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trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/25/2012 8:59:34 PM
answer is spatial, a three sided prism, the temporal, is a linear sere, anywhere, proof is a a wild asparagus shoot

trulio

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Historical question: The most important person in the development of western culture Posted: 12/25/2012 8:34:26 PM
Erasmus of Rotterdam. Because he wrote the colluquies. Which inspired Shakespeare, and laid the egg that Luther hatched.

Trulio

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Haiku Connection - Part IV Posted: 11/25/2012 6:44:50 PM
relying one wakes up goes back to sleep an accordion plays

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 7/1/2012 7:55:06 PM
Very nice, I like the cadence to that....

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the upside down slide backwards from the bottom Posted: 7/1/2012 7:51:32 PM
The genus is Stronglyocentrotis

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the upside down slide backwards from the bottom Posted: 7/1/2012 7:50:50 PM
The inside of which is sweet.

Trulio

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the upside down slide backwards from the bottom Posted: 7/1/2012 7:50:13 PM
Well there was one species which I prefer called S. purpuratus, and it is an ichnoderm, spiny sea urchin.

Trulio

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the upside down slide backwards from the bottom Posted: 7/1/2012 7:46:53 PM
that is purdy purfect

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 7/1/2012 7:44:28 PM
And that is your answer for now, sure, it did occur, the dark thick wood ticks that night did worry me though I shuck them off one by one and then had a pleasant sleep where upon at 3 am, I again awoke and made coffee watching the sun in the east arise like a giant halo.

Trulio

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 7/1/2012 7:37:19 PM
Infinity and Infirmity and Informality, as you know, results in a garden. The example of the garden is due to dedication and delectation, and arousal....

Trulio

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 7/1/2012 7:32:37 PM
I reach and explore once I found a spring many years ago then I and curiosity found it again in the same place but it was overgrown and hiding out. it roared.

Trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 7/1/2012 7:28:45 PM
thorn free thrown free feel the opening roses now the sun is black

Trulio

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This is my heart Posted: 7/1/2012 7:06:08 PM
The hill was composed of 'scoria' a form of effusive magma, or 'tefla'. Mostly comprised of vesicular enclosures, and air.

Trulio

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This is my heart Posted: 7/1/2012 7:02:29 PM
Jack and Jane went over the hill....

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This is my heart Posted: 7/1/2012 7:01:45 PM
although my names is John, my common name is Jack and if not, then my name is Jane.

Trulio

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The death of Etan Patz Posted: 7/1/2012 6:59:28 PM
I have proved love only on a Sunday once then in part nothing the rest of this proof is up to a roof top to disclose or decline then it was discovered almost immediately that a flood occurred and the issue was totally forgotten the or they seemed to only want to address the flood arising against the cottonwood trees

Trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 7/1/2012 6:45:10 PM
glowing ember and the star rise and spark then disperse now it is morning

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/13/2012 12:28:06 AM
Cool cookie Op cite my phone is greaf causing.

Trulio

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/13/2012 12:19:40 AM
Well that is deep and as wide as is possibility

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The Poetry Barn and Eatery Posted: 5/12/2012 11:19:04 PM
Uncle Ed he had a Mystery Spot in Hope I dread Not far from Spuzzum With rooms that were tilted It was all illusiom I needed handrails My auntie gave us shortbread To recover from so much tilt and turbidity and the rotundity

Trulio

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May 9, 2012 Posted: 5/12/2012 10:52:06 PM
He was a brother unlike another He was my brother from a different mother he made us laugh and jump out of pajamas He was your brother he looked like Roterfella, Jondee, Dressed to the nines who made it happen He was cool as a tool a collide-a-scope in reverse mode on a Honda afternoon plush with embargoes from Delores In Lima

trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 5/6/2012 9:00:58 PM
Just pick to forget it Lick the salty skin behind My ears so I can dance once Again in the wind With you

trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 4/4/2012 7:42:25 PM
My car Mi carinita Your caress Su caricias As ever Gentle

trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/28/2012 11:28:10 PM
Do you dream Along with me spreading Our hands in the same way We think

trulio

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Haiku Connection - Part IV Posted: 3/27/2012 9:54:56 PM
Then took me to bed That's her story I dread The sun was up and I walked far for coffee

trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/21/2012 7:49:11 PM
Knee, the lever, the nearest, the rem over, in part love does not remove nor bend with the remover to remove Nor lay in the adjacent bed or Apply same ness/ly

trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/17/2012 10:20:27 PM
With care or not Will it will be the same? Ignorance and birth Are an argument That twirls Like a tibetan swastika

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/17/2012 9:43:19 PM
Utlah belie eve n Ital or wooly does Yech m tu lips

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/17/2012 9:30:42 PM
Love is and is not A distant shore Near after drifting Or Wingsing along a breeze

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/17/2012 9:21:45 PM
With care We share and pairing we say sharing caring pairing So knife sid

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/7/2011 6:58:07 PM
Interesting: from the web: "At one time soldiers in ancient Rome were paid, in part, with a ration of salt called a solarium, from the Latin word sal (which means salt). If a soldier's performance was not up to standard, that soldier was said to be "not worth his salt." Later, when salt was replaced with an actual money allowance to buy the salt, the allowance itself was called a solarium. Eventually, solarium came to mean the wages themselves, and this led to our calling one's pay a salary."

Trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/7/2011 6:54:41 PM
Christians though derive meaning from the term salt as a metaphor: "Ye are the salt of the earth: but if the salt have lost its savor, wherewith shall it be salted? it is thenceforth good for nothing, but to be cast out and trodden under foot of men." The allusion here regarding salt is that it's best use, property, is for savor, or flavour, but salt is also used to preserve meat (salt cod from NFLD was the primary food for slaves in the Caribbean) and veggies (as in dried soup mixes).

Trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/7/2011 6:47:03 PM
I agree with flying in the metaphorical, and it's mixture with the abstract. The ideal though is the word I use to replace the abstract. Of course there are many meanings associated with the abstract. The origin of the word salt as used in the context of the abstract, I would suggest, originated in the old english, when it was stated of a person that "he was worth his salt." The usage relates to something ideal, in terms of morality, that one is good and perhaps wise, a hard honest working person. The metaphorical meaning therefore of salt is of a persona who possesses and ideal nature true to the definition goodness, wisdom and hard working.

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/5/2011 1:27:41 AM
thank you so much...the issue is that 99% of my intended audience or recipients would not understand a thing if I was only expressive in the abstract. When I was a lot younger: 'salt and pecker' meant' shaking it in the face of a daisy.

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/5/2011 12:04:42 AM
But dear I only write concrete poetry and I avoid the abstract....I say it as I see and feel it. Salt to me does not mean anything analogous to truth: this is an old world false biblical piece of avoidance regarding the truth and it's definitions; salt these days in this cultural causes cancer and heart attacks, or rather too much of it. It was valuable beyond believe back in 10 BP, 20 centuries ago, more than even gold in the Inca Culture. Look at each every label on each and every preprocessed package of food in the store: "not one has a less than a daily intake recommendation of less than20% per serving."

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/4/2011 11:59:13 PM
I cannot relate to the turn of the century biblical take on the metaphorical meaning of salt, unless someone offers me a saltina with smoked salmon, a slice of fruilano, and coursed black pepper.

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/4/2011 11:56:40 PM
Why not? Can Poetry relate to the abstract nature of salt?

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/4/2011 11:13:04 PM
I would without hesitation lick armpits, so salty that I would gag, and remove the dew from other places, especially from lips, which on occasion do sweat the other secretious places the glaucous membranes the diaphanous hymenoptera (winged and thin/narrow passage way) or _ventriculous_membranacium I am not much different than a dog, who greets you when you are wearing shorts and continues to lick you legs, slapping up all the saltina momentito. And then his master shouts at him 'lay off'.

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/4/2011 11:03:58 PM
My god! You asked a question about whether or not a grain of truth could be diced up from whetted finger tips; My only answer is that if it tastes like salt it is probably salt, or perhaps, Chinese salt (MSG). That is the truth, chao

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/4/2011 10:57:05 PM
The human armpit is also a very special organ possessing glands that secrete salt, all of which are hairy and all hairs under armpits are straight

Trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/4/2011 9:39:20 PM
you cannot find any salt really in a tropical rainforest this alkaline substance only occurs in terrestrial landscapes where the rate of evaporation exceeds the rate of transpiration in plants hence the occurrence of halophytes which by their habit excrete salt from special glands which are basically useless to men and beasts and there is only one exception salt historically is derived for human consumption from places like the Salton Sea places aquiline and aqueous that have no rivers flowing from them to the sea those that live in the rainiest parts of the tropics get the sodium from a diet such as bananas et cetera those nations than can curry trade in salt begat the metaphor of worth applied to salt, but not us, who live here, since even celery is high in sodium and bananas are high in content of potassium take your pick of the one electrolyte necessary for motility

trulio

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WORKHOUSE Posted: 9/3/2011 10:01:45 PM
Leaf was the name of a silky woman who lived inside a vigorous and tremulous montane forest, by a raging creek that cut a canyon through towering granite mountains, and beneath eroding shale banks, and her hair was the same lustre of obsidian, her eyes sharp as black volcanic extrusions and in opposition to the magnetic gyration of the earth. Leaf was so young, and it was difficult to tell who was older and wiser: her mother, who was partly Italian, and Amerindian, and knew the arts of both, cooking on a charcoal stove, messing around in the cocina, gathering and preparing dry-cured olives stuffed with fillings, including pimientos rojas, almonds blancos, anchovies, jalapenos, cebolla or capers: or Leaf! It was an unsolved mystery which one was younger and caused musicians to be joyous and in their collaboration not only the cocina was filled with melodic rapture, but even the vinyards and the stalls of livestock and gallinas were moved to laughter and even doric dancing. Who could tell which one was coy? The one who was unaffected, or the other so busy messing around in la cocina? Perhaps neither fitted in with this slight, and highly provisional disclosure, and surely L and M would agree. They together in the cocina, messy, as if there would be no visitor....the weather was typical: bright sun in morning, stillness, which in itself would worry...and the lack of even cirrus stratus from the west over the Sierras. Then when night fell all of a sudden, there was a subdued light in the sky that made it impossible to sleep or think and even dream. This light was silvery, and inside it was some rotund, actually, basilesque forms, edged, like thinnest eyebrows, perhaps alluding to Leafs.

Trulio

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 9/3/2011 9:25:24 PM
faith heals though the frontispiece may crack and this where where the light is let out so there is no where to hide

Trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/1/2011 10:16:09 PM
I know vaguely the term for sage (Artemisia) and for cactus (Opuntia) but none of these terms mean any thing deep in a primordial sense, and neither does green mean anything for me when I see the sage leaves. The green of the sage leaf is part of the texture, the pubescence of the undersealed, the white reflection off the pubescen hairs, and the flat ablated part is less pubescently white but more green. I want to refer to the above as the _ousial_ portion due to the depth of the green in the leave,and the white pubescence of the underleaf as the ab-ousial part of the leaf because this is a gradient of the regional leaf as it integrates into sky, light and night, or freezing night temperatures.

Trulio

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WORKHOUSE Posted: 9/1/2011 10:02:50 PM
Make round's with voices. 'This late, seek a lessor world. Fill in, and well, in seeing, a creek, we become expectant.

trulio

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WORKHOUSE Posted: 9/1/2011 8:54:51 PM
you are perfect and so is history and a whole catafalque of incidences

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WORKHOUSE Posted: 9/1/2011 8:52:09 PM
H. Bergson. "The body is the manifestation of the mind, and the mind is the meaning of the body, taken together they are a unity of expression."

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/1/2011 8:47:38 PM
if the sun was to appear in this area it would be so gradual and since it occurs that way through out we would not notice anything out of place or shiny

trulio

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the sun, through the blear of the window Posted: 9/1/2011 8:45:15 PM
salt deceives the purpose purpose deceives kind kind reclines suggestion promises collectors 'repurpose' all including love/circumspection

trulio

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WORKHOUSE Posted: 9/1/2011 12:45:19 AM
there is a lack of dust and the rivers and lakes and skies are full all across now school doors open up the corridor da chalk dust hold your breath

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