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tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 3/20/2009 2:18:25 PM
divine broke dimonkey got choked and we all went to Heaven aboard a little row boat

tiptoeburglar

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Haiku Posted: 3/20/2009 2:11:32 PM
on the equinox autumn fires burn our soul forge a change within

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Haiku Posted: 3/18/2009 2:08:47 PM
whistling away black kettle calls from stove top pot discriminates

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Haiku Posted: 3/17/2009 4:49:59 PM
a Blarney too stoned to order another round apub at the sleep

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/26/2008 11:47:25 AM
best. last. line. in. a. haiku. ever.

tiptoeburglar

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/26/2008 11:28:08 AM
still...snap, crackle, pop! Rice Crispies are delicious elves don't drown in milk

tiptoeburglar

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reflection of past year into the future... Posted: 12/26/2008 11:21:38 AM
here comes the best year yet fifty two weeks of no regret rainy days will have to wait her sunny smile has cleaned the slate

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/26/2008 11:00:57 AM
nearly burned my ass setting stinky farts aflame Zippopotamus

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in decision Posted: 12/26/2008 10:52:04 AM
the pitter patter of small feet matter the unborn child, the bag of splatter in the dumpster behind the clinic a world unwanted, another cynic saved from countless years of worry no birthday candle snowflake flurry pacified within the distance choose the path of least resistance one orgasm never fathered one life lost, one more unbothered

tiptoeburglar

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poem: i remember the first time Posted: 12/26/2008 10:48:38 AM
Thanks! I enjoyed yours, also.

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....food for thought....or not... Posted: 12/26/2008 9:58:46 AM
alphabetically out of line fall somewhere between rock the boat with truthfulness then fabricate serene spend precious time and effort to fix what is not broken or be the voice without a face anonymously outspoken

tiptoeburglar

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poem: i remember the first time Posted: 12/26/2008 9:55:20 AM
as the moonlight dances upon the curves of your torso and the stars began to settle in the acquiesce of your stare you arouse me the windswept beauty of auburn hair encompassing the warmest smile the beating of my heart drowns out the crickets' din and in that very moment as our skins collide for the first time i realize that i am home

tiptoeburglar

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Something for all of you to think over Posted: 12/26/2008 8:52:21 AM
There's a difference between giving up and letting go. As humans, we've each been afforded a will of our own. To deny another that freedom does little more than breed resentment in them, as well as a false sense of security in one's self. "It takes two to make a thing go right" -Rob Base and D.J. E-Z Rock

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/26/2008 8:36:00 AM
arch over the earth a million miles above us interstellar flare

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/21/2008 9:33:48 AM
giggling happily nitrous oxide hyena el em ef ay oh

tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/21/2008 9:21:49 AM
write on! keep on trucking express the joy within you're a runaway homonym with style

tiptoeburglar

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/21/2008 9:10:00 AM
I need to let go no comfort lies in what was tears evaporate Newsflash: I type slow.

tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/21/2008 8:56:59 AM
right there! tell-tale landmark so many years passed do our spirits still frequent there? will they?

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Profile cliches: My friends and family are important to me! Posted: 12/21/2008 8:45:11 AM
How about girls that post aerial shots of their cleavage, along with the line "if you're seeking cheap thrills, move on"? As though "free" somehow doesn't equate to "cheap". Sorry, toots. Had I known that I could make you feel like less of an e-ho, just by paying you ... trust me, I would have.

tiptoeburglar

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Profile cliches: My friends and family are important to me! Posted: 12/21/2008 7:58:12 AM
One of mine is long walks on the beach. From people who live in Tennessee, Oklahoma, Mississsippi, and other land locked areas. To be fair, they did specify LONG walks ...

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DAILY QUOTES Posted: 12/21/2008 7:48:41 AM
"If you can't be an athlete, be an athletic supporter" -Eve Arden

tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/21/2008 7:43:35 AM
onward bellowed Santa I've got a job to do insubordinate reindeer games frustrate

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/21/2008 7:38:43 AM
oe'er the hill they go laughing all the way HAR HAR! immature sledders

tiptoeburglar

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And It Shook Me (Graham Parker) Posted: 12/21/2008 7:28:54 AM
And it shook me It shook me up, it shook me up, yeah I remember the way you looked when we first met There are some things in this world you can't forget You were standing underneath the light I lost my heart, it felt all right And it shook me And I'm still shaking now I remember rainy nights I thought I'd drown Was it London, New York, Paris or Amsterdam? I forget the details, now I must admit But you were there through all of it And it shook me And I'm still shaking now Will you hold on and hope our grip don't fail? Sometimes lovers hammer in their own coffin nails I just read how universes start Continually they're blow apart And it shook me And I'm still shaking now Some believe in a Heaven up above With a God that forgives all with His great love Well I forgive you if you forgive me, hey Who needs a third party anyway? And it shook me And I'm still shaking now Shake me again, baby Shake me again, baby Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah

tiptoeburglar

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DAILY QUOTES Posted: 12/19/2008 5:56:53 PM
"Now we know. And knowing is half the battle." -G.I. Joe

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/19/2008 5:47:36 PM
not knowing real you envision Utopia ignorance is bliss

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Celebrity Limericks Posted: 12/18/2008 1:59:40 PM
Pick anyone famous and give 'em the ol' Irish AABBA treatment. There once was actor named Cruise Who caused quite a stir in the news Appearing on Oprah He jumped on her sofa And shared his strange personal views.

tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/18/2008 1:45:42 PM
chorus begged the apples we're better without seeds so i took out my trusty knife and sliced

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/17/2008 4:33:22 PM
my heart is so still no jumper cables needed headed for the light

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/17/2008 4:28:13 PM
crazy eight-sided boy ran down the street so fast now he's octagon baby gone bad pun

tiptoeburglar

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/17/2008 4:20:52 PM
one word: laziness siesta in a hammock not a care today

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/17/2008 4:18:04 PM
why can't we all walk? or pledge to help those who can reverse telethon

tiptoeburglar

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/17/2008 3:05:31 PM
burning desire is "desire" two syllables or three? i'm not sure ("fire" one or two? can we get a consensus on this?)

tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/17/2008 2:38:59 PM
sunblock protects the skin from harmful rays too bad the crocodile hunter wore none crikey!

tiptoeburglar

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/17/2008 2:27:23 PM
sage-heart spoke my dreams forked tongue secrets stain the sheets playful desire

tiptoeburglar

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DAILY QUOTES Posted: 12/17/2008 2:20:41 PM
"I gave her my heart. She gave me a pen." -Lloyd Dobler

tiptoeburglar

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The Old Apartment (Barenaked Ladies) Posted: 12/17/2008 2:14:33 PM
Words & music by Steven Page & Ed Robertson Broke into the old apartment This is where we used to live Broken glass, broke and hungry Broken hearts and broken bones This is where we used to live Why did you paint the walls? Why did you clean the floor? Why did you plaster over the hole I punched in the door? This is where we used to live Why did you keep the mousetrap? Why did you keep the dishrack? These things used to be mine I guess they still are, I want them back Broke into the old apartment Forty-two stairs from the street Crooked landing, crooked landlord Narrow laneway filled with crooks. This is where we used to live. Why did they pave the lawn? Why did they change the locks? Why did I have to break it, I only came here to talk This is where we used to live How is the neighbor downstairs? How is her temper this year? I turned up your tv and stomped on the floor just for fun I know we don't live here anymore We bought an old house on the Danforth She loves me and her body keeps me warm Im happy here But this is where we used to live Broke into the old apartment Tore the phone out of the wall Only memories, fading memories Blending into dull tableaux I want them back I want them back

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DAILY QUOTES Posted: 12/16/2008 9:20:00 PM
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read." - Groucho Marx

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/16/2008 9:09:45 PM
in my loving arms a skeleton's cold embrace fall not for the trick (hey rose!)

tiptoeburglar

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/16/2008 9:06:06 PM
your love knows not of time nor limits distance set unconditional heart ablaze find joy

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/16/2008 8:49:01 PM
as the clouds roll by I seek shelter in your arms hold me through the storm

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Is there a Santa Claus? Posted: 12/16/2008 5:25:37 PM
Santa can be real all he wants, just tell him to keep his mitts off my milk and cookies.

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Beautiful - Gordon Lightfoot Posted: 12/16/2008 5:20:12 PM
At times I just don't know How you could be anything but beautiful I think that I was made for you And you were made for me And I know that I won't ever change We've been friends through rain or shine For such a long, long time Laughing eyes and smiling face It seems so lucky just to have the right Of telling you with all my might You're beautiful tonight And I know that you won't ever stray Cause you've been that way from day to day For such a long, long time And when you hold me tight How could life be anything but beautiful I think that I was made for you And you were made for me And I know that I won't ever change We've been friends through rain or shine For such a long, long time Well, I must say it means so much to me To be the one who's telling you I'm telling you, that you're beautiful.

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/16/2008 5:13:28 PM
humbled last second loss confetti in the air defeat we know thy sting too well next year

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/16/2008 5:09:27 PM
no nets, faith will catch more fish to feed the masses water turned to wine

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/16/2008 4:53:45 PM
as tiny children we gazed up at the trapeze mesmerized in awe

tiptoeburglar

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tell me what you think Posted: 12/16/2008 4:47:26 PM
Sorry, I had no idea. Wonderful job, OP. Your poetry is suitable for framing. Hope you don't develop pancreatic cancer from all the smoke we're blowing up your butt.

tiptoeburglar

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tell me what you think Posted: 12/16/2008 4:28:18 AM
Yep, ignore all constructive criticism in regards to writing. Especially when it's solicited in the title of the thread.

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 12/14/2008 7:48:48 AM
dig it! car wash catcalls i can eat fifty eggs! a failure to communicate blue eyes

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Haiku - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 12/14/2008 7:43:05 AM
better wear a mask the rangers win the pennant tonto come pronto

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