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 cool_chicka

Joined: 4/20/2008
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Posted: 5/12/2008 11:11:18 PM
Well, Just want to figure out this gonna work, maybe have some good advise ya.
I dont know, I'm new with this website and I wanna have some friends to hang out with. Hang out, not dating.
I'm asian too and I am just here a year. My english is not really good( I guess) - so any advise
 OldFashndMntMan

Joined: 6/20/2006
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Posted: 5/12/2008 11:45:16 PM
Hi chicka,I am not very familiar with the hangout crowd, therefore I may not be the best person to do this for you. I do have one question though. If you are looking for hangout,why do you require a picture? I will wait on your reply to comment further.

best wishes
OFCB
 ~Maggie~

Joined: 3/12/2008
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Posted: 5/13/2008 12:19:01 AM
I don't really know how much help I will be either but I'll try.

I like your headline and your pictures.

You need to list more interests since this is for a hang~out profile. The interests show up in searches so it is to your advantage to have more of them.

You didn't list a profession, try to put something funny in there if nothing else.

Below is what you have written:


Not much to say, friendly, polite, but not easy the first time. Quiet with strangers and talkative with close friends. Like to hang out in small group of friends. Dancing to loud music - love it. Busy bee.

I'm lazy with chatting on this website, prefer emails coz I busy all day and not really focus to conversation on chat window.

I don't like fighting, yelling or ****y. Never talk too loud. Not really gentle but not bully people either.

I love a patient, easy-going, smart and good sense of humor man. Gentle and don't like to yell, complain or take advantage of people. Not a pervert guy, off course, and even if you think you are, dont write to me.

If you are one night stand, then you will be loser to me, because I don't like that type of person.
If you think that you're tough, then I may not be good for you.

All I care for now is friends to chat chit with, hang out with and have fun ( not in bed) and let see how future going on.


I tried to fix the language a bit, not much as that is who you are. I left out a couple of negative statements, also the fact that you are a non~smoker and don't do drugs is listed in other sections. Some of the things were in the first date section so I removed them and added them above.

You can restrict the people from contacting you with your mail settings. Require them to have a picture in order to message or IM you.

Hope this helps, if you want to use what I did, just copy/paste.

Best wishes
 crazytimes1

Joined: 3/24/2008
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Posted: 5/13/2008 6:45:15 AM
Attractive, sure... but "Sexy +++ Hot Chick? " is drawing a bit of a long bow. Still, it piqued my interest, so you had sucess where many have failed.

Are you looking for a relationship or friends/hang out? The content says relationship but you say hang out. I am confused.
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