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 Author Thread: Haiku Connection - This is It !
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/22/2009 8:13:51 PM
hold on to reserve
this one moment in my eyes
starry is my night
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/22/2009 7:26:10 PM
the story ending in his car
just because hood pins really sting
and wasn't that a differnt year?
all but gone from mem'ry, I fear.
and all what lingers is the same
yearning mem'ry of mind, of soul,
for you, for me, and bodies what free
themselves up and let nature be
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/22/2009 7:10:21 PM
total recall fades
now wading in sheep counting
mind at forty hertz
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/20/2009 3:16:50 PM
I need a time-out
for thinking what they're doing
humanity rawks!!!


 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/20/2009 2:10:20 PM
of haiku playmates
effervescence in my glass
bubbles of joy rise
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/20/2009 2:08:21 PM
keeps things in’tresting
salacious duel in the eve
parry and strike fast
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/20/2009 2:07:21 PM
better left unsaid
the thoughts rambling in the eaves
but tell anyway
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/20/2009 2:02:58 PM
a honeyed slow dance
tickles my fancy sweetly-
has me wondering


whew....

over hands, released
from bondage of lustful gaze
stare through to my soul
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/20/2009 1:46:49 PM
hotties in g-strings
litter the beaches of minds
trapped in late autumn.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/19/2009 8:28:49 PM
slipping into night
an inch at a time twilight
peeks under dark's hem

(yo soy MUY cansado....)
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/19/2009 6:57:31 PM
save two hundred billion thousand and ten
what fall to the floor in heaps (daisy petals-
not men) and leave pollen sticky and sweet
on the carpet. oops! loves me not, damn! so then...
capture yet the amber meadow's plain
not one sheaf to pick and winnow ( that's men-
not grain) and cast into the wind and heat
of the heartlands. oops! another rock. turn again...
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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~lost in thought or flight of fancy~
Posted: 11/18/2009 11:26:27 AM
Amatis, my heart and mind is so with that, all of that...and I'm literally out of green ink this morning, so it also made me chuckle. ~L
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/18/2009 11:24:47 AM
Ice Axe, you've outdone yourself. Really well-woven! Bravo!

Just look at the lables of goods on the shelf
Read to be sure that you understand well
What is right in the picture that's wrong inside
Behind is the maelstrom wanting to hide

Lift life through the smoke screen rising there
The sting in your eyes warns of tricky fare
That a hand cannot cover nor push aside
Nor can a mind reconcile much less abide
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/18/2009 12:16:02 AM
Christmas is coming!
Turkey is getting worried
The sun slows to stop
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/17/2009 9:11:34 PM
the leaves are turning
pages of a book flap in
winds of a future
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/17/2009 9:09:45 PM
so i took pity and decided to erase
there went the Y and I found a pit
inside and between. and the T bit
the chalkboard dust where Pi filled

in around now empty spaces. scratch
the P....no time to day for I am left
wallowing without pity itself...solitary
in the taking...
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/15/2009 7:25:16 PM
Tired and teased, tickled till tender
traversing tempting treats with tongues
traveling tasty tempests
alliterative trembles mine !

waxing and waning between metaphores
with you in my arms and you between
nethers for an hour or five or even
a day or night ...i am literally yours.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
Msg: 1248 (view)
 
~lost in thought or flight of fancy~
Posted: 11/15/2009 5:19:50 PM
somehow methinks
we found heav'n not hel
humanity instead of
dread and humility
a bridge perhaps tween
earth and the universe
no secrets to hide
only wonders to tell


 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/15/2009 3:08:51 PM
rather thought you'd see the ones hidden
between the truths or between the lies
miracle ink, invisible, unbidden.

a rainbow in your words and mine
but in one's actions only find
the haze now clear and eyes not blind?

hidden in my rainbow you
forgot to capture greyscale hues.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/14/2009 10:23:31 PM
help me withstand what's now in the hour
help me forget with your touch
i devour the thought of you
i cling to your moments your clock
ringeth over by five minutes...
wake me with your touch
i drink deeply in the well of your
love ~ i stand firm here and now with you
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
Msg: 6514 (view)
 
Old Souls......only
Posted: 11/14/2009 3:16:10 PM
Well now, Sarah...

We always eat for two, feel for two, or more...the door closed
opened another,
hence the words...

and...Old Souls never ask if she's okay...never is.
Like living between two worlds.

And so....

Sarahsonnet

My silent tears what hastened winter’s chill,
Defiant as the hoarfrost on the sill-
It covered pale translucence, blanket thick,
On spring skin harbored next to death’s door: click!

My desolation captured edges own
Despair, and laid it bare at His high throne:
And ashes, coldest cinders of my soul,
Held precious ashes, mingling with my whole.
She lives! And only I can feel her, warm;
Renewed within as though she was not born:
Yet empty arms belie reality
Of time and places only they will see.

To feel for two - an innocence not lost;
But gained, recrystallized in perma frost

~L~
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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~lost in thought or flight of fancy~
Posted: 11/14/2009 2:33:39 PM
indeedy his essence is sweeeeeeeeeet.
Nice.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
Msg: 7939 (view)
 
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Posted: 11/13/2009 10:39:15 PM
we've shared quite a history
we and our kids
do you ever wonder if napping we missed
something important we'll find out someday
like who really painted the kitten that waY?
it's no mystery you say ~
all those years!!!
i'm still want to know just where Eldest hid beer!
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 10:31:19 PM
in my opinion
the naked truth covets clothes
the emperor wore

night night...sales tax is done and i'm off to bed.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 10:22:54 PM
know you there Luri
by the stream under the tree
we are always naked
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 10:16:58 PM
and beer for certain
scotch for me, and a robe please
steamy endeavor
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/13/2009 10:14:20 PM
yoke of debt, not me, that's who
a kid off to college, what can i do?
order more heating oil gotta have that
cuz not gonna sit in my alpaca hat!
and i'll lecture with fervor with royalties due
with a sleigh full of toys and saint nicholas, too (hee. it fit)
and tune your piano for a song and a dime
don't expect me to buy coffee next time!!
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 10:08:40 PM
but then I'm nerdy
just a geek here in disguise
keyboard, wine, hot tub
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 9:34:53 PM
detentions always
learned mimeograph fluid
more fun than classroom
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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~lost in thought or flight of fancy~
Posted: 11/13/2009 9:31:59 PM
when I was lost in thoughts of sin...
i thunk, dear heart. twas born human-
those thoughts may hold the key
to more than what is taught.


i hope some day you see what i
was unfortunate to see and yet
lucky as hell
and just as well....

we meet god between our synapses
perhaps few can feel alive at 40 HZ
without the terror of outrageous
carnal leaps of faith so deep.

it is here we cannot feel- what rules
is marketed is closure -not of love
control your mind what man conspire to own
and live with hel on earth- weep

***************

from a five year old boy:
Sesame Street lies. They say diversity is
a wonderful thing, but what they really mean
is that just because I can see their lies
doesn't mean that they can't make me be
just
like
them.

Ah...
nighty night...
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/13/2009 8:56:30 PM
im done being bold wheres the gun?
so soft it gleams as i rub it with my skirt
safety on and loaded- pull !!! bright
and let it fly, trap is sprung...pigeon's done

what sport am i when bold the sun rises
and in your arms i rest and yet you say goodbye
without a drop of coffee wrapped in clay
no cup of java bold, no targets won...
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 8:44:17 PM
flowing constant calls
howls in the dark frozen still
beckon my lover
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Old Souls......only
Posted: 11/13/2009 5:52:02 PM
I tried to post just the crappy laughy guy but was told that my POST was too short. What do they know, anyway....so...
got busy...


And in the morn I watched the briny crest
As crew and captain both regard the wave
A foe or prisoner within its quest
The sea yet mighty in one heart so brave
What churns and beats within a stalwart breast
Is only sung a hero’s speech to save

And in our song we travel long to save
The errors in a journey at the crest
Of hills alive and full as milky breast
(I’ll bet inserted here: erotic wave)
What serves to suckle meek souls and the brave
Before a life that offers danger’s quest

Orion bold did watch over the quest
His Sword in hand he would Pleiades save
But for himself they’d bow their heads…oh, brave
So brave! they’d fall at****es waiting crest
Spit back at Zeus and tease him with a wave,
A slight of skirt, a thigh, a hint of breast

Orion never thought a bit of breast
Would turn his head from chivalry in quest
Of seven lonely daystars in a wave
Of ecstacy, oh, fie! Why would he save
His ass for less than seven- stroked his crest
Perhaps he’d need that helmet- not so brave

And so the tale of hunter once so brave
Gets chopped to pieces just because one breast
Lay in his hand and raised as stigma’s crest
Of Demi-god- the dumbbell spaced his quest
Oh, heck; not even one erotic save
To credit to his day, goodbye we wave

But one with whom Europa rode the wave
The Ma of Minos, Zeus she rode so brave
Upon his shoulders white with stars to save
She leant to Zeus and held him to her breast
He grinned and planted seed as was his quest
Parade did he to her his rooster’s crest


Brave grew the child at her, Europa’s breast
Wave back the cries of sisters’ rescue quest
Save only for the story’s absent crest

I request a quest depraved!!!
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/13/2009 2:28:02 PM
teasing the senses
or teasing senseless my brain
on wry with swiss cheese
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Old Souls......only
Posted: 11/12/2009 10:36:04 PM

this is violence
'driven'

this is violence
'it crashes'

this is violence
'wresting dragons tonque'

so what is redeemed?



violence? or raw primal urge....and each of those words has more than one meaning.
and i don't need for the words to mean just one anything. i don't even think in words.

but synaesthesia wins in crashes...for my experience is that everything is loud.

kundalini...the serpent/fiery dragon uncoils (twists, wrests free) and rises

driven...compulsive causality... and without words....immediacy is expressed with other than a verbalized request or urging.

redeemed?

Kundalini wins....

always.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/12/2009 10:02:29 PM
then enveloped her
a manila sunrise hugged
horizon's footsteppes
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/12/2009 8:55:29 PM
run away with me?
and the dish was spoooned, by george!
your name IS george, no?
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/12/2009 8:39:02 PM
intended I think
to stimulate and vex or
as request for spoon
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Posted: 11/12/2009 7:04:35 PM
Caught in this moment of sweet smelling rose hips
His hands on my own and his lips on my lips
Tempetuous tossing what rose into bliss
And the bridge tween earth and sky trembles
Touch now the meadow, touch now the banks
Of the river that climbs to flood our sweet lands
Overflowing with bounty what love remands
To the brushstrokes of heavenly tumbles ...
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/12/2009 6:59:24 PM
crunchy soft landing
my teeth through an ice cream bar
white drops on my chin
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Old Souls......only
Posted: 11/12/2009 6:55:08 PM

remind
our hearts
and our souls
that life
is wordless



listen to it snow
it crashes into psyche
a din of silence

of silence driven
bodies into earth between us
minds' fecund wresting

wresting dragon's tongue
within an altar drowning
draw into sound waves

sound waves muffled soft
in primal screams naught yet heard
listen as snow falls



life
is wordless
if we let it be.


They wouldn't let it be.
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
Msg: 6495 (view)
 
Old Souls......only
Posted: 11/11/2009 1:06:11 PM


boobs
seemed much more important than
well, most everything

'cept tight skirts and smoking
what can I say?, at least
I was normal....

...right?




maslowe's hierarchy
air water food sex haiku?
he missed some pieces....


so ya, right...
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/9/2009 6:34:08 PM
i was made this way
cloudy with a chance of sun
creating questions
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/8/2009 11:29:47 PM
their gloved hands anxious
for fireside warm and hearth brick
aglow with her heat
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines
Posted: 11/8/2009 9:29:29 PM
heres to hoping a friend in you I find
a rock in my moutain stream flowing
pink tinged foam in sunset's surf
and a breath I can see in the frigid air
warmth in a locke and heat what yields
passion to share and in it fare
like poignant ideals yet to brew
fragrant camaraderie, me with you
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/8/2009 9:23:30 PM
spun dew into stars
ariadne's bull rises
winter star wall wove
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/8/2009 11:26:13 AM
boy scouts' apple day
of boys loved and being loves
in wars fought unseen
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/7/2009 9:05:43 PM
breathtaking goose bumps
mini mountains of pleasure
rise from your touches
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/7/2009 5:57:01 PM
bloom with open arms
petals to my radiance
green leaves embracing

hello sweet One
 luri
Joined: 5/26/2009
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Haiku Connection - This is It !
Posted: 11/7/2009 5:43:18 PM
alas, such is life
bears de-cave-ing and yawning
for spring's sweet offers
 
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