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 Across_the_pond

Joined: 5/7/2008
Msg: 1
Profile review request
Posted: 5/13/2008 10:40:04 PM
Hello,

I would be very grateful if someone wouldn't mind taking a look at my profile and letting me know what they think! I know it's a little long, so I apologize in advance!

Thanks in advance!
 AnneOmmalee

Joined: 12/29/2007
Msg: 2
Profile review request
Posted: 5/13/2008 11:30:34 PM

I know it's a little long, so I apologize in advance!

OK no prob, just take all this right on out of there and it won't be too long:

I have learned a lot from previous relationships. About who I am, what I want out of life and what I do and do not want in a relationship.

I am not looking for one night stands

Has made mistakes in relationships and learned from them. I know I have. No one is perfect.

I am not looking for or are attracted to drama. I've had my share of it. If you enjoy drama, I am not the person for you I'm afraid. Sorry you had to read so far to get to that clause

Favorite bands include: Toby Jepson ¦ Oasis ¦ Stereophonics ¦ Carrie Akre ¦ Imogen Heap ¦ Mike Patton ¦ Veruca Salt ¦ The Start ¦ Nina Gordon ¦ Nine Inch Nails ¦ The Sugars ¦ Bif Naked ¦ Collide ¦ ¦ Curve ¦ Tapping The Vein ¦ The Cult ¦ Snake River Conspiracy ¦ KidneyThieves ¦ Elastica ¦ Fiona Apple ¦ Elysian Fields ¦ Hungry Lucy ¦ Joydrop ¦ Kelli Ali ¦ Lacuna Coil ¦ Lennon ¦ Loreena McKennitt ¦ Sisters Of Mercy ¦ Portishead ¦ Sahara Hotnights ¦ Tori Amos ¦ The White Stripes ¦ Ayria

Well, if you are still reading and haven't nodded off after reading this novel. :) I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes
Craig


Add some of those band to your interest list where they belong, and remove that unsightly mess of a blob of bands there.
Good Luck to You!
 LolaMaxwell

Joined: 9/4/2006
Msg: 3
Profile review request
Posted: 5/14/2008 11:46:48 AM
In addition to what serendipitous suggested, I'd remove this bit:

I am not looking for someone to complete me. I am already complete. I am looking for someone who compliments me. If you need someone to complete you then there is something missing and that person becomes a necessity. A relationship should be a want, not a need. Those two emotions can breed entirely different results.

This is not the time or place for a little lecture on relationships. Reading it felt like being smacked on the nose with a rolled-up newspaper for being bad.

Post here when you've made some changes to get a second look.
 Bookrat

Joined: 4/18/2008
Msg: 4
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Posted: 5/14/2008 11:54:55 AM
Since the women have done the words, I'll do the pics.

Overall: none of them are good. Not a one. Sorry, dude.

Main - nice shot of your hallway... (squint) is that you at the end?
#2 and #3 (green shirt) could be good if you focused in more on you, but as it stands they make it look like you hurt your back.
#4 - dangling your fingers in your splayed crotch? Really? Really? Also, too dark.
#5 - focus is on the hands in the forefront. Face is too dark an in the background.
#6 - could have been a decent shot, but it's too blurry and dark.

These are *all* inside. Unless you will turn to dust in sunlight, get outside and get some shots taken; natural light is much more flattering. One or two can be saved with a crop tool, but for the most part you need to wipe the slate clean and start again.
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