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Posted: 5/12/2008 12:20:26 AM | | First time I have ever posted, can you guys pls give me some helpful advice on my profile, I'm really a great person, was married 25yrs, kinda new at dating, would like to find a great guy, thank you. | |
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Posted: 5/12/2008 12:37:06 AM | Lose the headline. It has been used to death, and should remain buried.
You say a few extra pounds as body type, you should have at least one full on body shot to represent what you look like. Also you can have up to 8 photos, so get some more posted. The one you have as main is not flattering to you. IMO
List more interests, these do show up is searches.
The about me section needs to be re~done. I get that you are proud of yourself for removing yourself from a not so delightful marriage, but this whole thing you wrote screams at me with negativity. Try to find other ways of defining who you are as a person, not what made you that way. Also take a realistic look at the type of man you're searching for.
Your prince may very well be out there, but honey you're not going to find him with what you wrote down. It's going to give him the same impression it just gave me... she's too much work.
JMHO
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Posted: 5/12/2008 1:30:24 AM | Hi Misshonesty, wow, that is a real eyeful. I agree with the first responent,it is very unliky that you will catch your fishy with this profile. Do you have any idea how many times you used the word "I"? Near as I could figure 40,then on top of it, you used the word "I'm" an aditional 17 times. I think you will agree, this is not the image you would like to give. Let's do this one a little differently than a typical "rewrite". You condense your profile down to referencing the word "I" or I'm no more than 20 times. It is bound to remove a lot of the "junk" I really don't care to deal with.
You did a good job of describing yourself, but a poor job of describing who you are looking for. You need the think of two words to describe BOTH you,and who you are looking for.If you have an questions, just ask.
It is VERY important to stay positive, NOT negative.
best wishes
OFCB | |
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Posted: 5/12/2008 4:36:12 AM | | OK, Don't mean to be a ass here. I agree with all that has been told to you so far. But please get rid of that picture and post a new one. I,m sorry but you have that deer in the head lights look going on. It's just not flattering to you. | |
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Posted: 5/12/2008 7:46:30 AM | | I know your right my granddaughter had me put on her play hat one day and since them she wanted me to post that picture, but when I get several more response's I will change my profile/picture, thank you for your honesty, | |
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