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mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 19 (view)

I REvised my profile and want some honest Reviews now. Posted: 4/20/2009 12:27:23 AM
Hmm, 21, divorced and have been a member here for 2 years? You might want to explain that one. Hey, you own Buckner Racing, get off the note pad and buy MS Office or maybe you have word pad? Something you can do a quick 5 second spell check in.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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A quick look Posted: 4/13/2009 5:15:06 PM
Uh, I don't think you need an "edgy look" nor do I think you are nerdy or too nice. You listed what you like to do, now describe them. As far as what you aren interested in, short women? You can do better than that, what do you like to do (keep it clean) when you are with a woman that makes you feel all squishy inside and want to take on the world?

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 5 (view)

Am I missing something here?? Posted: 4/13/2009 5:00:44 PM
Gotta go w/Inga. That watch comment was my very, very first thought, like...identicle. Also, there really isn't anything else to review...it's rather sparse, at least tell us where you bought the watch...anything.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 17 (view)

What's the point of fishing when we dont get any bites? something wrong with my bait? come look. Posted: 4/13/2009 4:13:32 PM
Great profile if we were the same age and I lived near you. Can't think of a better person to be compared too.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 32 (view)

Would u wanna get in touch after reading my profile???? Posted: 4/13/2009 3:59:39 PM
Princess Missfit? That's a perfect name. Ok, I don't understand the problem. You have almost every guy on this thread flirting with you, you are very attractive and I'm resisting the urge to do the same. I have no doubt that you're getting plenty of responses of ALL sorts. Just throw out the garbage and do a background check on the rest. Your profile looks great and I actually thought your list was fun and funny to read. There is only one change I'd make and it's already at the bottom, you've already reeled them in so it doesn't matter much. I'd get rid of that xxx in your first date section.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Used as a stop-gap comfort pillow... Posted: 4/12/2009 6:28:03 AM
If it helps, she probably didn't intend to hurt you, I'm sure she had her own confusing feelings that she was going through. Dating is a messy business. As for the poster who wants you to treat her like a "whore", perhaps they need to look up that definition, I didn't read about money or goods being traded for sex and really, why? just WHY is that even necessary? Yes, she was careless with your feelings, I'm sure many of us have been on both sides of that one and not intentionally.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 39 (view)

Am I really all that bad??? Posted: 4/10/2009 7:23:53 PM
Me thinks thou doth protest too much.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile review please... Posted: 4/10/2009 6:55:41 PM
I like it. One thing though. The caption on your first pic. Check the date on it. Also, don't apologize for your looks. You're a good lookin' guy, go get her!!

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 30 (view)

Am I really all that bad??? Posted: 4/10/2009 6:47:29 PM
Damn, I had a typo. At least I recognized it.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 29 (view)

Am I really all that bad??? Posted: 4/10/2009 6:46:24 PM
Ok Maddybeagle (whatever kinda name that is) First of all My husband has seen my profile and thinks u ppl are fkn crazy! Second of all who are u pointing fingers at? Ur a major dweeb! Well, I wonder what us people think about your "fkn" husband and some of...heck, at least one decision he has made. Shotgun involved? Rock on Sista' Christiam! Nothing is going to change here.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Looking for some reviews on my profile Posted: 4/10/2009 6:01:23 PM
I like your profile. It's not over the top, appears very honest and is positive. I would get a pic either without the glasses or at least with glasses that aren't tinted.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 19 (view)

Am I really all that bad??? Posted: 4/10/2009 5:41:08 PM
I seek approval from no one, had i realized ya'll were gonna turn this into a roast then id have not wated my time posting. What did you title this thread? Am I really all that bad??? Well, you were seeking something and by the title of your thread I'm going to call it "approval" by the make up of your profile I think others have captured it's essence of "advertising". Don't take anything too personal, the critique when it comes down to it is about your profile, not necessarily you. You didint' really give a lot of information anyway. Now, as a guy let me say that the women on this forum have accurately described the notion of it. Not getting many replies? Don't shoot the messenger here, nobody is limiting your access to the men on this board more than you are. You wanna' chat with men? Fine, maybe advertise what you want to chat about a little more, flesh it out in words, not pictures. I have no idea what goes on in your personal life and I'm not going to judge based on a couple of paragraphs but you do give off a kind of vibe, maybe take the advice or not but it's purposeless to argue with it.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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profile review, please! Posted: 4/10/2009 4:04:23 PM
Ditto, delete that line as quickly as possible and I also agree with the interests, too many. I see a lot of specific bands mentioned, it's not necessary unless you are really, really nutty about a specific one. For example, if you were a deadhead, then I'd understand putting in the Greatful Dead. If you own every cd that U2 ever put out? No need to break them out.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 5 (view)

Any ideas? Posted: 4/10/2009 3:57:55 PM
Well first things first, I think this site needs to do a better job of posting ages by pictures. Because I see a small thumb nail pic and think to myself "oh she is hot" then click and wow way to young for me... Great and now i am "that guy". HA! I'd throw this out. Don't tell a potential future interest right off the bat that you tink other women are "hot". The only one that matters is "her", right? Or at least that's what she is going to think.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 4 (view)

am i that bad? Posted: 4/10/2009 3:23:23 PM
Hmm, you need to switch your pics around. You don't want the one you have to be the first impression, maybe 5th, 6th but certainly not the first. Actually you should get another pic with you smiling.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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help me out please, young guy (23) Posted: 4/9/2009 8:10:35 PM
Cool abs. Pull your shirt down. Better lighting and I agree, nix the chicks.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Review Posted: 4/9/2009 5:55:46 PM
I don't know if it's a bad move to bump your own post, if so then karma is gonna' get me. Looking for advice from more than one person (as helpful as it was) if it's possbile. Maybe that "Call Me Job" guy, he seems rather cold, calculated and specific. But, I'll take advice from anyone.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Reviews Posted: 4/9/2009 4:26:40 PM
Ah, I hate not being able to fix typos. Minor but I meant 4H in my last paragraph not 4F. Sheesh, killed my own joke. Oh well.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Reviews Posted: 4/9/2009 4:24:54 PM
I'm not expert so, take it with a grain of salt Your title: Could It Be You? I think that's what most of us are here to find out. I'd personalize it. Your profile is only one paragraph and in somc cases rather cryptic. For example why do you call your tattoo Cooper's Rose? I have no idea, there might be an interesting short story behind it. You help out at your mothers farm with training horses. Do you like it? Do you feel accomplished when you do it? What exactly do you do when you train horses? Also, what are you looking for in the opposite sex? What do you want to do together (keep it clean buddy ), stuff like that. Your first date: I would invite the young lady to a meeting, then dinner at a nice restaurant, and if she would like a walk on the beach. An AA meeting? 4F? What kind of meeting? Or is that what the kids are calling dates these days? Dinner? Nothing wrong with that, we all eat we've all had dinner dates before and I think there lies the problem. You live in Florida, any patio restaurants off the ocean? How about describing one? Or, you have access to horses....for free? Sounds like a nice date to me.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Review Posted: 4/9/2009 3:50:30 PM
When you get to be our age it seems like every wrinkle and some you didn't know about come out everytime someone whips out a camera, I hear ya'! As far as the cuddling, nothing wrong with the wanting I just took it as an air of despairation. So, I'd focus on what you want, not so much on what you are missing. I think you will get better responses if you are perceived as already being a complete person .

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Review Posted: 4/9/2009 3:33:56 PM
Well, I'd get a new pic. You're an all right lookin' guy but that pic has some brooding shadows cast upon your face. Also, you are separated that is going to scare the sh*t out of quite a few women and you seem to have this fascination with cuddling which is good but maybe not focus on the idea that you're not getting enough of them.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Review Posted: 4/9/2009 3:13:41 PM
That's great advice, thank you!! I've taken it.

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

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Profile Review Posted: 4/9/2009 2:43:49 PM
Ok, kind of new to this and just looking for a little constructive criticism, no big whoop. Better pics are coming I just don’t want to use something from a cell phone. Am I joking a little too much? Am I not answering any questions? So, good, bad what's the dope, yo?

mojo in phx

Joined: 3/25/2009

Msg: 13 (view)

cant get over it Posted: 3/29/2009 10:44:05 PM
there is a lot more like sendin pictures of yourself half naked to guys u used to date is that insecure how bout some guy stays at ur house that u slept with a month before we started talking, how bout going out with guys, and even more how bout having abotions, dont get me wrong i was jealous but she made me that way, this i think is the problem relationships are based off trust and no matter how much i loved her and thought she was special or stopped beiong jealous i could not deal with my girlfriend dating other people dont need anyone like that their are real woman out there and if u need to cheat and go out with other guys ur not one of them Whoa. That's some real bad stuff goin' on there. She dumped you? No, she did you a favor, move on, trust me you'll live.

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