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Joined: 6/22/2011

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Looking for some feedback please :) Posted: 4/25/2012 9:26:27 PM
You're the Clownfish. You have written a profile that comes across as flippant. How about being sincere? What kind of a guy are you really? Think about who you are, what do you want in a woman? Woman want to see more of the adult male looking for a relationship and less of the big kid being silly. It's not that you can't be lighthearted but I think there needs to be a balance.

Joined: 6/22/2011

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Changed my profile and need some feedback. Posted: 4/25/2012 9:12:01 PM
I would like to read a little more sincerity and a little less sass. Humour, when written, can come across as flat. Save the humour for when you meet her. Your second photo, are you channeling Sid Vicious?

Joined: 6/22/2011

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Profile review please Posted: 4/25/2012 9:03:32 PM
The comment about the fact that you are not a "d-bag a-hole", ( I shudder to think what that could be) is unnecessary. Please, don't go to the land of negativity, even for a brief visit. Seeing those three photos of you and your drinking buddies suggests to me that you plan to group date. That is not a bad idea in itself, but maybe not right at the get-go. Personally, I think ONE photo of your pals is more than sufficient.

Joined: 6/22/2011

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What do you think of my profile? Posted: 4/25/2012 8:48:47 PM
You have obviously taken a lot of care to write that first paragraph. But, man, that is a lot of negativity. I think you are still suffering from the breakup. (It's like you can't win.) "D...ed if you do and d...ed if you don't." Take a different perspective. I think you should delete that first paragraph totally and write something else. Read what you have written down below and put some of those ideas, in sentences, at the beginning.

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Is my profile 'adequate' ? Posted: 4/25/2012 8:35:29 PM
I agree with Rob3444. [Write something.]

Joined: 6/22/2011

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Take a look Posted: 4/25/2012 8:27:47 PM
I like your profile. My only suggestion is to put photo #5 (the one with the big fish) as your main photo. Try it for a couple of weeks - see what happens.

Joined: 6/22/2011

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HELP! Do I have 3 heads? What's wrong with my profile? Posted: 4/25/2012 8:20:58 PM
I think the photo of you in the blue dress should be your main photo. I think you should delete your current main photo ( you in front of the map). Since I am a woman, I don't read many women's profiles, so I may be off base. You seem to be kind of a tiger, and a guy will need a thick skin if he is going to be with you. Maybe that is fair warning for him, but I'm not sure a lot of guys would find it attractive. Is there a way to be yourself but not appear so "in your face"?

Joined: 6/22/2011

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Criticism please. Posted: 4/25/2012 8:10:03 PM
Just a couple of small things. I counted four references to drinking. If alcohol does play an fairly significant role in your life, then by all means, keep the references in your profile. As a woman who drinks only rarely, that would be a signal, for me, not to email you. The other point is - your greeting of "Hello Ladies." Yes, we all understand that you are going to meet and date more than one woman. I just think its more appealing if you don't advertize that you are looking for multiple women. I've seen it written before and I'm sure I'll see it again, personally I find it a bit of a turnoff. I think the pictures of the cars are great.

Joined: 6/22/2011

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Am I coming off like a jerk? Posted: 4/24/2012 8:38:07 PM
You have only one interest: working out. You night add some other things that you like to do. That would round it out a bit more. First date: tell her not what you don't want to do, but rather what you WOULD like to do for a first date. You are a young man with a fit body but the photos don't do you justice. Get some different lighting and crack a smile or at least have a slightly more happier expression, you look kind of sad, but I dont think you are sad.

Joined: 6/22/2011

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please pick it apart!! Posted: 4/24/2012 8:26:03 PM
I can understand that you want to show the real you in your photos. Perhaps the reason that you have better luck in the grocery store is that you look better in person than you do in these photos. Maybe remove a few of the photos that are harsh, ok you are a rough and tumble guy, but lets see a bit of the side that you are showing in the grocery store. You look like you have good teeth. How about something a bit softer, can we see a little gentleness? A nice smile? It's just an idea.

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