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Posted: 5/11/2008 8:35:09 PM | | can someone help me review my profile and pics and tell me what i need in order atrack people, im a forner so my English is good but not to good, help needed asap, i from poland and any help i can get from ladies as well gelteman would be great, i hope u all have a good day and wish u all luck or anything | |
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Posted: 5/11/2008 8:52:57 PM | For someone looking for *dating* I found this statement quite shocking and jumping the gun.
If it happens that im finding who is and will steal my heart , im willing to move and relocate for anyone, as long u and me be together for long time.
That statement just might scare a girl away. It makes you come across as *desperate*. In this kind of media good grammar and spelling do count.
I will send you this thread to help you put together a profile.
http://forums.plentyoffish.com/datingPosts1262627.aspx
Have you got a friend to help you?
Great advice found here in that thread.
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Posted: 5/11/2008 9:02:28 PM | Spell out "you" and not "u." In ANY language, the space goes AFTER the comma or period, and not BEFORE.
I didn't think the pic you chose for your main is your best. Go with the puppy pic. Women love puppies.
I agree with Ms. Val that you shouldn't say you're willing to relocate right off the bat.
Do check out the link she mentioned -- it is very helpful. | |
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Posted: 5/11/2008 9:18:36 PM | I am confused. First of all, German and Polish? French, I could see, being in Canada with their rather large French-speaking population. But, would anyone really look at German and Polish as anything more than a proof that you indeed know several languages?
And second, you are 26 and according to your profile you got to Canada 12 years ago. Unless you really don't intend to assimilate, that is more than enough time to have fluent command of English, especially since you know several languages and so presumably have some talent for linguistics. To me, that sends a warning signal.
In that tack, I also would not mention being single for last 10 years. I presume you were not married at 16, so that indicates that from 16 to 26 you had no serious relationships. That might be something that needs to be discussed in email or in person - but in a profile, I think this sends warning signals, and I would not mention it. Your other relationships, if any, are not a good subject for profile anyway. | |
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Posted: 5/11/2008 10:54:37 PM | | somebody please look over my profile. I'm not doing something write cause I get no mails or anything. I know i'm a good guy and everything but really what is happening? Need feedback. | |
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