a lot of music, my favorite band is the ramones, but I also like the white stripes, barenaked ladies, areosmith, dropkick murphys, ben harper. I go to lots of concerts. My favorite show is probably top chef. My favorite movie would probably be rock n roll high school, fight club, blues brothers or one of the teen 80s movies.

I would like to meet someone that I am attracted to. I don't really have a "type", but he would need to be fun. I am looking for chemistry and someone that I'm compatible with. I can be quiet at times, so he would have to okay with that. Some distance is okay, I would like to meet someone that lives in the New England area. Between the ages of 18 and 24ish.

Send me a message or an IM through POF if im online.
Hi Bunnie,Hovoc was right, it is totally unneccessary to list these. "I would like to meet someone that I am attracted to. I don't really have a "type", but he would need to be fun. I am looking for chemistry and someone that I'm compatible with." Delete

" Between the ages of 18 and 24ish." this can be put in your "settings". DELETE


Now what you need to do is think of at least 2 unique words that describe who you are looking for. Some examples are: adventurous,geeky,intovert,extrovert,passionate,aggressive,timid,etc.
Then think of two words that describe you, to give the men a picture into who you are.
You the need to think of something interesting for a first date,so you can reel them in.

Best wishes

OFCB
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