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Trying something new with the description. Posted: 8/31/2012 6:37:32 AM
Hey there, I'm taking the profile description in another direction and any feedback on how it currently sounds would be great. Let me know what you think and don't hold back. I will appreciate honest criticism. Cheers,

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I could use a pointer or two. Posted: 7/12/2012 1:18:33 PM
Thanks for the messages. Jon, I'm sending messages to women that I'm physically attracted to. I won't mince words on that one. I try to find points in profiles which flag as common interests but I try to keep the initial quick messages really brief. They usually consist of a quick observation, an attempt at being witty, followed with a very short, easily answered question. I figure I must spark something for them to visit the profile after the message is sent. Houston, if I read correctly you suggest posting some questions in the profile itself? California, are you suggesting limiting the number of items on the interest list to those mentioned? Thanks for taking the time to help me out.

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I could use a pointer or two. Posted: 7/12/2012 5:28:43 AM
Hi there, I've been tweaking the profile for sometime now. I've met with some success. Most of the women I quick message take the time to look over my profile. The question becomes, how do I make them stay awhile longer? Like I mention in the headline, I could use a few pointers if you can suggest any. Many thanks,

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I can bring them to water but cannot make them drink Posted: 7/10/2012 7:44:47 PM
OK, so I've been taking a few stabs at it. Could I get a revised opinion on my profile description? Thanks in advance.

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I can bring them to water but cannot make them drink Posted: 7/9/2012 12:53:02 PM
I've put up a few lines with regard to what I am looking for. I don't want to fill up the page with my wants and desires but at the same time I'd like to know if I'm on the right track. Any thoughts?

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I can bring them to water but cannot make them drink Posted: 7/5/2012 8:12:57 AM
Thanks again for the pointers!

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I can bring them to water but cannot make them drink Posted: 7/5/2012 4:40:24 AM
Thanks for the review. I try to keep the messages very short and end quick easy questions. I don't like the open ended ones like, "tell me about yourself". I figure it makes it easier in getting a response. I make a quick comment about mutual topics of interest or something that drew me to the recipients profile aside from their physical appearance and close with the simple question. It almost feels like and instant message but sent under the "Quick Message" option. It only makes sense now that the relationship status may hurt the image. I honestly had no idea. How does the body of my description look? Thanks for taking the time to offer help.

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I can bring them to water but cannot make them drink Posted: 7/4/2012 5:11:35 PM
Hi there, I'm looking for a profile review from the Forum. I don't think I am having any trouble generating initial interest as many who I message go on to view my profile. I'm not getting the responses I would like however. Maybe I am missing something? Care to give my profile a perusal and review? Thanks in advance. Best,

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