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 roughdiamond1963
Joined: 5/31/2012
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Let's Write A Story...
Posted: 6/11/2012 8:29:40 AM
Her heart fluttered with excitement, she ran down to the doorstep flustered she mopped her glistening brow, she began to open the parcel her heart beating as she undone the ribbons & tore away the paper, she took a deep breath as she tore open the top of the cardboard box, she let out a blood curdling scream Layla reconised the face of the decapitated head in the box a note " As promised the head of your persecutor"......
 roughdiamond1963
Joined: 5/31/2012
Msg: 10 (view)
 
Please tell me what I need, don't need, and what to add.
Posted: 6/11/2012 8:18:08 AM
clean the bathroom mirror before taking pics lol love it haha
 
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