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Thread: Review my Profile Please
indiallias
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Review my Profile Please
Posted:
10/10/2009 5:24:11 PM
i would fill your profile up with as many good pics as u can do as opposed to just 1 although that 1 is pretty good.
I love your profile headline as it is original. At the same time it comes across as ****y - a.k.a b1tchy (i love the way an adult site prevents us from acting like adults) though confidence is indeed a virtue.. Yet fitting or not i will leave it as your call..
But yeah your profile isn't amazing but enough is there to make you sound approachable so best of luck to you mistress. Oh! and could you role play as u the dominatix and me the helpless damsel in distrsss please. Just a fetish thing. lol jk
indiallias
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Why do i see this in women's profiles?
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10/10/2009 5:13:25 PM
haha this issue sounds deep with you Darth vader.
But yeah i get what you are saying. I have always been prone to dating women with kids that wern't my own, but every girl i have met with kids have had little else to say apart from their kids which is off putting. Now i don't message girls that have kids.
In every source there is good and bad to different people but there is a way of wording things. But ya message wise, i would say give the girls that say that a chance.
Personally i don't care but overall a simple few messages to suss the person out isn't too hard time wise.
indiallias
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Ack!! Still need help!
Posted:
10/10/2009 4:45:32 PM
fantastic profile and great pics. You tick all the boxes. If it is not working for you then maybe mix and match pof and real life.
POF has its positives and minuses. The minus being it is easy to sit there and analize an email message, so a guy that might be right for you, you might turn away as he may have not been interesting enough via email for you or what not. Or he is interesting via email, but after 1 meet the person isn't like the email so the decision is made.
where as maybe after 2 or 3 dates that person u turned away may have been perfect. its one flaw that makes internet dating a lot harder than real life dating as much as it seems easier this way.
Personally i think without internet dating there would be a lot more happy people out there in relationships yet at the same time for people that really need internet dating it is a good thing..
indiallias
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This any good? Thoughts?
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9/25/2009 4:27:54 PM
i get what you are saying Lynette39. I really do and you are right...
it is a line that will only inspire 5 in 100 people for example to wanna date with him. At the same time it is a great line.
I am not a fan of tattoos with stars in or tattooos that cover the whole arm on women but it is their own choice so i don't blame the guy for stating his fussiness.
At the same time i agree as i leave my options going where i chat with everyone that messages me and if i dont feel a connection then i let it go. So better to keep the options going as opposed to playing the; 'stand the ground guy' as there is always an un-known surprise.
Judging people by words is easier than real life so all i say is meet everyone and anyone for xp that you are vaguely interersted in and go from there. Plus you are not being an azz as girls do the same thing..
internet dating is weird... yet has its resources :)
indiallias
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This any good? Thoughts?
Posted:
9/25/2009 3:54:04 PM
Like whitewaterraft says. at the same time reasoning is perfectly justifyable..
Many moons ago the pof creator liked playing spanky with womans photos. He ran outta photos so created a free dating site. he met a girl called Dawn Link and it never worked so from that day on, he banned all links at POF..
Simple really..
mah jk it is just as your link may be riddled with viruses i imagine. At the same time you can message any girl you like with your link so pointless really but a fair point..
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Good profile by the way it was interesting to say the least.. Use your wit when you message girls without rambling too much and you will be fine me thinks. there is a reason why 'short and sweet' is called 'short and sweet'
Most men say the same rubbish so be different dude and by being different it means you are more scencere
indiallias
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Any help is appreciated
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9/25/2009 1:19:18 PM
tstwii i love your review it is awesome.
the last 3 sentences made me laugh out loud.
Big up yourself.. to the remix of, big up yourself...
At the same time good job
indiallias
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Re-vamped my profile......
Posted:
9/23/2009 3:28:07 PM
Confidence is a good thing but channel it in the right way man. When the planets of Jupiter colide with Mars they will colide tis all.
Scrap your profile mate and start again.. So far it looks like you are telling women what they are thinking subliminally in your mind and on the outside looks pretty obvious to anyone.
like if i said text wise.
I went to washington 'sleep with me' today
I went to washington 'sleep with me' today
I went to washington 'sleep with me' today
I went to washington 'sleep with me' today
pretty obvious huh??
At the same time you probably didn't mean to sound that way so just start afresh and have a browse through the profile writing tips at the top of the profile review page for added ideas and walla come back again if you feel the need for another review....
GL
indiallias
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Looking for some constructive advice......
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9/23/2009 3:14:18 PM
Tbh completely honest..... It is only mainly profile reviewers that really care whether there are kids in photos or not.
get a grip peeps, get a grip. Petition against tv pamper adverts; or something more useful like tree murderers :)
indiallias
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widow needs advice on how to regain custody of my daughter.
Posted:
9/23/2009 3:09:58 PM
just get a new kid. you could probably pick one up on ebay. Hell i would even sell you my sperm for a hefty price. Want your kids to do well in school as well as being narrow minded then hey pick me.
I know you will make the right choice. waiting...... still waiting....... doooo doooo dooo.
indiallias
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I'd like your opinions, please - UPDATED
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9/23/2009 8:55:09 AM
i was a bit rambly with the speedway and first paragraph comment for my own amusement as was drinking and bored at the time so apologies for that. The speedway comment is fine and the last paragraph works well at the end of the profile.
Funny how just moving a paragraph can make a lot of difference. Well for me anyway.
All in all your profile is pretty free flowing now and sounds interesting.
GL once again.
indiallias
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I'd like your opinions, please - UPDATED
Posted:
9/20/2009 2:43:19 PM
The paragraph below i found boring sorry to say. I tried to look past it with the age difference but couldn't do it. I think it would be nice to see it and I am sure anyone that has seen it will think it amazing but as a dating paragraph it isn't a man puller. If you wish to keep it then fair play just add it a paragraph or two down as currently isn't a good opening to hold peoples attention.
<div class="quote"> There's a building that I drive past on my way to work every morning which has one wall that is made entirely of large square panes of glass. In the spring and autumn, when the sun is at the right angle in the sky, the panes become shimmering rainbows, each one sparkling like a crystal. With the movement of the car, the whole wall becomes like a multi-faceted gem twinkling in the sunlight. This sight never fails to amaze me and I never tire of seeing it. I'd love to show it to you.
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Having said the above i think the below paragraph is a fantastic paragraph and full of interest and would suit better as a first paragraph.
<div class="quote"> I like country pubs, village life, sunsets, thunderstorms, being near the ocean, the smell of baking bread and freshly mown grass, the first green blush on the trees in the spring, the long light summer evenings, the sound of childrens' laughter and the sound of rain falling on the leaves of the hostas underneath my window.
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3rd paragraph.. pretty good but the last sentence i don't think was necessary.
<div class="quote"> Why? Because when they release an album it is generally followed by a tour to promote it, which means I'm now saving to go see them (again) when they come to the UK next summer! My small DVD collection is equally eclectic.
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I have been to speedway once. I found the smell just made me weezy (interesting how you like it ).. But anyhoo why the paragraph when you don't go anymore? I would concentrate more on what you are doing now to wooo your man and chat about speedway via 1 two 1 chat or first date lardy da..
<div class="quote"> Have you ever been to a speedway meeting? I haven't been for years but I used to go regularly at one time. I love the whole atmosphere and especially the smell!
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All in all good luck of course either or...
indiallias
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OK, I'm fat but how's the rest of my profile?
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8/29/2009 3:09:28 PM
guardianvamp that was just mean. sorry to hear. people are welcome to their views but just being plain a holes isn't nice
indiallias
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A work in progress
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8/29/2009 3:04:55 PM
noooo u have it wrong.. U want to kill kids not love them... that way the world will be a better place lol
indiallias
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OK, I'm fat but how's the rest of my profile?
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8/29/2009 2:58:36 PM
i like your profile and i like your happy perspective on life. Because you are big you will limit your interest so i guess just be happy with that and if not, change yourself..
i have my own issues and i know life wouldn't work for me if i asked people to accept my life style so i need to change myself.
indiallias
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Updated profile!
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8/29/2009 2:44:16 PM
interesting profile although the loud mouth part put me off ..
Its like saying, 'if you fancy someone you hate pick me.'
i get what you are saying but the first line was pretty much negative yet written well.
indiallias
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A shocking profile omg!!!!
Posted:
8/29/2009 2:33:53 PM
Profile wise i think you are a nice guy and i hope girls checking your profile out don't miss that
But mostly your profile was just a ramble like saying you have no personality.
I would leave out saying you are after students (although next sentence jk) as the first sentence sticks and comes across as a preference.
as example...
its like saying i like blondes only. and then hehe jk i like all hair types. for one it is not funny... and for 2 it is readable by others thinking you really do prefer blondes although pretend otherwise jokingly..
you write well and on reading your profile you sound like a nice guy so good luck amigo.
indiallias
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Just for the Heck of It...
Posted:
8/29/2009 2:00:31 PM
Sexy242 i have never fancied a milf before.. My sperm are saying i want a baby and i'm like, NOOOOO you will always end up in the trash can in a tissue.. In that sense it will never work between us.. As my sperm comes before my brain....
indiallias
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Are my profile pictures or description giving the wrong message?
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8/28/2009 1:35:00 PM
nice pics mate though you could use a striking picture as the first picture as the current one makes you look old in thumbnail. I mean many women see many men as thumbnails so make the first pic striking..
Profile wise I suggest making paragraghs between sentences as it is currently all jumbled together and me being me i couldn't be bothered to read. Of course you arn't looking at pulling me lol but will look better anyhoo lol
good luck
indiallias
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Just for the Heck of It...
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8/28/2009 1:17:53 PM
Her comments are fine, though by her first post on here she is not getting many posts. I am just over dramatising a possible flaw.
I have also dated a few girls that said the same thing. ALthough the info is there saying FRIENDS then DATE possibly, naturally if you fancy that person you instantly think it will work although knowing what was read of course.
There is also a difference doing the same things on a date as opposed to friends first. On a date it is a plain cut, like me or don't and after the first date it is over and done with unless you get on or not.
As friends first it is a drawn out experience to maybe end up as the same result.
Like i said it is fine what she said paragraph wise and will work for her and just pointing out why she may not be getting as much spam since she asked.
p.s can i borrow your pants? Come on man i will give them back..
indiallias
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Profile review please!
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8/28/2009 12:53:03 PM
second time round amigo.. maybe join a cheer leading or line dancing class to meet women. Or give pregnancy lectures.
indiallias
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Just for the Heck of It...
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8/28/2009 12:48:36 PM
Profile wise i would say that the first paragraph sounds like you would be better suited to saying Friends as opposed to dating as that way you have best of both worlds.
<div class="quote"> New to the area and just looking for people to hang out with and meet initially. If something more develops, then cool, but developing a friendship comes first. If there's a mutual attraction, then that's a bonus!
Reading it as dating i would just roll my eyes and think GREAT!!! i will have to do some rubbish dance class or pretend i find throwing darts at a darts board fun just to impress you as a friend to try and get you as a girlfriend, so i can sniff knickers for free.
jk. what i mean is people that are on here are here to date. So saying friends first most men will ultimately wanna date you so probable a lot wont waste their time meeting you, as you may not like them and it comes across that the date experience will be long and drawn out. Like my message here cough! cough!
Don't get me wrong you will still get interest it just depends on how much interest you want.
indiallias
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I'd like your opinions, please
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8/28/2009 12:15:41 PM
My only brilliant advice would be. Stay away from the UK chat forum on here. It will make you boring. Other than that good luck
indiallias
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Profile Review
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8/28/2009 12:10:39 PM
pic wise you are 24 not 44. At first i thought you was around 35-40 age range by your first pic.
i would remove as it doesn't do you justice. Also it is the pic that shows up on thumbnails to other girls and they will probably think the same thing so will more than likely not even check you out.
indiallias
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Profile review please!
Posted:
8/26/2009 2:10:42 PM
say more mate. so far message wise is toss.. It sounds like you say that to all women..
if you message a girl it shows you like them for one. at the same time you need to make them the one.
come across as friendly and only go after girls you fancy. and if it doesnt work, go for girls that look like they will enjoy your head under a toilet seat with you saying, 'please piss on me'
Feel free to buy my books named:
owww!!! 3 fists are too much..
Anti depressant dating by Michael Jackson..
and:
Stay away from FEMDOM unless you like pain..
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indiallias
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Profile review please!
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8/25/2009 2:47:53 PM
i would get rid of all this below: Reasons being that you may meet someone 76 miles away and if a lady 100 miles away messages you then a quick message saying no thanks, if you didnt want to travel wouldn't go amiss. The other 3 restrictions are pointless again as 1.. Same again with a quick message of no thanks, not interested, and 2.. A lot of people want to date though express it in different ways.
Live within 75 miles.
Must not be looking for Hang Out
Must not be looking for Talk/E-mail
Must not be looking for Activity Partner
pic wise i would delete 1 and 2 as they don't do you justice. pics 3 and 4 are good. pic 4 would be better as a main pic and I would try and get a friend to take more of you looking casual like pic 4.
Happy fishing
indiallias
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is it my msgs or profile
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8/25/2009 2:07:06 PM
like already mentioned pic wise.
More importantly the main key like mentioned also, is being away for another 6 months so woman will just deem themselves wasting their time chatting to you. Although many people will still be here in 6 months time I doupt many people will really think they are.
If you miss the chatter I would change your profile to friends for the time being and chat to other woman saying friends. Although mostly woman that say friends are after a relationship but either or, I expect you will get more feedback this way.
I say, just have fun in East Timor and look to date when you return to the land of Aussie.
And lastly who won the cricket recently again?? Haha just messing, us English will be like football with the 1966 win against Germany, though only with cricket this time me thinks lol
indiallias
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World War II
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8/12/2009 12:20:40 PM
I agree with zeegary, hatred is justifiable. Every town / city / village was affected by people dying in war or bombing or food rationing in ww2.
I can't really think Mrs Mavis will be saying to her neighbour chuckling away about how the silly Germans were by blowing her son up as example followed by a prayer to God to keep the Germans safe.
People did not have tv back then either so easier to hate. Now-a-days it is the same thing though. Like calling Iraqis rag heads or in the vietnam war calling them Gooks. Its like a way to say your not really killing fellow human beings.
I'm not saying it is right to hate but for people affected in war time then you can't really blame them if they do.
Over all war makes good computer games so happy days. JK
This thread is funny considering the OP just gave a general overview using WW2 as an example, giving that there is still racism. In general I think more thick people are racist.
You can hardly teach a thick person to use a knife and fork properly so the chance of changing their ways are slim; and all in all there is not that much racist trouble here in the UK so we have progressed a lot from the old days.
I don't see how going on about the past helps anything though on this issue. If you feel strongly about it OP tour Britain making meetings in ever town to meet black and foreign people to apologise to them for other peoples attitudes in the old days and thank their fathers on behalf of us.
indiallias
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guys avoid too long msg
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8/11/2009 4:03:38 PM
I heard;
'Hip-Hop dancer/teacher/ assistant/' is another word for a meth dealer...
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indiallias
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All right, I guess it's my turn.
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8/11/2009 3:51:02 PM
i like pic 1 but not as a main. It took me a while to say that as looks great as a thumbnail and how I am used to seeing you but blurry once you click on your profile.
Your kid looks awesome and full of happiness and pics 2, 4 and 8 are cool and great pics and a good shot with you and him on pic 8.
pic 5 looks like you have interrupted a student party yet welcome there all the same but looks outta place.
pic 6 is funny yet random, will work with a funny caption. and pic 7 is a bouncer pic.
Personally I would think about changing pics 2, 5 and 7 of just you and use those pics as added pics to show people you like when chatting as added bonuses and use the best as pic 1.
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Profile wise it sounds awesome. I am not in your demographic although I got a lot of it and narrows your search down so shrugs, when you find her you will find her..
Makes it a smaller pond for you and I feel a good way for you is to look outside the pond also if not already.
Like take up a club or hobby with strangers present as I feel you will be magic at it.
Just my 2 cents.
Happy fishing..
indiallias
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Help...not getting the responses I would like
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8/11/2009 2:55:38 PM
Fair comment but your below paragraph sounds like you are leaving your option open to both casual dating to serious relationship.
you may well of said. 'i want sex with women but what i really want is a long term relationship.' I'm Just saying.
I think developing a friendly relationship and dating are fun, but I am really looking for the one special women to spend the rest of my life with. No big rush, but that is my ultimate goal.
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not good to add previous relationship speal
A previous woman that I was with called me "a gentleman with an edge".
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I would delete this paragraph. It will narrow your odds,you also claim you went out with a girl that had a mid life crisis at that age and also telling woman what age they guess you at. (will make you sound****)
Now. I am admittedly picky. I am 62 but you would guess me in my mid to late 40's (great genetics) My ex-wife was my mid-life crises and she is 37 now (we were married 8 years).
This part was ok.
I get along best with women in their 40's to 50's and am attracted to slender to average woman.
All in all it is great to sound confident though oober confidence in text will make women look elsewhere as you come across as suss. You may well of just said as a profile.
'Date me, I know you all want to..'
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I don't mean any offense just telling you the way it is. Good luck Either, or...
indiallias
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guys avoid too long msg
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8/11/2009 2:06:26 PM
haha lmao
What do you want us men to say??
Things like.
'ow r u pwincess?'
'we wanna av sexy time wiv u'
'me like yr pwofile. me fink yr well fit. I bet u fink me spelling is well intelligent aint it??'
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Edit...
lol i just read your comment jc1970-1
QUOTE!!
""Are you paying for internet access by the letter? ""
HAHA!!
That is seriously the best line I have heard in a long time. I am easily pleased....
indiallias
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brutally honest profile review please?
Posted:
8/11/2009 1:58:29 PM
i would change your name leesbian, no matter how well you portray yourself, with that name it will just make most women roll their eyes and not bother looking at you. Although a good profile they will be looking for flaws already.
Below paragraph. Cool mate yet explain you have a serious side as opposed to just sounding like frank the tank (film old school)
I was born at a very early age and grew up as a little boy. Since then I've spent considerable effort and dedication resisting growing up.
The paragraph below is funny yet will be better mixed into email. like after getting to know someone where they already get your humour, throw it in and it will work but not on a profile. As currently it just sounds random and pointless. What I mean is like I have an American female friend and I tell her things like;
'I would swim the pond, be raped by a bear, wrestle an ant with my bear teeth just to be with her on her birthday.'
It doesn't win the comedy awards but after knowing each other it is funny. Yet you say this type of thing without anyone knowing you.
I quickly carved a niche for myself where a typical day would involve rescuing maidens, calming damsels, deflowering virgins, overthrowing governments, quelling rebellions, crushing tyrants, plundering treasure, finding lost artifacts, raiding ancient ruins, rediscovering forgotten tribes, solving mysteries, averting disasters, exploring space and undertaking adventures - whilst still managing to get home in time for tea and cakes.
With the below line you would sound better being more diplomatic like, 'I love this quote.'
Say "yes" more, get outside of your comfort zone and allow things to happen. Life is a playground, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
I would add the full 8 pics that you can have on pof with different poses at different times and a very good profile none the less.
indiallias
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Question for ex-drug addicts/ex-alcoholics
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8/11/2009 12:40:29 PM
I think the trouble is, most people in general find it hard to relate to other peoples minds which is why we categorize people in groups.
ie, druggys, alkys, coffee addicts, food addicts, the rich, the poor.
People relate to others with their own mind without being able to look outside the box yet mainly we are all addicted to something or other.
For example to you the OP. You do not understand why people that have been addicted to things cannot just give up the addiction and then change to being a moderate user in what ever. The truth is many can. The truth also is many can't. Which makes me think you are generalising. Generalising is even easier than masterbating lol
Some people are extremely thick and others extremely intelligent with the rest in the middle. In all of that, there is an underline human food chain. Ie we all like to big ourselves up by others expenses.
ie. The thick take the mick outta the extremely thick yet hate others calling them thick. The working class hate the non working class, the rich would rather spend a 1000 dollars on a champagne bottle than help the needed.
The above paragraph was a generalisation, see how easy it is to be narrow minded? and tomorrow if spun right in the news papers there will be millions of people with pitch forks demading to burn rich people for not caring for the poor and wasting money on rubbish expensive champagne with the global problems that there are. jk lol
All in all addiction is what makes the world go round as fooked up as it is. Every person in the world thrives off addiction in one way or other, from addicts to people loving hearing the messed up stories, it is how you deal with it that counts.
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a little help please?
Posted:
8/8/2009 3:11:59 PM
A bit disappointed you never mentioned flying regulary to Britain to drink tea but other than that sounds great lol..
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a little help please?
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8/8/2009 12:28:02 PM
I enjoyed reading your profile although long. It wasn't a boring read and held my interest and usually long profiles bore me as I have a short attention span
I agree with BBW comment you do not look big at all, I would say average and make men you meet make up their own mind.
At the same time the first date speal was like EEK!!!!! Way too big, kinda made me think you watched 22 love films back to back followed by 15 bags of Haribo giving you a sugar spasm lovey rush; then had all these ideas you let out on your fingers when writing the first date speal.
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8/8/2009 12:13:50 PM
No need for the below line. I see what you was trying to say but just came out that you are a one nighter guy. Shrugs if so, there are many 1 night women out there also but you didn't mean that; and I'm sure it is not what you are after on here by the sound of it so delete mate.
""I find most of the women I meet at 3am in a party not real long term love material""
Not sure if pics have changed but pic wise i like the shaved head look although you look like you have attitude. IF you still have a shaved look it will suit you without the attitude look. Maybe buy a Shane Ward cd and copy that lol. All in all fill up the 8 pic slot and be yourself chatting to women and always be more interesting than just saying;
'How are you? I like you? I fink your fit...' lardy dar typical man speal lol
Happy dating amigo
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8/7/2009 1:36:07 PM
fair play sublime with your smoking comment. At the same time the only people that would get offended are people that know they have a smoking problem so in that sense a wake up call for them to actually quit.
I have asthma and smoke and know if i carry on in 10 years i will be as good as dead yet didn't take offense to it..
Sometimes offending people is the best way and for the most the only cure in life for anything.
People that do not like it are in denial...
At the same time I get the guy is young enough to have a click around him where many smoke, so dating wise maybe not a good thing to say as if he finds the right lady and she happens to smoke then he can help her quit maybe but shrugs, still not a bad thing to say.
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8/7/2009 1:27:28 PM
good pics mate and I like your first date message, too fricking true.
Profile wise, the below line. No need - you may as well of said. 'ME MAN, ME WANT WOMAN....'
Well here I am, basically I'm a simple guy just looking for a girl to date.
The below line i would remove as shows nothing to be honest. It just makes you sound like the guy acting perfect without being perfect although what you say is true probably..
If your on a date with me I open doors and do things those types of things that once were commonplace in society but now aren't.
But yeah what you have shows enough how it is so upto you whether you adjust or not. Message wise in chatting to a girl spend a bit of thought and time messaging them as opposed to basic speal and always ask questions or be fun. use their profile to help you and never spend too long chatting on msn before you meet on a first date as opens up the fake world of internet chatting.
But ya good luck amigo :)
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A profile review please..
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8/7/2009 12:57:14 PM
I like biology also. Currently I am working on an experiment to prove that pollunation and human ways of reproducing are different to each other in many aspects.. If you are willing to pay for my plane ticket I would like to fly over and meet you to show you how... I assure you it is for experimental purposes only...
Dooo! Doooo! Doooo!
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profile wise.. You need spaces bewteen sentences... and date wise personally I think it better to act more casual on a first date as opposed to all the lovey dovey date things you mention.
It makes you sound nice but also look at whether you want to date that guy and if you made a mistake you will find yourself under the stars thinking of ways 'not' to kiss the guy; as opposed to things to say to get him to kiss you.
I like the first date speal though, just what I mean is, don't expect every date you go on to be rosey. A first date is better to be casual with each other and use your speal for the second date but ya upto you of course.
GL
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8/4/2009 2:52:26 PM
Like mentioned the profile is a chore to read without spaces between sentences.
Also i find long term sounds a bit EEK!! Dating is more casual and sounds less stressful although both terminologies for the most mean the same thing. long term just sounds like the other person is being judged under spotlight on a first meet for being the future one as opposed to just a relaxing first date to suss each other out.
Bear in mind that new members don't flock to POF daily and seeing you have 45 favourites most people have probably already checked your profile out.
So ya I would re-do it properly like you are after and message guys you like and try not to leave it too long before a meet to save losing the aura. If only a coffee in a cafe for an hour, it is something to do and not too much time consuming and you might get a better result this way.
Just an idea anyhoo and good luck...
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8/4/2009 2:34:57 PM
That wasn't very nice. You just hit me. ..... I can't believe you actually hit me.
The last girl that hit me, I sent her on a one way ticket to Afghanistan because I'm hard. 'Whats that mother?? Coming mother....'
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8/4/2009 2:26:32 PM
It was just a personal opinion with the beard comments. You look good with a beard still in those pics. Overall I think girls don't like beards, though overall girls like designer beards. By designer I just meant in my head, styled and trimmed.
I am shy at times also so know what you are saying and good luck on here.
Before you do anything beard wise, I would ask a hair dresser when you next get your hair cut and see what she thinks or female friends, but all in all upto you mate.
If any reviewer would like to message here on this issue please do as i might be just sounding like a wet blanket.
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8/3/2009 3:24:32 PM
My warriors were built to kill, i accept your challenge..
darkthrone is a million times better than yours lol
ok ok you got me.. I just want to be slapped in the face by a girl....
i am roleplaying as a teenage rpg player by the way with the above speal, no offense ment lol...
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8/3/2009 3:15:20 PM
Designer beards as in david Bekkham, I'm English so not a lot to work with lol
All in all you have everything going for you, you sound like a great guy but online dating wise; even the best people get turned away as text chat is different to real life chat. As everyone is safe hidden behind a computer screen.
In that sense sometimes it is easier to chat and date face to face so my advice to you would be chat on here but use your xp on here to chat with women anywhere from supermarkets to what ever and stay yourself and you will find yourself works for you..
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8/3/2009 2:56:19 PM
Aye fair play. I played a game called darkthrone and it is the best game RPG wise to make friends or not as it is text based. I am genuinely welcome to see friends in holland, USA and Mexico. I say friends in RPG way but in reality would they really like me?
In truth yes and vice versa. If you have a passport and get to know foreign players, have confidence and use gamage as experience you can have a great life.
Well I have 10 nose bleeds a day bet you only like have 3. I'm sooo much geekier than you. lol jk
Brankie and Bennie wise i was just served a sh!tty pasta that was pre-heated and didn't fill me up. i mean after ordering a meal to having it two mins later is quite freaky lol
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I suppose its only fair...
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8/3/2009 2:43:29 PM
I currently hate you...
Jk mate i love your profile. Real funny read, i personally hate captions above a picture as always lame like, ' me in the kitchen' but yours made me laugh.
Keep it up via message wise and you will do well I hope..
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8/3/2009 2:29:16 PM
Firstly, 'Frankie and Bennys... ' Slap. lol jk i just had a bad xp in the Poole one.
I wouldn't mention you are dizzy as it opens vibes to us men as easy pickings..
Geek wise you also say you want a geek. fair play but limits you dating wise so bare that in mind and POF is a small pond..
By your profile I warm to you instantly and like it. I used to be a geek styly player til recently and just reset an elite account i had to get back to normal life. Games are fun but RPG's are a life sucker and a life stopper...
You look good in both hair colours so go for what you feel more comfortable with and be patient with dating. Take a back stepped glance on who you like and never jump the gun.
Gl
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8/3/2009 2:08:21 PM
Just say that your mother used to whip you when you was young.. It will get sympathy votes.
Sorry I'm trolling tonight..
GL amigo
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8/3/2009 2:04:03 PM
It sounds crazy review wise but I think you would look good with a designer beard. You are good looking but the shabby beard just makes you look like you have seen too many 80's expidition documentaries.
What I mean is, i think it suits you with a designer beard better than no beard or a full on beard...
All in all you sound like a great guy that has a lot to give to life and if you don't find her on here you will definately find her out there in the real world.. ('REAL WORLD' ponders thought, shiver shiver!!)
Like the monks say, 'Ummmmmmmmm'
Mr lucky.. Trust me to just so happen to interview the one monk on his silence mission.
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Are My Picturea Really That Bad ....
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8/3/2009 1:48:28 PM
"""if they prefer the girl in the pic with me then they can move along cause they are obviously superficial & go on looks & im not looking for superficial men !!!""""
I love everyone if that helps.
All i can say is thank God the old 'honour chat' speal is no more. Unnerwise I would be sucking things I don't want to...
As Frank says: 'Well you did say you love everyone and you wouldn't want to gain dis-respect in your village by backing out of your word would you?'
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