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Thread: The Moon
songmn001
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The Moon
Posted:
8/6/2008 3:22:49 AM
born by chance, testament of afterthought
of celestial passions
glorious violence
inevitable collisions......and universal law
scars you bear of those days....leftovers
of survival.....grace
sometimes wet, sometimes blue,
in a Harvest, blood or new
crescent, half, fairy, black
full and rising
waxing wisely
phasing seasons, love, treasons
timeless truths, lies, reasons
what's yours has been mine
histories entwinded
now your dust ... now cell memory...now silver echo's
mysterious ..... fine
and .... I, as you ... as kin
still shine
songmn001
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The Moon
Posted:
7/19/2008 1:27:10 AM
as it were
life was difficult...
lost
once again
I lay
from my perch,
with you,
splayed over me
words, prayers sent up to you
for direction, solace and....
silence
this ... your lusty response
how rich
this enigma that has spoken for years
to so many, for so long
without tongue
yet for me..... nothing
you, our celestial sphinx
our minor goddess...
and I
yet another
beseeching
through those
answerless nights
burning with silver fever waxing romantic
I cursed your response
but
in time
learned
what you shone to mine mind then
nary compares
to what you shine
in my soul
now
songmn001
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The Moon
Posted:
7/7/2008 5:19:28 PM
TY AF... it's been a while ... really like this subject
songmn001
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The Moon
Posted:
7/7/2008 2:02:27 AM
something inside of me unfurls
when you come
a subtle invasion
innervation...
where Gia moans
and sighs ...
and I feel her
when you come
An Owl
silver eyed
I am
always have been
but didn't understand
'til I knew you
Celestial memories
Stardust echos
turn, vibrate
as you lay over me
enigmas beam from these
your shimmering mysteries -
glimmering over my secrets
that with you only
I've shared
...and I've seen you sneak in to look on me
before you usually rise
tonight you're gone ...
but I'm okay-
soon .....
something inside of me will unfurl
when you come
songmn001
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why do alot of country girls wanna go to the city and the city girls dont wanna come to the country
Posted:
7/5/2008 3:04:10 AM
ya know.... this is actually a great question that some have hit on the mark and a few, as probably with most things, feel compelled to grace us with their infantile attempts at being funny.
I find it a nice piece of sychronicity that I found this question because it hits right to the heart of something I've been dealing with.
The Short: Many Country girls (&guys) will feel stifled by the lack of; choices, jobs, opportuinities (human and otherwise) excitements, etc. Age has much to do with this also. The city is a human carnival in comparison.... I think in many ways the Country girl has been sold a bill of goods, and the City girls has learned the price for them goods. Of course there are exceptions but the question obviously isn't about exceptions... and I believe Media plays quite a big role in this.
Too me, the answer I related to the most is ' living in a small town but being close to a city. Best of both worlds'. Too much of either is too much for me. I grew up in Miami and lived most of my adult life in Las Vegas, both before they turned into zoo's. Family, Jobs and obligations dictated that. Now that my kid is grown , I am in a smaller town close to a big city. I love my family in both of those cities but I hate the insanity, the crime, the crush of people and their phonyass bullshit, the traffic, the lack of open spaces, sky, care and silence . Away from cities there is peace and quiet... and real beauty... and Country people have their way, which I respect and have grown to admire.
songmn007
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Infinite Memories
Posted:
4/11/2007 2:27:50 AM
Jules, TY... and TY to all other writers.... joy to read.....
lesson learned on memories..... To my Aunt
the call came - 'you'd better come down now'
I knew why
just not how
how will I do this - this ending
even today must I keep pretending
that you know - somewhere, remember
the times of our lives that define
and render
our latter days ambrosia - memories
racing-in mind-in car, I remember
how right he was
the man..... new job... orientation day
"after all's been eaten, drank and monies spent
memories are really why they came this way"
All we do....struggle....work....love....fight....laugh....learn....teach....dream....strive....
live
for..........become memories
when gone... gone too is all............ I remember
remember disease
a merciless thief....
that took you piece by piece
and how poorly I handled
your unbidden retreat
I pray you knew it was I holding your hand
that last breath.............. longer
I love you Tia Leo
songmn007
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Infinite Memories
Posted:
4/9/2007 1:57:49 AM
Previous write.... this thread hit that same place so ...........................................
This Love -
This ghost with a thousand
cousins,
how they lie in wait
appear
cut and sear
everywhere.... everywhere
Everywhere in another's laugh
curve of neck
fall of hair, scent, stare
smile, hands, style
wit and wile
in song... our songs
in films, places, phrases
that were you
that will always be you
Long now I sleep stay dream
where too, I
can be ghost
and again we can dance
chest to breast
and I can feel, touch
your soul again
and for a time
be
where mine bleeds no more
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
12/15/2006 3:04:31 PM
Christmas time again.......... sail on, and sail thru I will
but I can't help but remember
you sitting there
your timeless smile
the most quiet, serene scene
as the room
awashed only in twinkling
Christmas lights
gave you this most
beautiful
glow
smelling, touching, feeling, seeing
drinking in
you...
Christmas
sail on, sail past
those times
that can no longer be
and thru this maddening
commercialism
and merriment that rings hollow
I am finding peace
and a new Christmas wind
to sail on.....................
songmn007
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Ethics and Supressed Desires...Feel free to Express
Posted:
12/5/2006 10:02:42 PM
FindChris.... your write ,to me, is as great a piece as any I have read here..... excellent .....even more so considering where we live........... TY
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
12/5/2006 9:51:33 PM
Good one Sean...... especially the last two lines............................
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
12/3/2006 9:24:37 PM
calling all sailors...............................................................................................
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
12/1/2006 1:32:45 AM
I sail on.........................................................................................
thru these inevitable vanities
insipid inanities
selfserving sanity
way too carelessly examined
too pourous a heart
I have earned
when benevolence
to all is turned
not jibe with the times
am I
not open for all....
still I study
those who are
still I see
too much of the same
truths untold for fear
of dislike
creative avoidance
nice and contrite
too widely slung
this considerate knife
like the wise, like the unsure
check your ego at the door
if this should offend
my dear friend
is not this point made
is this too obscure ?
sail on......
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
11/26/2006 5:08:02 PM
.... lazy sunday muse ..... got reminded what, why we sail on..............
I am he and he was me
the passions, wants
desires, motivations
conversations
centuries apart
we still have
He left his good mark
I have yet to
he made the few choices of his day
I sway at too many
but sail on I will
for he set forth
a brothers wind
still blowing over this
new world
thru this
old soul
years, hundreds between,
Van Gogh and Cobain
melt Daliesque
thru new fabric
straining
sifting
anew
yet mystically
so same
I sail on...
search my good mark
look back to live forward
one fine day
songmn007
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One for the Core
Posted:
11/25/2006 8:01:29 PM
Soft...............wow....^^^........... emphatically, wow..........................
how many roads
how many years
it has taken just
to get here
the years of doubting
these workings
in my mind
forged
by black and blue
relentless decibel
rage in multiple
years of
shrieking slaps from hell
grunting punches wailed
screams to no avail
blood splattered
soul shattered
life tattered.....
chilodhood set adrift
the chords of violence
resonate into the years
into it disappear
music others hear
I could not sing the same
got silenced by the shame
the overture of pain
and its incessant refrain
refrains of self pity
refrains of self destruction
refrains of uselessness
in time I have taught myself
how to play my own song
and precious few know
how far I've come along
and there is still more to go
but now and then I will sit
and listen
and hear
a symphony in the making
and smile all the more
for it is mine
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
11/23/2006 3:00:49 PM
TY Nes... I salute you also... Ty for your writes.
Together, once, we sailed
a mast of love holding
thru the storms...
then came the hurricanes
I grabbed you
grabbed a rope
to tie us to the mast
No,no you said
there is another way
and broke away
then slipped away
I watched as
I strapped myself down
I sailed on
this shipwreck searching
looking,looking
for you
finally, taking on water
I swam to shore
pained and weary
like never before
I slept long, not wanting to rise
again
silver madness the moon brought
then came the sun
after years reposed
on the shore
I saw the splinted mast
driftwood now
with the best pieces
I placed and centered it
anew in a raft
and sailed on
with solemn determination
wistfully looking back
I saw my tiny island
shrinking, disappering
as I drifted
I almost turned back
in time, a sailor's song
I hummed
into the mystic
in time, new land broke
my horizon
and in me swelled, once again
spirits of sailors
sail on
sail on
'ere the bonnie boat was won
songmn007
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I sail on
Posted:
11/22/2006 11:28:29 PM
I sail on
seeing a 17 year old guy hold the door open
for the frail woman 10 steps behind him at Walmart
the giggles and laughs of a young brother and sister
playing with just a wadded up ball of paper
the glow of an old man, hands weathered and creased
cradling a new borns face
the nurse who looked a little deeper
and gruffly gave to me so tenderly
my son's girlfriend who said that for an older guy
I was a 'hottie'
the little door I opened in someone's life
that they built a home with
Alfred Nobel, "Secret Santa", Robert Fulghum
and J.K. Rowling
being up at the mountains
as the sun sets
reminding myself, remembering a lifetime scar
made in a new york minute
and last but not least
that anyone can win a lottery
songmn007
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A Fragile Flower
Posted:
11/19/2006 11:44:19 PM
Fragile Flower
oh yes how manly men betray that word
whore, slut, trash, bi*ch,
words turn her into it
objectified
dehumanized
not worthy of any other
manly part of you
you never had mother, sister, aunt
grandmother
woman who you see
worth seeing in that other
they're not so far apart
not as far as you
need them
want them
have to have them to be
as far, and close, as this
they never had a real man in their lives
no....
just one like you
songmn007
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Misc. Poems
Posted:
11/19/2006 11:09:19 PM
good one C13....
Sad ....
how politically incorrect that
word has become
In this modern America how 'wrong'
this word has become
lest one can sell it
or sell against it.....
This corporate mentality, morphed to
cancerous ideology
mantra
social sophistry
with too many..
everywhere........
As if human nature they will will
to another plane
a 'new, improved' plane
........................again
still, and how long now,
with creative avoidance
and self deluding bumper sticker philosophy
evolution of the mind
getting shredded by
bottom lines
selfish grinds
sold out spines
endless 'zines
and the newest of commodities
REALITY
Sad....
disturbing how disturbing
this word has
become
songmn007
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Misc. Poems
Posted:
11/19/2006 5:01:35 PM
In that RedD... I would agree
a regular day, on about my way
Starbucks, stir sticks
sugar
raw sugar... where
there
stop, freeze... again
I see, again I see
hands of a thief
same nails, same shapes
same squareness construction
same tone
same size
same emotional reduction
....but each time
I get dragged back less and less
who doesn't want to be happy
who doesn't want to be free
other than another
who could know the years
and the light
stolen
by the hands of this thief
songmn007
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Being alone is
Posted:
11/11/2006 12:18:51 AM
another nite, another bar and
everythings' a blur
trying so hard to lighten' up but
all I do is hurt
I feel so broken..........feel so broken
misfit, melancholy child
way too sensitive
they spoke as if I chose this way
defective
I felt so broken.......feel so broken
so I fightin' for a life of truth
with love and passion...................an' a little tenderness
but so far it seems I've paid a nickel
for every pennys worth..............
every penneys worth of happiness
songmn007
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The Age of Innocence
Posted:
11/10/2006 11:52:11 PM
Autumn.... I want to pass along to you something that came thru me in a similar circumstance as yours...... I offer it as one who has traveled down a similar road and can well guess what is going thru your soul right now.
_______________________________________
will you not spare us
will you give no reprieve
I done all I can and still
you stand over us
why... why now...
yes...
yes...
okay.........
yes............
I know........
I KNOW
it's me
asking, from your sword
to be spared
this deep thrust
I know it's natural
I know it's inevitable
I know it's unavoidable
I know it's life
I know,I know, I know..........................I...........know
and I don't care right now
I don't care who says they know
I don't care who says they understand
I DON'T CARE .........
how could they really know
words.... words...........no more ****ing words
and
still
I reach for them...........words
please
please.....
solace........ please
thru the deepest of my crying
they come.........
they rise .......................echo's....................... grace..............
I hear them
words.............................................
"it is night that makes us rejoice the dawn
it is fear that makes us admire courage
it is time that makes a host into a guest
it is death that makes living so sweet
without black there is no white
without loss there is no gain
without pain there is no joy
how otherwise could it be ?
in love, in life
there must be opposites
for otherwise no pleasures exist
it is the WAY
has been from the begining.........."
truth...........
Words...... words so true
reminding me that where now
I stand, many have stood
and suffered deep
agonized much....... and in time
rejoiced all the more because
words ..........truth............solace
I will...............
I will let life be life
I will accept
I will hurt
and then....as is meant to be
as is the way....
live all the more
__________________
my thoughts and prayers are with you and your mother.
songmn007
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Finished.....not finished
Posted:
11/10/2006 2:41:54 PM
A dream slowly fades away
I'm lost for a moment
I turn.............and I see you
I don't move
I don't make a sound
'cause I want to stay here
suspended.... loving you
candlelight silhouettes
the curves of your neck
and breast
as you breathe
as I
breathe you in
flowing, in rhythm
to a timeless
primal
essence
this raw, sweet awe
and my soul flies.....
I want to crawl inside you
and answer
everything.......
everything
this day, my love
let's spend this day in bed
let the world go by
let's spend this day in bed
songmn007
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The Age of Innocence
Posted:
11/10/2006 1:32:44 PM
Will do Autumn... good luck
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The Age of Innocence
Posted:
11/9/2006 4:31:23 PM
Autmn... sorry to hear this... prayers and grace I give up for you and your mother
songmn007
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The Age of Innocence
Posted:
11/8/2006 1:04:09 PM
GOL... won't tell promise... it's for parents only.
songmn007
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More unfinished, for brothers.
Posted:
11/8/2006 12:50:04 PM
Nes... love the way you caught the ambivalence with this piece...'blue reckonings flash thru' and ' ...need in me to feel this let down' in particular. TY for your feedback. I did want that one to slowly rip open and I, for one, do write to try and extract "just a" feelings/experience. I've grown towards minimalist poetry as oppossed to 'stream of consciousness' excess that meanders all over the place. To me Poetry is expressing 3 lines with 1 while getting to the heart of a subject (with some exceptions). Something I notice in your work that I like. TY.
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beeeich
Posted:
11/7/2006 4:39:12 PM
Nes...Glad to be able to give back some of what's been given to me... TY
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More unfinished, for brothers.
Posted:
11/6/2006 11:13:11 PM
LOL nes.....hello aloysha, thanx for your words
This Love -
This ghost with a thousand
cousins,
how they lie in wait
appear
cut and sear
everywhere.... everywhere
Everywhere in another's laugh
curve of neck
fall of hair, scent, stare
smile, hands, style
wit and wile
in song... our songs
in films, places, phrases
that were you
that will always be you
Long now I sleep stay
where too, I
can be ghost
and again we can dance
chest to breast
and I can feel, touch
your soul again
and for a time
be
where mine bleeds no more
songmn007
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The Age of Innocence
Posted:
11/6/2006 11:02:55 PM
Autumn... TY... was it romantic ???... it was a rememberance of going into my kids room to check on him before going to bed..... hard to 'see' your own stuff from the outside sometimes... let me know
songmn007
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beeeich
Posted:
11/6/2006 10:46:06 PM
wow nes....
I too live
this
double sided blade
One side wants to slice away self-serving selfish idiots
another wants to sacrificially show the way
"for you I'll try.... for you I'll do"
only to feel too often....it's come to naught
this 'they' forgot
of those before who taught
and the
rash of human selfishness is fraught
with the frailty
of this double edged sword
At Starbucks, there on the stand
pictured, headlined, was this boy..... someones boy
once someones little boy
laying in the mud, bleeding
life ebbing from a sniper's work
someone's boy...............
much like my own
My heart is rendered like nothing else could
My mind is pulled
beyond reasons and shoulds
How can we still be here
How is it that thousands of years of wisdom
has penetrated only 3 inches
a yard of necessity
I believe
this is why you are here
this is why I am here
this is why we write, we rail, we express
who knows what young one will read you, me, others
and understand, feel, get.... get to a place where they can
will
make a difference
a place I am not
on the eves where my insignificantness closes in on me
like a fated shadow
I have to remind myself of others,
like me
like here, like now
who had precious little possibility of knowing
that their deeds, actions, words
had the power of a pebble in a pond
"The wings of a butterfly in Japan"
I give all I can................... I know
poet dear, ...........also, you do
sleep tight dear poet
sleep tight knowing you are not
unheard
songmn007
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Shelter me...home
Posted:
11/6/2006 5:13:55 PM
In response to POckets............
Oh gorgeous grace, I've learned of thee
whomsoever posseseth
let it be
But when in time if new you see
the unforseen, a mare undreamed
To Faith of yours, if true , hold fast
and this and that, too... shall pass
songmn007
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The Age of Innocence
Posted:
11/6/2006 4:34:24 PM
A rememberance.....
A nightlite, that fragrance
that filled your room
the dim light
softly reflecting off your cheek
My nitely ritual
once done out of love
has become a meadow
ever in spring
subtlely calling out to me
Here, a spring
it's clear untainted waters
gently flow out
I run my hand thru you angel hair
breathe
and I fly
into the Age of Innocence
I sit with it for a time
bless the health of this child of mine
and pray to have this meadow
for as long as possible
With silent vows
and a promise
I kiss you goodnight
rise
and notice how the weary day
has fallen away
like melting snow
songmn007
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Shelter me...home
Posted:
11/6/2006 3:29:22 PM
Arrrgggg.... SB 'architects' and 'Cerberus'..... tough doing this at work !
songmn007
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Shelter me...home
Posted:
11/6/2006 1:57:37 PM
This,this............................................................part two...
So you craftsmen of the soul
Bishops, Cardinals, Pope
and all you priestly masons
architechs of shame
Now that I am homeless
shelterless, searching
yet again
for your promise
what have you but more of the same
Word by word, a truer home
I build anew
Minds and Spirits you damned
for power, for greed
rightfully.....damn you
Blasphemy... your pithy toothless Cerebus
I fear no more... no more
True writers, honest sojourners,
bravely born again innocents
Shelter me..... home
songmn007
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More unfinished, for brothers.
Posted:
11/6/2006 12:46:43 PM
I've always loved the line from "Inherit the Wind"... " and so God created man in his own Image... and Man being the perfect Gentleman returned the favor". whoa
Yet I still believe in a higher power....
songmn007
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Lord Of The Imaginary Penguins
Posted:
11/6/2006 12:41:26 PM
Black Mary... Lord of the Imaginary Penguins....excellent piece ... thanx
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Archetypes
Posted:
11/5/2006 2:17:12 PM
TY neseemoo.. getting hooked on this stuff !!
SONGMN007
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Shelter me...home
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11/5/2006 1:03:43 AM
Shelter me home......
how those words
those three words cut into me
I should not feel them stab me
I should not feel them make me feel like something
is missing,
like the incessant western way
of commercialism
I should not feel
this abjectness
this organic missing life missed
this this.......
I should not feel this this that I have to play it down and away
this this that only here I can try to say
this this that, against my best, can make me cry
this this that I know is really what we all want
this this that should be so simple, apparent
but isn't,
is not,
not interesting enough
not dramatic enough, not challenging enough
not enough of this, or that, or that, or that, or that, or that, or that, or that, or this, or this, or that,.......................................until
life gives you so much of this or that eventually ......so much shit, blood and guts that you spin around and wonder.....who really doesn't know of this.............................. Only the young who haven't lived enough yet.
I know writers before
I know they understood
I know this wisdom has been with us for thousands a years
what insanity makes it roll back....
what advanced 'civilized' people would do this........ this this......
SONGMN007
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Archetypes
Posted:
11/4/2006 4:54:29 PM
A sally down this Jungian alley................" Knows what he wants"
________
She has these beautiful eyes
that truly see
Her nature is sweetly reserved
with deep femininity
Her humour is laced with intelligence
that smiles from another world
She's intimate with the woman in her
but never forgets the girl
Pygmalion......... it's what I am
Pygmalion......... is who I am
***
She's still beyond, my physical realm
but here, I wait for my lover
Impetuous hearts, selfish souls
how they betray one another
If I exist, she too will live
live for the day to discover...... Pygmalion
***
Her living is high, her pleasures are deep
her sensuousness most fun
Through previous lives, she'll recognize me
mystical rivers will run
The canyons of ego, the quicksands of pride
she knows where and when to avoid
Her wisdom is carved from these valley's of pain
that give rise to mountains of joy
Pygmalion....... it's what I am
Pygmalion....... that's who I am......... who I am
SONGMN007
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Sex in the woman mind after 40.
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11/3/2006 7:11:52 PM
Mz. Maeflowers... you are too funny... love reading your stuff... Definately agree... kissing is an artform often rushed thru and as a wise man once point out, the art of kissing not only encompasses intensity, variation and duration but also placement !!
and... true sexyness is having a well hung mind !!
SONGMN007
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Lots of Unfinished Business
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11/2/2006 9:35:22 PM
Unfinished Business......... yes......
this day again
Anniversary
This bittersweet that will kiss
and bite
and make bleed
and make rise
the Stoic
You never finished with me
Life, you gave me
Breath, you took
that betrayed that gift
Daggers thru a door I reached for
words, liquid gravity, stopped me cold
listening
hearing... silently imploding
A vessel, tiny young, rode
a forever black wave
to a castaways shore
Love..... Love forgives
does stab itself til'
Love...... Love remembers
twistin' time at will
for when black, that tide rolls in
yesterdays' clock has beat
but a minute
But it's alright...
smiles and laughter there were
faults, yours, mine, theirs
half way silent
now that you're gone
like a quilt, Peace
I will stitch and
everyone
everything
I will wrap around me
and I
living, will warm it
SONGMN007
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planning local las vegas PoF halloween costume party!
Posted:
10/28/2006 3:22:13 PM
Almost forgot... Thanx go out to Sassy who MADE the hawaiian donations... Spirit.. cool to of met you finally...ya only had 3 cowboys to wrangle with huh !!.. (curack that whip!!).. shout outs to "Horney" and her friend Bride'o'Frankenstein.. Jentrips..( that was you in them beer goggles right ??..looked gr8 didn't I!! ) James the Clown and ............here's where the beer fuzz kicks in.****AILS !!!!
SONGMN007
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planning local las vegas PoF halloween costume party!
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10/28/2006 2:51:32 PM
First .. thanx to Softedge for all the work she did to bring everyone together... thanx also to Krystaldiamond for her generosity and the reading... made a few hairs stand up when something you said happened within minutes... too cool... had a great ole' Irish sing-a-long with Matt, Mark and um,um... (beer memory).. to Billy Joel's ' Piano Man'... Kxthy, we were waiting for you to show up... had a pretty cool younger one I think you would of liked to of met but.... shout out to Piano God... beautiful craftwork my man...Dancer91 lived up to her screen-name AND won 1st in costume...Mark got 2nd and 3rd???... shout out to Armando, Mz. 'Kitty', Mz. Cowgirl, Vegaslady and umm..umm.. (nuther beer mem.)(you in the witchypoo costume)... all in all had a great time... and to those who said but didn't , ya shudda !!... oh well... next time !!
SONGMN007
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ole' Vegas
Posted:
10/24/2006 8:25:32 PM
I agree with you Simlasa...
I have spent time in other places and was glad to get back here, even with it's shortfalls... I'm sure many of us have done similar or know people who have left here fed up with Vegas and end up coming back with a little different perspective. I ran into this a lot in the Gaming Biz...
It could be worse, and I have experienced that... Basically, I like living out west and until opportunities present otherwise, I plan on staying out here. I really missed the beauty that isn't too far from us out west and I really missed the open spaces still available to escape too without too much effort.
And if I get hungry at 3 am and want some of that tasty bar food I can get it !!!
SONGMN007
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ole' Vegas
Posted:
10/20/2006 3:59:31 PM
Simlasa... I know what you mean about trying to pin someone down about the culture thing but the answers I've gotten are better... Most everyone who comes from a longer established city like Chicago, NY, SF or even San Diego are use to Metropolitan Museums, huge public libraries, 'official' buildings that are Arts and Cultural centers.... basically a place to plan a whole day around and still not see it all, a place where Theatre draws large crowds and then you can go eat and hang out in a nice entertainment district per se...
I saw Rent in Ft. Lauderdale a few yrs. back and it played in an official theatre that host many events and we went afterwards to go eat and hang out in a district and it was way cool...
Honestly I think it's ridiculous to compare Vegas to cities that 1. Haven't been built by one all pervasive dominant industry and 2. That have had 3,4 times the time period to establish themselves and 3. Vegas is Vegas... there have been no Vanderbilts, Rockefellers, Carnegies, Morgans or equivalents to establish foundational institutes, acadamia, arts, etc...
There is barely one born and raised generation here to speak of... let's face it, Vegas is extremely unique. I'm just glad I had the times I have had... it is what it is. Everything has some tradeoff to it so......... just my 2 lincolns.
SONGMN007
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You
Posted:
10/16/2006 12:01:02 PM
Like it Vinny... another one for "You"
This Love-
This ghost with a thousand
cousins,
lie in wait
appear
cut and sear
everywhere.... everywhere
Everywhere in another's laugh
curve of neck
fall of hair, scent, stare
smile, hands, style
wit and wile
in song- our songs
on films, places, phrases
that were you
that will always be you
Long now I sleep stay
where too, I
can be ghost
and again we can dance
chest to breast
and I can feel, touch
your soul again
and for a time
be
where mine bleeds no more
songmn007
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Just a Thought
Posted:
10/5/2006 6:41:21 PM
" A PRIZE EASILY WON, IS LIGHTLY REGARDED" (oh so true)
songmn007
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Just a Thought
Posted:
10/5/2006 2:10:13 PM
In Human affairs, bad news is 3 miles down the road while good news has barely cleared the city gates....
and....
Some people stay longer in an hour than others do in a day
songmn007
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Just a Thought
Posted:
10/3/2006 6:47:23 PM
Take me, yea take, for all that you can.... words you can feel, but don't understand"
songmn007
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Just a Thought
Posted:
10/3/2006 6:41:12 PM
Carnality and Hot Dogs.... too much relish ruins both.
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