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scar-tissue

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 9/30/2009 4:24:12 PM
I smile at the rhythm of life hard as it may be, I find that light Off beat happenings, up and down seemingly goes round and round Lost roads, with its twists and bends New places found, with means to mend Harvest failed, I again plant my seed For life is a melody, and I play lead

scar-tissue

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 11:59:45 PM
to kill the birdie an unfufilled life long yearn Sylvester, the cat

scar-tissue

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 11:48:26 PM
please dont kill our birds a noble thought indeed, alas finger lickin good

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 7:46:37 PM
Nature's direction budding trees, preducing hope was lost, and now is found

scar-tissue

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 7:40:57 PM
Hear one hand clapping although against my logic ill jump, I believe

scar-tissue

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 5:31:06 PM
Comforting baby's cradle carefull, to not get to snug For soon you will grow

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 9/29/2009 3:44:22 PM
Was because of his drinking I think to often misunderstood As a witness of the disease's effects I think the answer lies in the causes Not strong enough to love himself or maybe, she had never learned Excuses I make not, but blame them fully we can not To feel loved, safe and accepted, is a need, and not a yearn

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 3:08:14 PM
Must not skip this step Importance in this learning This is my release

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reflection of past year into the future... Posted: 9/29/2009 1:16:43 PM
This thread inspired this poem. Maybe not exactly in the spirit of the thread, but figured I would post it anyway. Advice I give mending lives wisdom I have a hundred lives A hundred deaths seemingly lived yet seems to me ive never lived

scar-tissue

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 1:08:02 PM
It will be enough I try to convince myself Wish I could believe

scar-tissue

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 12:07:17 PM
share with everyone instinctively, I often fear its not enough

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 1:07:57 AM
Flying with no wings Sensation like no other Life has no boundries

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/29/2009 12:33:32 AM
fresh euphoria in commiting to my thoughts, new experiance

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Brizo's poems Posted: 9/28/2009 8:10:38 PM
Thanks for catching that, yea I did mean stained glass. I have enjoyed reading some of your writing, so the kind words are appreciated. A good job of analasis to.

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/28/2009 7:59:33 PM
Positions shifting always, signs of a wise soul To doubt is to learn

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/28/2009 6:13:02 PM
Significant finds Most often discovered With in our own minds

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Haiku Connection - This is It ! Posted: 9/28/2009 5:55:35 PM
Plus, minus x, y My old comfortable crutch No longer adds up

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Brizo's poems Posted: 9/28/2009 11:10:09 AM
This is the first time sharing any poetry with others. I am not commited to it, I am not sure I am done with it, but I figure I have to get some feedback eventually. I know little about poetry, but I think my writing has been leading towards it recently. I call it Stain Glass Such a tragically pretty picture, in the shadows, a colourless, intricate unspoken beauty. Depiction of what she has always done, they like to predict what they could project. Oh, those eyes. If I thought it would help I would tell her the light must come, from within And then And only then Will we see the vibrant colour in which she can see herself.

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How does my profile come off? Posted: 7/4/2009 8:11:42 PM
plus, its the name of a song by one of my favorite bands lol

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How does my profile come off? Posted: 7/4/2009 8:09:38 PM
Thanks for the reply missed the typo. I changed the other part to I think you are right, I changed my wording around I dont think I will change my user name, for me scar tissue represents maybe not baggage but life experiance. We all have 'baggage' but for some people it seems too jade's them, I have tried too protray in my profile that I take it and learn from it.

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How does my profile come off? Posted: 7/4/2009 6:59:28 PM
Thanks, I agreed with your points. I added a picture with a close up of my face, not my favorite picture of myself but ill work on it lol. And I seperated into paragraphs. And yea I know they tend to, but im not exactly looking for quantity, and someone I would be interested in (and would be right for me) would be more open minded then too base an opinion of someone on age alone. So im not too worried.

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How does my profile come off? Posted: 7/4/2009 4:47:16 PM
Hey just looking for what everyone else is on this forum. I get some interest but I diddnt feel my old profile gave the right feel about me so I re-did it. First impressions? Suggestions? Always felt internet akward lol, would appreciate some critque ! If you want I will critique yours as well.

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