The 4th pic. is better as main, IMO.
The head line would work better for you if you didn't use random capitalisation throughout, with 2 and 3 word sentences.
These can be listed in interests:
I can read, write and play music, massage, wooden furniture, cooking.
bbqs, road trips
watching all sports and am playing cricket
Now that you've gotten rid of the fluff in the about me section, try putting in the things that belong there. Who are you as a man, what are your strengths? Also make a genuine effort to describe the type of lady you're searching for. Two or three paragraphs work well here.
The first date will not generate any real interest. Adjust that so it does.
Good luck
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