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 bigbare01
Joined: 7/11/2006
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life
Posted: 7/7/2009 12:03:29 AM
anyone have any thoughts?
 bigbare01
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veterans
Posted: 7/7/2009 12:02:59 AM
hey anyone have any thoughts on my poem?
 bigbare01
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need some help completing this poem
Posted: 7/7/2009 12:00:59 AM
anyone have any ideas?
 bigbare01
Joined: 7/11/2006
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need some help completing this poem
Posted: 7/4/2009 12:46:28 PM
When My Mother Left
when my mother moved out
I felt like squeezing the whole world

when my mother moved out
I couldn't hold my soul any more

When she left I thought I would shout
out loud and cry my heart out

Before my mother moved out
I thought things where fine

But when my mother moved out
I thought the whole world would explode.


please help me complete this poem
 bigbare01
Joined: 7/11/2006
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veterans
Posted: 7/4/2009 12:45:08 PM
Veterans

veterans are brave
veterans fight for what's ours and theres,freedom
veterans have the most honored grave
veterans kept our country free
and our country, united states of america say,
"Thank you, we honor and love you with all our hearts"

what do you think of this one?
 bigbare01
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life
Posted: 7/4/2009 12:40:05 PM
Life
Life has its wonders
Life is a wonder
Life has its mysteries
Life is a mystery
Life has its feelings
Life is a feeling
Life will treat you in mysterious ways
Life will give you horrors
Life can be overwhelming
Life can be not enough
But Life is good


what does everyone think?
 
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