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bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 11/15/2009 5:50:31 PM
come on, let's just fool around trip and frisk another round you can see my brain gears grindin' one more chase will send me windin' deer in headlights, I can flee slo-mo panic, if you let me Once I'm googled, I surrender Tired and teased, tickled till tender

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 11/15/2009 5:41:32 PM
the shoot out's at noon for those who aren't shooting but always impending for the ones with the gun for every shame thwarted a heartsick avoidance for every bleached slate an enemy won

bicpen

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From last line repeated Feb 19 Posted: 11/2/2009 11:23:46 PM
You never fail to have something waiting for me, Brizo. You know by now, I really mean it when I say------cool. Thanks. I looked at your new thread. Thanks for putting the "road trip" poem on there. It was great seeing it again, and I am honored to be included in that thread.

bicpen

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Leaves, and other noises Posted: 7/27/2009 7:33:15 PM
A face at mid-life the pivot point of age twenty years either way in the balance to grasp the hand of a seven year old and dance weights a moment in the favor of youth the moment of mid-life remains a mystery and death doesn't measure the years But the elder can be young ( have you yet discovered?) As scores of years pass quickly away. Hi Om & friends. I got to dance with my little Canadian godchild this weekend. Just wanted to share.

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 7/14/2009 9:52:46 PM
find the truth by numerical design if that's what turns you own bebe and if numbers dance in your dreams as well your music is is just dandy by me Count your steps backward till you see you begin, the lean man under the flesh, beneath ten thousand changes of clothes go cubic nude, my abstract dude I like to watch you think

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/13/2009 6:44:34 PM
wonders where to land to rest a ponderous head thought waves circling

bicpen

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Confused relationship ending?????? Posted: 5/13/2009 4:10:29 PM
Hi peaceangel5. Good luck. I think the best outcome would be for him to write you and for you to be able to write him back, even if you have to tell him that, hard as this is for you, you can still be his friend. I think nowadays, relationships have to evolve for people to grow. So you had one type of relationship, that doesn't mean that you can't have another type in the future. The person you knew and loved is still there; he's hurt you and in a way, damaged you, but that's the world we live in. While we're making the best of an imperfect world, I don't see any reason why we can't keep our people in our lifes--as best we can, to compare notes and to offer support. Yeah, I hope it's not the last you hear from him.

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/13/2009 3:46:39 PM
and would I like to share a pot of tea and might I like to share my weary story the hand of one, the voice of one and sweet are the ears of the same who came to me as I impulsively and desperately became willing to admit my need to be the ground a spirit of giving used to sow its seed.

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/13/2009 3:37:30 PM
As innocence is contaminated by heroes to boot and then is lost in the throes of their parentals' crapshoot an innocence remains that somehow holds against the quake the innocence that keeps the question why at highest stake As life deals crushing blow upon blow and answers fall short of putting one in the know the inner child always belly up imploring of the sky will be preserved above it all as long as she asks why

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/13/2009 3:13:08 PM
I've been here before sun in my eyes makes me squint like my first time out

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/12/2009 6:55:51 PM
Our kids are amazing gifts like the horse though not as strong for riding of course our kids we love freely without fear of remorse and then they fly away as we stand in the concourse they love us before they love any other I'm so glad I had the chance to be a mother not once but twice-- two divine human beings They easily mean to me so much more than me

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/12/2009 11:23:46 AM
that we can say goodbye to those so dear is an opportunity unique not rare that the individual beloved is surrounded in love must be at her death like a sign from above Speculation of what a dying one feels is no substitute for the knowledge that heals we should be prepared to give of our time for those who will need us, for those hours sublime

bicpen

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Confused relationship ending?????? Posted: 5/11/2009 6:46:12 PM
OP, You have done well not to try to contact him so far--or do you even have a way to contact him? He did tell you that he would send you a postcard, right? I know you can't help but wonder when or if he will. My opinion about your situation is that his insisting that it was always temporary is one reason you are not completely out of your mind right now. You know that even though it doesn't completely make sense, your relationship was, at least in some respect, what it was supposed to be. I wish you the best moving on. You seem like a very strong woman. You are already drawing from the positive aspects of what you had with him. Still, I hope for both your sakes that he comes back or makes contact some day with deeper insight into what you two meant to each other.

bicpen

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What to do about my ex! Posted: 5/11/2009 4:13:19 PM
Hi. You're pretty young, I bet he is too. Of course you want to do the right thing, even if it means some sacrifice on your part. By now, you have already made that sacrifice. Changing your cell phone number should do the trick. Don't talk about him on face book. Tell his mom you've got to be cool with her for a while till her son gets over you. It's sad. The man has lost his job and his girlfriend. Still, he's young and for all he knows he can still find happiness in this life. He's got to prepare to take his next stand and so do you--the two of you without each other.

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/11/2009 3:52:09 PM
not and say we did and die in hypocrisy highly evolved slime

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/11/2009 6:41:19 AM
flowing like river the course that my day takes is faster than I am

bicpen

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Haiku Posted: 5/9/2009 5:32:30 AM
more alike than not smile; you may see the same if love shines behind it

bicpen

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Haiku Posted: 5/8/2009 7:23:38 PM
drift away into the night glow, gliding in the moonlight sand polished driftwood

bicpen

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BROKEN HEARTS SO SLOW TO MEND....THE LOVE INSIDE CAN NEVER END... Posted: 5/8/2009 6:36:43 PM
Um, I'm sorry. I haven't checked the rules lately. It is easier to keep up with though if you just manage one thread at first. Plus, If you keep going with a thread, you'll probably want all your stuff in one place. Sorry to bog your thread down with this, but I couldn't email ya, due to restrictions. 1. I'm not male.

bicpen

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taking silence seriously Posted: 5/8/2009 6:31:06 PM
The silence of solitude is broken by unvoiced reading like one's reflection on the water, When reading is done, the silence of solitude is startling.

bicpen

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BROKEN HEARTS SO SLOW TO MEND....THE LOVE INSIDE CAN NEVER END... Posted: 5/8/2009 4:26:40 PM
That is sweet, grategurl. Keep writing. That is, it's sweet, but you should put all your poems on one thread. I just remembered you have others.

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/7/2009 7:41:05 PM
and she looked at me deeply begging that I help her Oh my, my at least to match I could scalp her And wouldn't that just be this poor doggy's luck while so many doggy's fare quite well by pluck So is the plight of a dog who shows need bite first and beg later might be a stronger creed of course it's not but who's to say what's in the doggy mind scared and hurt or rabid and wild, responding to our kind

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/7/2009 4:35:42 PM
and left me alone on another day of peace this one a sticky one particulate warnings on red, the birds still chirp the heat-pump hums the car runs, if I like. on another day of freedom this one an easy one I may write a letter I may clear the stairs and I've eaten like a queen all I can eat, luncheon buffet on another day of stability the economy not encroaching though appliances are broken they are still under warranty quiet and full, peaceful and free it's a time of life another day of life as seen from being alone

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/7/2009 4:20:53 PM
that flies through the air with the greatest of fleas that pitiful pup still snared in his leash his paws how they're groping puppy mind surely hoping that the people will stop yappin before asyphixiation leaves him nappin

bicpen

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breakfast at tiffany's Posted: 5/5/2009 9:53:52 AM
Wings of paradise, Your poems are beautiful. They are also long, which means I have to come back when I am focused. You said something like, "the second wind always comes like banging aluminum." That is so true to my experience with second wind. I'll be back. maybe with a printer. Just wanted to say hi. Bic

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/5/2009 9:43:49 AM
along for the ride water shifts along the pier wave and pier am I

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/5/2009 9:32:48 AM
(that's the saddest line I've ever heard, though quite true) i can almost hear the pop of each failed synapse as the old girl meets her maker in another reality lapse and I the seer with the tightly-mapped brain shake my head, owing naught to someone less sane The sane of this world are clearly our hope the ones who persist verbally, while others syncope Those sharp enough to find words free coupons feign to guard high ideals from those subject to duping

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/5/2009 9:11:14 AM
the perfect ride for this here loner, who skirts into society to pay respects and to follow up on rumors of an after life, is actually a ding-ed up tercel, mirrors long gone who can trust 'em. burnt-out, built-back, wheel-bent (I didn't do it, but I'll take the blame) beauty, fogged up--trunk leaks, dog-seasoned seats. Been thinking about this cute little 6 speed VW with seats that wrap around and say hello, Turbo beetle, silver, gleaming. No one would guess it was me in there, wondering where to put my dog. . .

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/3/2009 6:06:28 PM
What good is tomorrow, if I can't have today? Better to answer, let nothing get in the way. The sky may be gray and the grass may have died But that it is day cannot be denied The waking of the dead is a miracle each time and every time I wake, I should need no other sign that living is the task at hand, though silly I may be to worry over many things I cannot even see Oops Hi Spiffycat Summer rains will soon forget what my heart had once known deeply and I shall soon allow the wetness of a shower to make me sleepy When that time comes I know I'll find the softness of a bed So why should I worry so much my pretty little head The world is fierce, and superbly mysterious But my little world is not so serious Until I find a cause to adopt I should rest easy on my little lot

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/3/2009 2:01:21 PM
over what is spilled on the garden tilled Stands an old man able to take to the table His stake in commonsense and a plea for recompense for reducing to culture for boils the years of his backbreaking toils

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/3/2009 1:50:42 PM
Much to do, for me and you (precious line, like from Richard Scarry ) I like to be a do-bee too a post a pssst now and again and tell the readers something true and almost important as a friend who's playing here, above all else as one who kisses and never tells or whispers with the outfielder on third just to love the sound of a witty word I like the sound of the free words best those you get first on the vocabulary test

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/3/2009 1:31:17 PM
I stop and listen though there may not be a train when the gates are down

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/3/2009 1:30:44 PM
Sorry...double. ....I've been workin' on the rr...

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/2/2009 10:22:01 AM
Rose, Even I will miss the amaranthus. Down with genetic engineering!! When will they be satisfied. I offer Rose a toast for recallin' those historical trains and a prayer for those who don't know what to do with their brains In my state, we were taught that "decency" was the true education and our brand of decency spread through churches throughout the nation It's been a while now since I've worshipped in a church I never faltered, but it left me in the lurch.

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/2/2009 10:12:12 AM
Just say sorry and you 'believe' after a while and everyone learns to accept your smile. Your sins after all, are the least of our woes We learn to accept others stepping on our toes Murdering a child here or there Not that we have forgotten to care But we sense that worse still lurks. Something more sinister is in the works. (mhuaa ha ha)

bicpen

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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines Posted: 5/2/2009 8:37:09 AM
breathlessly i bleed needlessly i need alongside kindred stranger who like me missed the danger of lacking foresight vision not sensing the division that culls those like us no viable prospectus

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/2/2009 8:31:25 AM
You-- how you always rhymin' like that? who cares who squeeled as the last fish is reeled the dwellers pray for a cave with shadows to worship But the process goes on and the'yre scraping for bones and nibbling the stray seeds they should be planting

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/2/2009 12:44:25 AM
As you breathe in the last breeze of a tainted golden rod and scrape withered fingers over cracked earth remembering good seeds and fresh grass sod Can you stare into the falsity of the Word I would say don't blame Jesus for religion's crime as science in secreet engineers our demise. He wasn't even guilty of his own commonsense is disavowed and that is why the golden rod waves famine over our fields

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/1/2009 11:37:07 AM
"Just us" is the lucky password of two devoted, the sacred pact of two who are serious, the proving ground of timeless affection, and the reward of partners tucked in from the world

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 5/1/2009 8:43:40 AM
an exploded reality exponential life suddenly the glimpse of so much one could never see. Slam the lid on the snakes and ghosts Walk away, strobe lit, reassembling the partial awareness, the sight we list for reference-- no deference to the epiphany. Only the familiar sense of unease.

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/1/2009 8:26:31 AM
Ok. so when it says timed out, I'm not to believe it, but instead hit cancel, instead of trying again. Apologies.

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 5/1/2009 8:25:33 AM
black and white glory requires no competition foremost purity

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 4/27/2009 6:48:18 PM
can be just like life viewing it all from the bench time out of the game

bicpen

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Haiku Game - Continuance From Previous Thread Posted: 4/27/2009 6:46:34 PM
can be just like life viewing it all from the bench time out of the game

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 4/26/2009 7:47:03 PM
and my sacroiliac is down for the count Can't use my cadillac it's too low a mount i could crawl in doggy style and hold for dear life Oh dear and my piles are now giving me strife

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 4/26/2009 7:40:53 PM
uh, yeah. oops.

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 4/26/2009 7:40:33 PM
oops

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 4/26/2009 7:40:14 PM
I'll pop the cork on the wine and you pop my neck and realign my spine

bicpen

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Cinquain on the Membrane Posted: 4/26/2009 7:35:47 PM
24682 seeking nose to the ground my scent overwhelming is obvious victory. I rest, breathe

bicpen

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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux) Posted: 4/26/2009 7:26:40 PM
Take two aspirins and a mud bath y'all are funny and make me laugh Give me a smile and I'll sit a long while Tell another story It doesn't have to be gory.

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