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 Author Thread: Please revue my profile
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Please revue my profile
Posted: 2/14/2013 12:45:47 PM
So you come to have your profile reviewed(the correct spelling,not revue as you posted),and the first thing I noticed when I clicked on your profile was that you have a dog as your main photo??..why?

Women are here to meet you and if they see the main photo attached,they are liable to fall in love with the dog faster,so get rid of it along with the pics of the trailer,the other dog,and you having a cigarette in your mouth because

A)They want to gaze upon you and you only,not what you own,and

B)Many women are simply not attracted to smokers.

Replace all your pics for starters and make sure you are smiling,and make sure they are crystal clear as the one decent pic you have is too grainy and hard to make out
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 11 (view)
 
What makes you reply to a message more?
Posted: 2/8/2013 5:05:29 PM
time to cash in Cowboy,because I want my tequila!
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
A quick review?
Posted: 2/8/2013 4:56:56 PM
Pictures can say a lot about a person.Post one and make it your primary picture of you smiling,because the ones that you have up now make you look glum.Smiling is one of the main attributes that women notice when scrolling your profile.

Remove the part of you living alone and replace it"independent" or something similar.

Delete the part about you not being attracted to black women,and instead replace it with the ideal woman you are searching for because that is negative and has no place in a dating profile.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 3 (view)
 
arms folding/ arms crossed pose question.
Posted: 2/8/2013 4:47:42 PM
perhaps you have stumbled upon an unknown fetish for women who cross their arms in their photos
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 19 (view)
 
British Comedies Anyone?
Posted: 2/6/2013 6:40:30 AM
Shaun of the Dead is probably one of my favorite comedies to ever come out of the British Isles.It had me rolling on the floor with laughter!

Gangsters,Guns,and Zombies is a similar movie to Shaun of the Dead,and while not nearly as funny,it was still a pretty entertaining flick that still captured my interest.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 3 (view)
 
Relationship or To Easy?
Posted: 2/4/2013 1:08:46 PM
Change the Intenet part of the profile because you want to date,but nothing serious indicates that you are looking for fun,but when a guy sees that,he will automatically think of sex.


Post more pics with smiling as the ones that you have up now are giving the vibes that you are trying for a seductive approach and once again,guys will think about sex
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Guys thoughts/feelings on Valentine's Day
Posted: 2/4/2013 12:09:29 PM
I have been single most of my life and Valentine's Day in my opinion is just another day to go out and celebrate with friends or family,because you do not have to feel the emotions that you stated when you have people in your life that love you no matter what.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 39 (view)
 
What makes sex bad for you?
Posted: 2/2/2013 12:23:49 PM
when my hand falls asleep
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 3 (view)
 
So, Review me, let me know what YOU think!!
Posted: 2/2/2013 12:07:22 PM
You need to retouch your main photo a little bit,because it is a little blurry and hard to make out.

Remove the photo of the young girl which I assume is your daughter right away,because no pics of kids should ever be viewed on a dating site.

Remove the last portion of the About Me profile,because Background Checks in any dating profile will instantly raise red flags and get you past over for the next profile,because those 2 words alone could make women suspicious of you if you are giving them the option to actually do one on you
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 7 (view)
 
Review my profile please.
Posted: 1/30/2013 7:45:52 AM
make the second picture your main photo,because women love a guy that has style,and delete the 2 pics that you have of you wearing sunglasses and hats,because women want to explore your pics,and nothing should be obscuring your head or your eyes
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
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Review me Please
Posted: 1/30/2013 7:35:58 AM
Well you do talk about gaming alot especially in the very first part of your profile,so my advice to you is to do an advanced search and type in your interests and see if anyone has the same hobby or career as you.

The one important factor that can affect you is that you lack a personal vehicle,and that will cause many,if not most women to simply skip your profile all together because if you are looking for something serious,you must be able to provide transportation for yourself on a date,as no woman wants to be a personal driver constantly should the two of you hit it off.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
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WTF ? Stalker magnet.....
Posted: 1/30/2013 7:24:23 AM
is this a serious question,or are you looking for attention?
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Do you gals want a gent who's 'too nice?' or a jerk?
Posted: 1/30/2013 7:23:09 AM
You should have done a thread search on the subject that you have posted,because it has been posted many times in various forums,and millions have asked the same question over and over again
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
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please review my profile
Posted: 1/29/2013 5:11:07 PM
Crop the second photo,so that it shows only you standing and make it your primary photo so that the women you seek know that you are a sharp dresser.

Remove all photos of your child ASAP,because under no circumstances should a child's pic be on a dating site.EVER.

Try not to take photos of you wearing sunglasses because it obscures the eyes.

Profile is pretty good,and First Date is fine,but unless you are sending mail to users who don't drink at all,do a new search for women who are casual drinkers.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 5 (view)
 
Racism but cant find the user
Posted: 1/29/2013 4:51:45 PM
that's ignorance rearing it's ugly head,and whoever had the profile hopefully did everyone a favor and made it disappear for good
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
How far is too far to travel for someone
Posted: 1/29/2013 6:39:21 AM
if it involves leaving the country,then you know it's to far
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 3 (view)
 
Why don't people have the courtesy to respond??
Posted: 1/29/2013 6:33:17 AM
It depends on the type of women that you are sending messages to,because if they are the stunners and head turners that you are aiming to catch,one has to take that factor,that their mailbox is bombarded with hundreds of letters such as yours,and she is simply ignoring them,or if she is indeed responding to them,simply has not reached your letter and has not made contact with you yet.

You are not the only user who asks this question,because their are literally hundreds of posts like this on this website everyday.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 4 (view)
 
is my profile ok?
Posted: 1/29/2013 3:41:39 AM
you are missing the First Date portion of the profile which basically gives no indication on what future prospects can expect you to take them
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 12 (view)
 
advice and pointers please on my profile
Posted: 1/28/2013 5:27:37 PM
A few things that I have noticed include your decision on whether to have kids or not is affecting the lack of interest in your profile,is because many women hope to establish a meaningful relationship that can lead to a future where children are present,and the desire to be a mother,and the other is that you state that you are non-religious,which is your choice,but have you tried messaging women that have the same beliefs that you share?
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 9 (view)
 
Profile review please.
Posted: 1/28/2013 5:19:44 PM
the only problem that I can see is that in all the photos that you have posted,you have a hat on(most of them)and sunglasses on in a couple of them,so why not try posting a photo that doesn't obscure the head features,and see where it gets you
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 30 (view)
 
rejection does it get easier
Posted: 1/17/2013 6:22:09 PM
put it this way..i have been rejected so many times that not only have i stopped taking count,but i have also stopped looking and caring to boot
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 7 (view)
 
Edit, re-edit, I digress. Time for a profile review.
Posted: 8/15/2012 12:58:59 PM
you list yourself as a person who smokes often which can be a problem if you are not doing an advanced search for women who are also chronic cigarette smokers,because the majority of women on this site list themselves as non-smokers and will not give the time of day to someone who smells like an ashtray
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
New Pics - please review whole profile
Posted: 8/14/2012 2:55:46 PM
you should never post a pic of yourself looking down and with eyes closed.for now make the second pic your main photo and delete the third one because you posted it twice.you have to smile more instead of a smirk,because honestly it looks like you were about to burst with laughter
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Playing it cool?
Posted: 8/14/2012 1:39:05 PM
my guess is he is taking it easy because he was either previously engaged in a task and couldn't reach you in those 24 hours or he wants to see how you and him interact on a daily basis before he decides to make his move
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Any help would be appreciated!
Posted: 8/14/2012 1:35:59 PM
well not is going to happen without any pics since you have them listed as private,but i will give it a shot anyhow.you are wanting to a relationship,yet you are seeking friends.so which one is it?if you want a relationship you should be seeking long term or dating because what you have posted is confusing.take out the warning part of your profile since you have no pictures posted,it has no reason being on there.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 6 (view)
 
I need some profile guidance
Posted: 8/14/2012 2:32:28 AM
make the fifth pic your main photo because you obviously smile alot and it should show on your profile
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 3 (view)
 
So hows it looking
Posted: 8/12/2012 2:53:09 PM
well for starters you have only one picture of yourself and you are shirtless so that will get you know where on here as many women want to see pics of men with clothes on.you have N/A posted under the Profession part of your profile which means no job,basically saying you can't support yourself let alone pay to go on a date and lastly your profile is way to short and boring.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Please review my profile
Posted: 8/12/2012 2:08:27 PM
don't post a picture of yourself holding a beer on a dating site.have you tried searching women with the particular interests that you have?start there because any woman that sees your profile will picture you as a man-child who refuses to grow up and isn't ready for a serious relationship,so the best advice that i can give you is already stated above.try it and see who pops up on your computer screen
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Please review me
Posted: 8/12/2012 1:56:51 PM
dude you have no pics period.it does not matter that they are private for a reason.if you do not have any pics no one is going to look at your profile anyway,much less than review because others will give you the same advice.want a review?..then post a pic and then you will have your profile critique
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile advice appreciated
Posted: 8/12/2012 1:51:16 PM
picture are good but the only thing I can think is that,since you lack a vehicle women will simply ignore your profile because they expect a man to have a car so that they can be picked up for a date.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 5 (view)
 
Advice for a guy!
Posted: 8/11/2012 2:01:54 PM
you will want to add a first date section to your profile to garner more interests.shirtless pics on here do not work.the fact that you do not want children will have most women ignore your profile for the simple fact that the single ones out there will want to eventually want to start a relationship that leads to a family in the near future.my advice is to go to the advance search and look for the females that do no want any kids and shoot them a message and see what you get
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 9 (view)
 
please help review my profile
Posted: 8/11/2012 1:54:04 PM
saying "hi,how are you" is to typical for the women on this site.for more responses think of something original to send because the hi,how are you is done to death on this site
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
What's On The Verge Of The Universe?
Posted: 8/9/2012 11:40:06 AM
Maybe a passage to another dimension considering how many scientists are trying to prove that countless dimensions do in fact exist
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 12 (view)
 
Ready to Throw in the Towel
Posted: 8/9/2012 11:30:58 AM
Have you tried the Profile Review section?
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile review...pretty please?
Posted: 8/9/2012 11:29:13 AM
you have a beautiful smile judging from your pics but you have to have that captured in a seperate picture that only includes you because two people in one picture is distracting when one ganders at your profile.

Pretty eyes like you have should never be hidden behind a pair of sunglasses that you have posted as your main photo because one cannot be amazed by their beauty if you shelter them.

First Date section is completely absent and should be posted so potential first dates know where to take you out so that you can bond on said first date
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile review please
Posted: 8/8/2012 11:28:30 AM
ever try adding photos?..you would gain more interests in your profile if you simply add pics of yourself smiling because no woman in her right mind is going to even glance at your profile because a profile with no image means no date/chat/friends,etc.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
What am I missing? Profile Review Please.
Posted: 8/6/2012 10:15:36 AM
could be some of the pics you have posted like you at a gun range which i suggest you take down because most women do not like guns which they assume with violence.make the last pic your primary photo because it shows how buff you are,you have an attention getting smile and you kept your shirt on(which annoys women when men post pics on their profile without a shirt) and last remove the word hating off of your interests list a word like that has no business being anywhere on a dating site
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Please Review and Constructive criticize.
Posted: 8/6/2012 10:09:39 AM
how about you remove the words deviant and evil from your profile because that makes your profile look bad and it will reflect on the author for those that see your profile and will assume that you carry these traits
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Review my account please
Posted: 8/5/2012 4:06:32 PM
try adding a few more pics and be sure to smile because you have already posted 4 pictures and you have nearly the same expression on all of them and see where that takes you,because a smile on a woman is a sure guarantee for more interests in your profile
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 5 (view)
 
WHAT SHOULD I SAY?
Posted: 8/4/2012 5:42:16 PM
you seek a woman for friends,so why not treat them as a new friend that you would like to get acquainted with and discuss a topic that pops to mind
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Search by political beliefs?
Posted: 8/4/2012 5:39:45 PM
did you try Interests?
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile review PLEASE....
Posted: 8/3/2012 4:39:40 PM
where to start friend..I will start with the lack of First Date section which doesn't describe not a shred of evidence on what you would call a good time and leaves the potential date in the dark because she has no idea on what to expect if she wants to go out with you.Your profession is hidden which means you are embarassed by your job or have no job at all if that is what you post.begging for a laugh makes you look desperate and it will show if you have an awkward moment on a date which should not be acknowledged
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 95 (view)
 
Guys, is masturbating 5x a day abnormal in your 30s??
Posted: 8/3/2012 4:31:58 PM
i would be lucky if i can do it twice a day,because once is the norm and the rest of the day i am either reading,watching a movie or playing x-box 360
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
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Please check me out ;p
Posted: 8/3/2012 9:02:55 AM
Wow this is actually a tough one,but the only problem that I can see is that maybe with you being divorced could be the factor as no man wants to be involved with the drama of the ex-husband.You should mention in your profile how often the ex-husband is in your life or if you done away with for good,because the way i see if you are on a date and the ex shows that will cause the date to end and he bails
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
What's wrong?
Posted: 8/1/2012 12:42:08 PM
man your profile reads like big joke book and makes you sound like a drunk which no woman in her right mind would ever contact you unless you take the necessary steps to actually sit down and think of a well crafted profile and be honest about it.delete all your pics pronto and never post a picture with the caption of you being drunk because as i reiterate no lady will ever touch a drunk ever.having a pictire of you and your mom is cool but does it really belong on a dating site?
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile Feedback/Advice
Posted: 8/1/2012 12:33:03 PM
well for one you listed yourself being a non-smoker yet the main pic shows you holding a cigar which is confusing to any woman that looks at your profile,so delete the photo and replace it with the fourth picture because it shows a clear head shot and a genuine smile which women love to look at to show that you know how to have a good time
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Please!! Profile Review.
Posted: 7/31/2012 12:47:11 PM
switch the main pic you have posted with the second photo because that is a smile that anyone call fall in love with.you seek a Christian man,but virtually nothing is known as the specific qualities you yearn to seek other than based on religion.are you looking for local men or men over seas so that a potential mate can know whether he can contact you.basically revamp your entire profile with a variety of interests so that when a mate sees what you have posted he knows what type of activity he can make a date for
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile Review plz
Posted: 7/28/2012 12:54:55 PM
you are a beautiful young lady and i read the profile which seems fine,but when it comes to your pictures you really should smile more because it will do wanders for your profile.delete the second picture because it is to hazy to make out and i noticed you posted one of your pics twice,so remove it and replace the two that i mentioned and make sure you smile because guys love it when they see a smile on a lady's face
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 6 (view)
 
Profile is up for Review
Posted: 7/22/2012 12:59:04 PM
adding more pics would be quite benefitial in your cause because they only pic you have posted is pretty good,so try posting more like those in the near future.you listed movies as an interest.exactly what genre is your favorite because believe it or not some women actually like to know these sort of things.you are waiting for first contact?why not be the man and you send out the first contact because many women still liked to be asked out by guys.
 lucky2beme
Joined: 12/29/2011
Msg: 2 (view)
 
Profile Help
Posted: 7/22/2012 12:54:09 PM
well you are fairly new here and patience is the key.remember you're in competition with thousands of women on here and you have to make your profile stand out.you need to add more pics including a full body shot and be sure to smile,because the two pics you have posted makes you look glum.coffee on a first date is so boring and too cliche for the 21st century.how about an amusement park or a fancy restuarant?looking at your interests,i have come to the conclusion that you love being outdoors alot.why not go to the interests part of the advanced searches and type in a few of the activities you have listed and make contact with the ones that share these interests and hopefully you will find the one to fill the void
 
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