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Posted: 5/12/2008 8:18:41 PM | I seem to be getting people to view my profile, but I got no messages or anything. What am I doing wrong? Please review my profile and I need feedback if I want this to go somewhere. Am I ugly or something ...  | |
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Posted: 5/12/2008 8:53:53 PM | Hi Eric,your grammar and punctution are good. But there is not enough information about you. Tell the ladies what makes you tick! There has to be much more to you than you have revealed here. Are you an introvert? passionate? adventurous? intense?
geeky? Tell them who you are! Then use some descriptive words to tell them what you would like about them. The only thing you have said was "you would treat them fairly if they treated you fairly????????????? I would even recommend removeing that line, because that should go without saying. You say you're funny,well don't tell them,SHOW THEM! Put some humor in your profile. Your first date is very uncreative,and certainly will not "get their attention". Think of something that will make them say ,wow, that sounds like fun.
best wishes
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Posted: 5/12/2008 9:04:59 PM | | I agree... this whole web thing is rather intimidating - especially if you are not a sales person by nature. However, "to thine own self be true". At the end of the day - you have to feel comfortable (not paranoid). | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 7:06:09 PM | | thanks, i updated my profile can you reevaluate it please. I appreciate your help. | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 7:32:42 PM | I really like playing my guitar. That really does go along nicely with my love for listening to music. Aside from that, I tend to hit the gym regularly, go out a lot with friends and play a bit of video games.
I'm currently continuing to educate myself at Sheridan College to get where I want to be in life. As for careers, I am aiming to be a recreation manager for seniors, just waiting for an opening. I will continue to make a contribution in the field of recreation for the seniors. We can talk about the why's of that one later.
Anyways, I'm a fairly simple guy. I enjoy going to movies, concerts, playing pool, egging houses when the house owners are home and watching me. Believe me they really don't get a good laugh as much as I do. So, you can say I'm adventurous in a way. I have a good sense of humor and appreciate a good laugh. You will see my humor the more I get to know you. I go to church when I can, it's hard when you work weekends and some holidays. You can escape those if you work in a nursing home. But I'm a hard worker anyway.
What I look for in women. I don't like mind games because that is just childish. I like a talkative girl, but not over talkative. I want somebody that understands me and will like me for me. I want somebody to love and care for and vice versa. As I said I'm simple.
P.S. Classical guitar and all guitars are so awesome. They smoothen your soul and it's so amazingly relaxing.
1 "egging houses when the house owners are home and watching me. Believe me they really don't get a good laugh as much as I do." Do you do this? Or is this your "humor"? Either way, I just dont think it belongs. DELETE
2."So, you can say I'm adventurous in a way. This is TOTALLY out of context. You DO NOT remind me of an adventurous guy. If you are, then you need to write about your advenures. If you can't write about them then DELETE
3 " I have a good sense of humor and appreciate a good laugh." I am quite certain the I told you to remove this in my last post. I will repeat ONE more time. NEVER tell them,SHOW them. DELETE
4. "I don't like mind games because that is just childish. This is negative DELETE I like a talkative girl, but not over talkative." This is VERY confusing DELETE
5. Refer back to my original post,you have NOT done as I suggested. If you don't understand what I am trying to tell you, you need to ask.
best wishes
OFCB | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 8:24:17 PM | OFCB, didn't we talk about NOT posting a reviewee's entire profile in your message? DIDN'T WE? DIDN'T WE?????  | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 8:28:29 PM | Yes, didn't we all talk about it OFCB?
You remember don't you, how irritating we said it was? | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 8:40:57 PM | | Eric...has anyone told you about the dancing banana yet? It reminds every woman of a penis, and it has gotten a bad reputation over the years. Do you want to have that reputation by association? Probably not. I suggest removal, and please refrain from adding any other emoticons in your profile: they belong in the bananas gang. | |
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Posted: 5/13/2008 11:39:55 PM |
Yes, didn't we all talk about it OFCB?
You remember don't you, how irritating we said it was?
Sorry ladies! I will try to do better!
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