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Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

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LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 9/1/2008 1:41:43 PM
i will feel it if you don't mind it if i promise to hide babe, you gotta find it that thing i left here for you to see a tiny little memento from the desk of tired me that sun's always shining here in happytown so take a seat, put up yer feet watch close while i drown

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4972 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 9/1/2008 1:13:39 PM
It's just the way of creativity to forget to capture lil' ole me let's do away with the honors of you and decide on our favorite colour of blue the hazy, shady, degrading past is left well alone, got behind me so fast i was running a tune when i ran way far from you we let well enough be, so let's forget this shit, too

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4911 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 8/29/2008 3:54:57 AM
respect their privacy when the truth all falls on me how the future's hard to see and we say "fuk-i-tall" throw our hands up and laugh at the times we were so daft knowing forever never lasts bulletproof and ten foot tall

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4668 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/26/2008 10:03:25 AM
Snubbed out-well smoked-with no future or past expecting this moment to last, baby, last wanting it all but refusing to give one hesitant inch so that you may live drowning in desire, i hike up that skirt revealing the scars left behind the hurt you dusted off the mind of this ne'er do well soon, if we're lucky, we'll come back up from hell

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4666 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/24/2008 4:38:52 AM
enlightened forever by heart of the soul grabbing the chance before we get old to say what we need, and need what we have to rub down those wounds with some ill-gotten salve let's run away, through fields of heather decide when we're finished on living forever it takes just a moment to extinguish the flame but we can be lit for eons in this mindblowing game

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4644 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/11/2008 5:30:59 PM
like a rose deep in thoughts of dew essential oils of what I knew bow down before me to lay their waste as i run for the exit, in all my haste forgetting the memories of you and i no time for wondering, asking you why off i wander, the lust forgotten and only time will tell if the fruit's gone rotten

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4636 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/10/2008 12:17:31 PM
His meanness and cruelty show him for an ass while he's touting and spouting of all his good class his fine upbringing on the right side of town that this one and that one was bringing him down he reigned all supreme til the day she flew to lay waste to the past and it's terrible truth there's no wonder to worry when the day's come to close it's just her in the hot seat, no one else here knows

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4634 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 6/10/2008 11:44:05 AM
forgotten by baby boom empty nesters and such i never thought i'd miss you so much i got used to the using, abusing mistakes that we all got together just to try to unbreak the nest was forgotten at the top of the tree while i lay on the down-covered twigs feeling free you said you would be there at the end of the jaunt just another mistake made by an invisible haunt

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

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LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/29/2008 10:46:05 AM
the safety of shallows in the hole that i've dug it's only three feet deep and yep, filled with bugs i don't mind cause the terrorizer lives out there waiting to take me down to the county fair he was told i do a good impression of me riding the clowns, eating pink cotton candy i'm running as fast as i can with no relief i don't want-can't want- that tale-telling thief

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

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all about me Posted: 4/29/2008 5:06:52 AM
it's not about you or the loss of you today...... today it's about me the pain i'm in the loss of laughter of smiles of bouncy brown curls and pigtail days the loss of innocence it's about my days spent wandering hopeless, lost in a fog of forgiveness redemption at all cost forgetting please, just let me forget that first time i held you and handed you over why won't it stop this waterfall when i can forget every other day of my miserable existence how about today? how can i give them what i wouldn't give you is that even fair?

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4410 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/29/2008 3:37:50 AM
we know deep down we are all in trances waiting on forever while we pose for the trends blaming all our mistakes on wayward circumstances still seeing through the haze that this is surely the end xanax fog, ambien dreams which one will be the death of me which path to chose in this decisive game it's coming to a close, forever shadowed in shame

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4392 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/26/2008 8:19:17 PM
come on baby, try it! you just never know how it's all gonna be at the end of the road maybe, baby blue, i'll be too round to run i'll have to be content to watch you have all my fun (thankya rose...back atcha)

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4390 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/26/2008 7:52:09 PM
to make myself whole i need a whole lotta heat one monster man drivin to the uploaded beat infusing his musings on my weary soul refusing to burn out while never growing old

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4336 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/21/2008 4:24:35 PM
the queen of shadows cannot disguise her thoughts undulating in diamonds the fool went and bought mistaking her pain for the wanting of things he's happy for what the materials bring not to this queen, the shadows hide more than her eyes she'd rather be naked than cleverly guised behind masks made of platinum, secrets of gold whosoever art thou, just be there to hold

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4323 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/21/2008 10:02:51 AM
wanting to feed on the lines that you let trying so hard to fucking forget there's no way of knowing which way we'll go when the lights dim down at the end of this show it's the refusal, rebuttal, reneging of it salty-sweet lies covered in wit dripping intentions never thought of again our time is coming, you just say when

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4275 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/16/2008 11:38:40 AM
does love ever stay the same during intricate moves of the dance? will you ever whisper my name while we second guess this second chance? all questions leave me requesting from the chosen few the lonely, only whereabouts of the not-forgotten you

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 754 (view)

Patchworking Posted: 4/16/2008 9:02:18 AM
i just had to say, Ravin.... that was a fanciful trip...thank you for writing it i read it over about four times before i realized no one (until thorb..yay!!) resurrected the line it makes me happy to see it here in it's own divine right as it should be

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4270 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/16/2008 8:58:12 AM
She hasn't been happy since i don't know when he's strumming a tune that just reeks of pity she's sitting at bay wondering about him again while he's lost in the flow and ebb of the city she's stuck in a time warp, a serious case he's wrestling corporate monkeys for time she's struggling, in fact, to remember his face while he's losing the fight, losing his mind

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 400 (view)

when the fire is all we've got.... Posted: 4/16/2008 8:55:37 AM
materialism is a rich girl's quest to provide down comfort for that unwanted guest playing the host when her dreams lie in wait trying hard to run for that long left open gate i'm running as fast as i possibly can to catch up with the me that decided to lam i'm finding some wealth in the truths of a soul who could bear some resemblance to the me-girl of old words are the wisdom we all clamor for in rhythm we find what we've all waited for that cadence- melodic, hypnotically spoken helps heal a soul that's so close to broken and in the end, all thanks go round to the words that are spoken without making a sound

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 398 (view)

told by the fire of truth.... Posted: 4/16/2008 7:09:22 AM
so the parade is back in town, i see there is no you, therefore, no me i follow where you lay your lead in the end it's just us, alone ......................................... if anyone ever understood the way things go when the going is good we'd all be doing what we could to keep this party going ........................................ and so, i clarify my shit by saying i be done wit it you know i know that's just not fit for the way these things be going ....................................... explanations cleanse the soul, they say i say there's just no frikkin' way you could undo this sunshine day now you've come to prove me wrong ..................................... i don't know what this shit is it just comes out like it wants to and i have to write it sometimes excuse the interruption go on.............................

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4261 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/16/2008 7:03:53 AM
after the snake showed up, the pants fell down found myself riding that shameful clown i knew i shouldn't but in truth, didn't care just wanted what i wanted even when it wasn't there

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4252 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/15/2008 7:39:55 AM
good things come to those who wait we play to the left while the field lays straight mixing it up with twisted view on what comes and goes for me after you so let's play the cards til the day has done what it came to do with a little sun burning up the land with our greenhouse gases injecting affection to slay the masses

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4222 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/14/2008 10:25:31 AM
now is the time, come on girl and bring it.... i'll lay down the music, you come on and sing it by the time the twilight's just rollin' in we'll be swayin' and prayin' for the right to give in temptation follows where ever you go because you pull it out at the end of the show i'm always pretending to be the one that you want i can fake with the best of the peep-show freak taunts

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4220 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/14/2008 9:06:40 AM
tomorrow's new headlines are forgetting your name hoping we'll return the favor when called out in the game playing for positions too detailed to ignore i wonder if they know that we know the score we've been here all the while, while they're spilling their lies laughing behind curtains at our big, doe-ish eyes they really believe we believe all their shit we've all been here before, let's get on with it

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4217 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/14/2008 6:24:15 AM
with consideration to release imprison power i crown myself queen and decree the hour of shining my lovelies upon your sad eyes while stealing you blind with my majestic disguise haha! gotcha...thought you got away? nuh-uh, no how....baby blue, no way i've seen you around, touring the joint bus now get out that ballpoint pen and anoint us

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4053 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/2/2008 4:58:32 PM
emotions respected impartially intact i can't find my way to get the hell back taken aback by the mysterious few who rely on the lines to remind them of you i should know better, but i refuse to care i write with my demons, they all know me there i poke fun at none save my lonely views taking time to remember the person i wish i knew

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 39 (view)

insatiable deviations Posted: 4/2/2008 4:46:11 PM
i just gave up decided to tell you all about the secret life i lead while you're down and out my own little story such a sad narrative there's no way around it this is the way i live and give til it hurts hurting til i scream i woke up just the other day to find you just a dream stopped taking the pills they gave me that were supposed to numb the pain wow, the years came rushing up i'll never get lost again there's always a sadness in goodbye a tear lost in the final wave a jumping in, a tearing down sliding into our graves i've dug a hole for us out there in the back it's a small world, after all and i think i've lost my knack of storytelling and tales of tells

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 4051 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 4/2/2008 4:40:50 PM
Not just for others but for you too my one with another let's cue blue beat back the homesick with the chosen few we'll giggle til you come quick have i got news for you

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 2188 (view)

Poems By All ...Read page one...Just add one more line Posted: 4/2/2008 3:59:04 PM
to pry them apart was the dream of all the parents while still hanging on to vivacity with little to no coherence this innovative endurance was from a dare sent as intuition warned me what "love" really meant Somehow I squandered the feelings heaven sent so straight to hell in a hand basket without the rent the landlady won't even take a night out as pay

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 2185 (view)

Poems By All ...Read page one...Just add one more line Posted: 4/2/2008 12:02:28 PM
to pry them apart was the dream of all the parents while still hanging on to vivacity with little to no coherence this innovative endurance was from a dare sent as intuition warned me what "love" really meant

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3989 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/31/2008 9:35:36 AM
God please find my final line among the lies and bind me to them with unbreakable ties the name doesn't know where the insanity ends so let's play along, be nice little friends there's a reason for flowing the rhythm and words someone's out there listening for what's to be heard there's a lyrical miracle somewhere in the wings when you write it out baby, oh, how i sing

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

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Poems By All ...Read page one...Just add one more line Posted: 3/27/2008 7:18:36 PM
to pry them apart was the dream of all the parents while still hanging on to vivacity with little to no coherence

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3900 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/24/2008 7:42:36 PM
oh but the pain a heart can bring to life the never-ending never-land of wasted years we choose to be and so we must conform learn to hide behind the smiling tears we're wanting the butterflies, the magic of the past to woo us, to wake us, to shake us at last to figure us out as we're wont to do withering behind the shadow of you

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3898 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/24/2008 7:35:02 PM
the warm loving embraces chill me to the core with love from the lonely faces who don't know how to love anymore tender words meant to be kind falling on deaf ears infusing themselves with my weakened mind while refusing to showcase my fears

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3850 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/20/2008 7:45:13 PM
her dancing eyes remain to see the journey through her long-fed lies enslave bringing me back to you the truths we told so long ago those days are so far past your words whispered, your tone too low now the question can never be asked

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 397 (view)

the great white lie..... Posted: 3/9/2008 7:38:08 PM
we took the messages of not needing anyone the songs that outlasted the damage we had done the bipolar ways of the simple minded few remind me to reprimand when i think of you lost and lonely lusty lass never needed anyone hummed a tune of evermore no other song needed sung she laughed her crazy days away with the chosen few and reminds me to reprimand when i think of you when i think of you this smile alights my lips thoughts do travel fast, love from tips to swivel hips there's not a moment that goes by or a song that's sung in tune the remembering is reprimand when i think of you

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3661 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/9/2008 7:32:11 PM
the prince lost his balls in a croqueting game hit them so hard he forgot his own name bent over in pain, what a sight to see we'll surely be beheaded cause we laughed til we peed let's run away, you and i, away to the hills we'll eat small animals and use rocks for pills lie close together, recalling the days when the prince of the paupers lost his lust ways

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3600 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/6/2008 8:01:25 PM
Learning, teaching, helping to guide me that succubus who learned all the right skills i turned into someone from deep inside me that pleasure mongering feline goes in for the kill she's killing me softly, wanting the wait i can take it no more, i must leave this place she's doing things with my body i need but the fulfillment is more than a physical greed

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3484 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/2/2008 6:42:07 PM
she knows my thoughts and how i take sides you underestimate me, baby, how hard i can ride she keeps me pure, in white lace attire you shun me, baby, in all my fire she is the other, you are the one which one is the only once we have begun where does desire cross over to shame who will it be calling me in this game

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3480 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/2/2008 4:51:36 PM
we kiss her just where she is sore that fall-down drunk of a little town whore how can she not give and give so that we can just live and live? oh, Mother Earth, where are we now? have you found a haven yet?? for when the ignorant are done with you Mother, there will be nothing left

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3459 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/1/2008 7:51:54 PM
to you, i humble myself to you, i ask forgiveness to you, i seek guidance to me, i am you to me, i choke on these words to me, i know the truth to me, i see who you are to you, i know me

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3457 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/1/2008 7:40:37 PM
i cannot ever know what you conceive perceive of me i only know, truly what i believe i need from me

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3453 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/1/2008 7:06:03 PM
it's good she'll make another start while better women have fallen apart take a few blue pills, my dear there's no need to feign the lust in here the thoughts were broken long ago while the brain's been wading in waste listening to shit that flows and flows better than me have come to taste

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3451 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/1/2008 6:34:42 PM
he always was the master, of the writing of your prose you always did know better, of going the way the wind blows he always tilted sideways, to get a better view walking in step beside, behind that side of you we knew the story before we got started, we cannot tell a lie you knew the way this was going, baby so did i a few thrusts in the dark are all we knew, that's why we were needed now maybe we can sit and talk, while the lust goes by unheeded

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3446 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 3/1/2008 4:53:16 PM
eventually everything will have it's time you'll have your cake, then the icing from mine we'll wine and dine, relax for a day before hiking up the mountain of "have it my way" i'll say what i need said to get you to start you'll wind up the wisdom with some words to impart we'll wheel and deal, have enough left for one take the kickbacks from the lackluster gun

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3389 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 2/28/2008 6:19:27 AM
we make Love in the tub, soak'n up the bubbles toil, toil, tin foil for your troubles he's made up his mind, he's leaving before i turn into a witch, go bitch to the whore he's saddened by my lack of respect i warned him, darn him, of what to expect when dating a living legend such as i you never know just when i'll pass you on by playin' catchup... for a hundred more he can have the whole piece keep what you catch, catch what you eat this fishing hole is not for the faint you're giving up time while i'm huffing the paint ingesting the fumes put off by the whole don't tell me you didn't mind all the rules i know you know me better than i i can't just sit and watch it go by

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 38 (view)

internal gratification Posted: 2/28/2008 6:06:17 AM
i weeded you out of the many replies you wormed your way in with a handful of lies you told me my truths were far from the norm i couldn't see past the lust to the coming storm whirlwind's all broken, the passion has run it's time to forget about life with just one the welded iron turned my finger green and the words that you say, well, i know what you mean i hear when you say that you love me so much that there could never be another whose touch touches your soul the way my freaky fingers do when i'm pulling the man out from deep inside you but, i know different now, for sure don't ask how, just tell me once more tell me that you love me like no other and that you could never fall for another i'll believe you like i used to do one more night, one more night....these things we do i'm happy to have loved you and grateful that you can see the end as well as i

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3386 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 2/28/2008 5:58:39 AM
fly on swiftest wing, get here any day then just when i think you're real, baby, look away turn sideways so i can see the real you not the picture perfect image you introduced me to real love, shmeal love, there's no such luck when one woman, one man don't give a fuck no one cares at the end of the walk where sex is cheap and love's just talk

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3372 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 2/27/2008 10:15:08 AM
;) as soon as you're gone he'll be flying to me! he knows, after it all, that i'm still a queen he's seen me naked, witnessed the rolls likes to play games in-between the folds ah, but another on-line conquer to taste what a shame he won't last, oh, such a waste he'll dry himself up by the third or fourth day then i'll have to find one more that just wants to play

Shadow Queen

Joined: 5/23/2006

Msg: 3370 (view)

LAST LINE BECOMES YOUR FIRST LINE OF AN 8 (EIGHT) LINE STANZA Posted: 2/27/2008 8:26:51 AM
still searching for a course in art while i'm slowly being torn in two waiting for us to fall apart when i become me and you befriend you he knows what i mean when i say the end the vision between us has been espied no need to keep up appearances, friend when we said "forever" in the middle of a lie

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