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 Author Thread: PART I
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 18 (view)
 
PART I
Posted: 12/6/2007 11:06:23 AM
It still blows my mind that many people don't know much about STI's and how to protect themselves and others, or just don't bother.

The World Health Organization (WHO) officially refers to this collection of infections by pathogenic microorganisms as Sexually Transmitted Infections (STI) rather than diseases (STD), because they are, in most cases, treatable (this is a key trait of an infection, it is treatable.) A disease is a continuous state which can be the result of a developmental problem, or a continuous source of cellular damage which results in a permanant condition. An infection can cause disease.

Each STI can have numerous variants, which can make some STI's difficult or impossible to treat (particularly evident when dealing with viral infections.)

Bacterial infections such as Gonorrhoea, Chlamydia, Trichomonas, Syphilis can be treated with antibiotics, and are generally tested for using bacterial cultures.

Although yeasts are not necessarily STI's, they are a type of microbial infection. They are, as I already mentioned, a yeast. A yeast is physiologically different from a bacteria, and are treated using a different class of medication, an Anti-fungal.

Viruses tend to be the most difficult class of STI to treat. Viruses are very diverse. Physiologically and structurally, they are very simple, but they also can change themselves very easily, making them difficult to treat. (Imagine being able to instantly look like your brother, neighbour, friend, or partner, just like that, and fool anyone about your identity!) They require much more sophisticated, and often expensive, methods to test for them. Unfortunately, there also aren't very many Anti-virals available which can treat many different types of viral infections. (Compared to what is available to treat bacterial infections.)

Viral STIs include HIV (causes Acquired Immuno Deficiency Syndrome), HPV (Human Papillomavirus - causes genital warts and cancers), Hepatitis A, Hepatitis B, Hepatitis C and HSV (Herpes Simplex Virus - causes cold sore like lesions). Each infection is assessed and treated differently. Some vaccines are available to prevent infection by these viral STI's, however they are most effectively given prior to viral exposure.

Abstinance is the only sure way to eliminate the possibility of ever being affected by an STI.

Condoms are a good choice, and an effective mechanism to help protect yourself from an STI, although they are not 100% effective. (Some viruses live on the skin, and do not require the transmission of any mocosal secretions.) Condoms can also break, putting you at a higher risk of aquiring an STI.

So, be careful kids, and don't believe all of the information you read in these forums!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 140 (view)
 
Would you date a bicurious/bisexual woman?
Posted: 9/24/2007 1:56:27 PM
As a bisexual woman, I'm feeling a little bit concerned after reading all of the posts in this thread.... I could be single forever!

It bothers me that men assume that bisexual women
a) don't know their sexuality or haven't "chosen"
b) are promiscuous
c) are incapable of monogamy.

We are individuals. Everyone is completely different, but speaking for myself, I am perfectly comfortable with my sexuality, I don't sleep around, and I do prefer one partner at a time. Threesomes can be fun, but most of the time they're not, and just because you are in a relationship with a bisexual person doesn't mean that you're going to have a lifetime of threesomes.

I've been hurt by someone who didn't get to know me and told me I was "not long term material" after I disclosed my sexuality, when in fact, I would make a wonderful partner or wife to someone who was willing to get to know me.

Another notable point is that I know a lot of straight people who love threesomes with the opposite sex, are promiscuous and cheat on their partners frequently, so these are not "symptoms" which are exclusive to some bisexual individuals.

Anyway, that's my two cents.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 37 (view)
 
Who is to blame if a woman accidentally gets pregnamt?
Posted: 9/5/2007 8:28:44 PM
I blame wrestlers...

Listen pal, you just leave wrestlers out of this!!! (Or I'll put you in a head & arm, and you WON'T like it!!!)

OT...
Who's to blame?
I say blame the individuals who contribute the DNA... ie. the guy, and the girl. If you're not on birth control, and abstinance is not your option of choice, speak up!
If you're told to wear a condom, wear a damn condom! (And for God's sake, quit putting up such a fuss about it!)
If the condom breaks, start talking... head to the pharmacy/doc and get Plan B. Appropriately name Plan B in the event that Plan A did not work!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 39 (view)
 
Great Sex?
Posted: 8/27/2007 7:07:27 AM
Absolutely not.

But I may trick him into being f*ck friends after I kick him to the curb.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 73 (view)
 
Sex in the afternoon
Posted: 8/24/2007 8:46:27 PM
I definitely think about sex in the afternoon...
And before dinner, and during dinner, and after dinner, and during the hockey game, and before bed, and in bed, sometimes I dream about sex, I wake up thinking about sex, I'd love sex for breakfast, a quickie at lunch would be nice...

But, then, you can dream in one hand, and crap in the other and see which fills first...
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 76 (view)
 
Cleaning up or Embracing the fluids?
Posted: 8/24/2007 8:26:36 PM

I love it when a lady licks up every last drop after I cum on her face

Is it just me?
Seems like every guy has this fantasy that I'm going to be able to "clean up" or lick all of the come off of my own face? My tongue is not that long or dextrous...
Just come where you're supposed to... in my mouth! Then there is no mess, and no let downs.

OT - I prefer not to lounge in "love juice", not because I think its gross, but because I find it uncomfortable and unpleasant to be wet.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 187 (view)
 
Is being Physically Ugly a Curse ?
Posted: 8/23/2007 8:21:45 AM

In my experience, confidence is hard to fake.

It could be impossible to fake for that matter.

But its not impossible to develop.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 185 (view)
 
Is being Physically Ugly a Curse ?
Posted: 8/23/2007 6:21:23 AM
Looks really are in the eye of the beholder.

I think it also has a lot to do with perceived confidence.
Confidence has to be in check though; none is unattractive, a healthy amount can be hot and too much can get you a drink dumped on your head.

I imagine a physical disability or deformity can be more difficult to overcome, but again, someone may see you as the most beautiful person in the world, despite your own perceptions.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 237 (view)
 
The myth of doggie style
Posted: 8/22/2007 8:12:23 PM
I don't really for doggie style.
Because when I look down, I see her big ole flabby but and her ole nasty butthole and sometimes while we are doing it, the in and out motion creates a fan and blows stank air up in my face. Besides, have you ever been doing it doggy style and looked down and saw hemorrhoids or worse? It ain't a pretty site, I'll tell you what.

Dude, I'm sorry, but that's hilarious!
I do not want to know who you're sleeping with that has hemorrhoids and a stank bum hole.
Sick!
Sorry about your luck pal.

OT I still love doggie style, and I don't think that requires justification.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 247 (view)
 
how do u handle being a virgin past 25
Posted: 8/22/2007 7:55:03 PM
How would I handle being a virgin if I were past 25???

I'd probably try to go out and get laid... that is if you deem it to be a problem.

But then, I guess that's a little too obvious.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 36 (view)
 
what makes someone sexually attractive
Posted: 8/22/2007 7:52:23 PM
Nice eyes
Nice eye brows
A sexy firm bum
A yummy scent
A nice smile
A healthy attitude
Grrrrrr baby!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 10 (view)
 
Split tongues
Posted: 8/22/2007 6:51:54 AM

What is a split tongue ?

It is when someone has their tongue split - literally- down the centre, so that it has two prongs... I don't know if Marilyn Manson has it done... its pretty disgusting really.

I personally have never, and will never experience a partner with a split tongue, because I won't be able to engage in any type of intimate activity with them without throwing up!

I wonder how they can make out... you think you're tonging with them... and there are two... sick.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 136 (view)
 
How do you ask for sex?
Posted: 8/21/2007 8:02:54 PM
How do I ask for sex???

Most of the time I don't have to!!!


But I suppose, if I want it... my hands, or tongue do the talking.
Depending on the mood, "Baby, I'm horny" or "Honey, F*CK ME!!!" generally work wonders too.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 230 (view)
 
how old you are vs how old you look/act
Posted: 8/21/2007 4:46:06 PM
Well, I act like a 70 year old woman, but I look and feel my age (24), but I really don't think that that's going to justify me dating 60 or 70 something year old men!!!!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 57 (view)
 
Anal Orgasm?????
Posted: 8/21/2007 4:33:42 PM
I'm sure, as with everything else discussed in these forums, that this question is very individual.
But, for some, there are a very large number of nerves in the anus and rectum. Anal sex can provide stimulation there and it is also a good position for a man to stimulate a woman's g-spot to some degree as well.
For some, the added clitoral stimulation could send them through the roof!
As far as screaming during orgasm... some do, some don't. Some people are noisy throughout sex, and silent when they reach their climax.

All in all, the anal orgasm does exist. Its not fiction.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 22 (view)
 
freakier with age?
Posted: 8/21/2007 4:25:20 PM
I think beach chick has a point...
We do lose inhibitions as we get older. The experiences we have as we get older probably help us along, and the realization that others are doin' it! (Sounds so grade 5ish when I put it that way...)
Anyway, I remember discussing with my first boyfriend ever that we would never ever do x, y and z... and well, now I've done pretty much the whole alphabet! :P

If anyone finds my inhibitions lying around, do you mind sending a couple back? lol
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 153 (view)
 
Would you date any of your Ex's again?
Posted: 8/19/2007 6:09:18 PM
I often reminisce about ex-boyfriends.
Each one certainly had his strong points, but each had his weakness.
I ask myself this question often, and my conclusion is always that I would not date them again.
The question that remains though, is what are they thinking about me... or do they even bother?
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 16 (view)
 
Yea, so I'm boring.
Posted: 8/17/2007 5:57:48 AM
Since everyone has preferences, it would likely be best to date people who are interested in the same play as you are...
Perhaps it just wouldn't work with an anal-o-holic or a bondage lover.
No big deal, we all have preferences, and those are what make us individuals!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 40 (view)
 
Face licking
Posted: 8/14/2007 8:15:38 PM
I've enjoyed licking a lot of things in my life... fingers, popsicles, fences in winter, among other things, but no, faces have not been one of the first things on my list of things to lick.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 296 (view)
 
Any women left with body hair?
Posted: 8/13/2007 7:50:21 AM
My preference:
Ladies, for God's sake, make friends with wax! And just cause you wear make-up doesn't mean you have to look like a prostitute. Just learn how to wear it well! (I don't look like a prostitute, DO I?)

Gentlemen, at the very least, make friends with a set of clippers, and trim everything. A hairless chest is better, but I'll settle for trimmed... unless you're a carpet. Then we're likely not a match anyway. :P
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 45 (view)
 
Which man prefers fake boobs vs natural ones
Posted: 8/12/2007 8:06:23 PM
I prefer the look of fake boobs.
And I'm dying to get some, so when I do, I'll let everyone know how they feel.
There are techniques and technologies to make them feel good now too. They can be inserted under the pectoral muscles so that you still feel your real breasts, but they look perkier.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 195 (view)
 
The myth of doggie style
Posted: 8/12/2007 7:52:55 PM
To be honest, I don't care what his reason is for doing doggie style.... as long as I get it!
:P
But, if he doesn't like the look of my face, he might not find my ass is much better!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 14 (view)
 
POF compatibility
Posted: 8/12/2007 6:34:30 PM
Its probably not all that accurate, but who cares, its all for fun anyway!
Kind of like astrology!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 84 (view)
 
IF you got married again...
Posted: 8/12/2007 6:30:03 PM
How about IF I ever find someone to marry...
It doesn't matter how it goes down, as long as its special and I have my closest friends and family there.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 32 (view)
 
Eyes closed??
Posted: 8/12/2007 5:27:03 PM
There are so many factors to consider!

In a long term relationship, when you are secure with your partner, maybe it would be enriching to have eyes closed during sex. Just like it can be fun to use a blind fold with a partner when you're in a trusting situation!
If you're having a one night stand with someone, you're not secure maybe, and their eyes closed, people might be quite offended.

On another note, men are more sexually stimulated by visual cues, so maybe they are more likely to keep their eyes on their partners... women are more sexually stimulated by sensual stimulation and touch, so maybe they would be more likely to keep their eyes closed.
Perhaps a good masters thesis?
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 86 (view)
 
Dating a women your not physically attracted to
Posted: 5/29/2007 4:53:23 PM
I certainly think that it would be a moral offence to date someone you weren't attracted to just so that you can have the satisfaction of not being alone.
Perhaps you should spend some time getting to know yourself, getting to love yourself, and improving your own body and appearance, and perhaps in that time, someone who you can truly love will come along.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 713 (view)
 
yddraiggoch
Posted: 4/11/2007 9:10:34 PM
Please tell me that you normally are a well kept young man, and that photos 2 and 3 were just a bad day when you were in dyer need of a good haircut. In this case, delete photos 2 and 3.
Please have a look at your interests and determine what is an interest and what is a trait. Traits don't belong here, interests belong here.
Please, no need to repeat any information which is stated in the general info section of the profile.
Otherwise, its okay. You've got some baggage that you've laid right out in there... remember that I always say, purge as much as you can and only move on with a thin breifcase!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 707 (view)
 
LooknC
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:47:34 PM
I like the headline. Its cute.
Please, quit smoking.
Always begin sentences with capitals.
Religeous is spelled religious.
Ever considered writting paragraphs? Just a thought. Then you can group like things together...
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 705 (view)
 
Tariff
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:43:22 PM
I don't know why you've written prefer not to say beside body type, it looks like you have a hotter body than I do, and I'm 24!
Your about me is okay. Its a bit choppy, but it works.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 704 (view)
 
sirhcitna
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:39:55 PM

Which way is upstream?

Sounds like an important question, if you're a sperm.
You obviously need to quit smoking and doing drugs.
The first thing I thought when I looked at your about me was, "Whoa! Too many emoticons!"
Does this sentence make sense: "Why is everyone going the wrong?"
The sentence following it doesn't even begin with a capital letter! What poor utilization of the english language and grammar!
In general, your profile is a difficult read, mostly because of all of the random moving things.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 703 (view)
 
randomanalysis
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:22:31 PM
Wow, the headline really disturbs me... since that's what my ex-fiance said when he left... "I just need to experience life..." Well... best of luck to ya pal!
Anyway... perhaps you can find something a bit more... captivating.
You could use more photos.
I don't imagine you actually work as a slave monkey, so please, write something else.
Don't use short forms like 'SPC', and don't write etc etc in your interests.
Don't whine and complain in your about me that its difficult to write an about me. It makes you seem... incompetent and simple minded... in which case you shouldn't expect to find an attractive, smart, and interesting girl.
Your first date section is rather unappealing too, since it starts out with... "shit, uh"...
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 702 (view)
 
fwest911
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:14:21 PM
Your profile is awful. Delete it.
Or... put down the cell phone, get some new, clear headshots (of your face... get your mind out of the gutter), get a job and quit doing drugs.
Then write a new about me, and don't try to use humor, yours sucks.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 701 (view)
 
Luv2knowU2
Posted: 4/10/2007 8:10:48 PM
If honesty and candor are what you want, honesty and candor are what you will get!
I quite like your profile!
However, it would be beneficial to have a clear headshot of YOU alone as your main picture. I sure hope you're the guy on the left, cause the one on the right looks a bit dorky with those sunglasses!
Noone is actually spelled no one.
Otherwise, you may be receiving few messages as a result of the number of restrictions you have imposed... for example, I could never e-mail you!
Good luck!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 699 (view)
 
billbutler8
Posted: 4/10/2007 7:42:36 PM
Oh, little Billy... what are you doing here???
So you want me to rip it apart eh?
#1 (Bet you could've guessed this was coming...) QUIT SMOKING, you smell like a stinky ashtray!

<div class="quote">I enjoy my vocation and usually seem more like play than work.-when it is not-I will go take a break and do something else.
Should be: "I enjoy my vocation and it usually seems more like play than work; when it is not, I will go take a break and do something else."

Otherwise , your profile is fabulous! You're right, you are clever and witty, and your profile backs that up. Other than the fact that you have some long distance and out of focus photos, I'm amazed you still haven't found your match!

And honey, stop waiting for me... I know I'm damn well perfect, but I'm a bit young. :P
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 688 (view)
 
sock_puppeteer
Posted: 4/8/2007 4:02:06 PM
Your profile is written with pure excellence, wit, charm, and you've mastered the english language.
I was however annoyed by your disrespect for the profession and interest sections of the general info.

That's how I met who's behind those voices in my head.

Um... small alarm just went off... then I realized you were trying to be funny...
Some of the other jokes are a bit redundant and lame too... the Geico thing...
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 686 (view)
 
zoomba
Posted: 4/8/2007 1:00:38 PM
I'm really not sure why you're on POF.
You're a fugly, taken, smelly (smoke) mental patient... the man of every woman's dreams... not.
Funny... you're not single/not looking, but your profile goes on and one about dating...
*scratches head*roles eyes*
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 685 (view)
 
Devil_May_Dance
Posted: 4/8/2007 12:56:56 PM
Your profile looks pretty good.
Small things:
You're a relaxed guy
Please don't put little ;) in your profile... so annoying!
Next year's destination
Your standards are not low. If they were, you wouldn't be here.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 684 (view)
 
shaggy34cole
Posted: 4/8/2007 12:50:45 PM
Hi Mark, welcome to the fugly list. What this means is that you need a picture!!!
Please stop killing yourself, Mark... quit smoking!!! It will make you much more attractive. Lets be honest, its not even social norm anymore. No one else is doing it, why you?
Change your interests, they're boring!
If there's one thing I hate its redundancy.

I am a 46 year old widowed father

EVERY bit of that statement can be found in your general info. So its completely useless to have it in your about me.
Your about me is a bit... ugh. Try to utilize proper grammar and spelling. Consider writing two distinct paragraphs, a bit about you and your interests, and a paragraph about what you're looking for. This will help you to organize your thoughts.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 683 (view)
 
whyamisofly
Posted: 4/8/2007 12:42:58 PM
Please, for the sake of your health, and to ensure the possibility that you will have a prosperous dating career, make your weight a priority right now. Start including physical exercise and healthy eating into your daily regimen.

First and foremost, I am said to be 28-32 based on the way I hold/compose myself.

Some people might just say that they're mature, as opposed to "28-32" since that is rather specific.
You want someone who drinks socially, not drinks in socially.

2 month old to 973 years old

Get real.

if there's a will, there's a way!!

That's a great motto, I like your positive thinking.
You sound like a great catch, to be honest.
So my only suggestions are maybe some more pictures and get serious about your health.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 682 (view)
 
Athom
Posted: 4/8/2007 12:35:23 PM
Step away from the webcam. Do something about your hair. Go for a walk. Get a digital camera. Get some new, clear, non-redundant headshots and a variety of other pictures. (Please!)

I'm a man with a great many interests.

Really?? Cause you only listed 7. Build that list to 12 or 15, keep it in multiples of three.

capable to fit

What are you french? We say 'capable of fitting'...
Don't use lol's in your profile. Especially if you're not funny. Its kinda like a comedian who cackles at his own jokes, ruins it for the rest of us.
I think you are french. Or some other type of foreiner. I'm not going to re-write your entire profile for you, I'm just going to tell you it needs some corrections.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 681 (view)
 
Raveknight
Posted: 4/8/2007 12:28:09 PM

It's no mistake if it's always repeated

I'm kinda wondering what exactly you're referring to here? Are you the mistake??
Maybe you should find something else to put here, don't want to give anyone the wrong impression. Your headline needs to be attractive and catchy so that people will want to read your profile.
You don't have a single clear headshot of yourself. A clear, attractive headshot might be the most important component of a good profile. Again, it serves to catch people's attention so that they'll read your profile.
Documentaries not Documentarys.
Your profile contains a lot of run-on sentences and sometime you should consider learing how to utilize punctuation correctly so that when you write stuff it doesn't go on and on and on and on and on and on like this is doing because it becomes laborious to read things that don't contain much useful information but seem to go on forever get it got it good. Please also don't use short forms!!!
Consider popping your about me into word and fixing your grammar and spelling mistakes.
I'm not sure what the story is with all of the lists at your about me. Ditch 'em.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 668 (view)
 
mag1ck_man
Posted: 4/4/2007 5:31:32 PM
You really need to invest in a dictionary.
You can't spell magical, and you're a magician... hum... if, for some rediculous reason you've misspelled it on purpose, fix it. As soon as someone sees it misspelled in your headling (on purpose or not) they're going to assume that you're not that smart...
You have an overwhealming tendancy to write very short sentences. Learn the power of the comma, and start organizing your thoughts.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 667 (view)
 
petrorabbit
Posted: 4/4/2007 5:16:27 PM
Hey dude, you're looking for a nice girl? That very original. Join the club, everyone's looking for a nice girl these days... hell, even I am!
Quit smoking, it makes you smell bad.
Wow, you have no job and marijuana is one of your interests. Dude, that's awesome, you're going far in life!!! Don't let the munchies get the best of you or you'll get fat... that you'll be a real catch!
I'm not going to bother citiquing your about me, because whoever reads it after they find out that you're an unemployed pothead probably doesn't care what quality it is anyway.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 666 (view)
 
all that glitters74
Posted: 4/4/2007 3:44:02 PM
The headline... has got to change. It makes me think I'm on fire or something, and I should stop drop and roll... well maybe you are that hot... I don't know.
I think you must have some idea that your picture isn't that great. While it is a nice head shot, its not entirely clear. You need more pictures, of good quality.
I don't entirely know why you classified yourself as BBW, but if that is the case, I would say its a good idea to begin to incorporate a variety of types of exercises into your interests, and persue them.
You need to proof read your profile. Read it very slowly, and make sure that you don't have unnecessary errors (ie. and if we become just friends that great too; should be 'that's great too').
Also, recall some grammar lessons:
Sentences begin with capital letters.
Periods, exclamation points and question marks a forms of punctuation which finish a sentence. Any following remarks are considered a new sentence, and should begin with a period.
DO learn the power of the comma and use it wisely.
DO use spaces after punctuation marks. After a period, comma, semi-colon, exclamation mark, etc. you should press the space bar, just like have done several times in this sentence.
I really can't believe that you don't want a retarded gay man who's stuck in the closet because he has not embraced his sexuality, resulting in a self-hate which is displayed by an intolerance for other human beings...
Tattoo is spelled with two t's and I cannot stand when people are too lazy to write things out in full (don't use the word tats).
Your condition is actually spelled neurofibromatosis. After that, you may wish to correct your collection of sentence fragments.
And, that's all I have to say about that.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 658 (view)
 
Mr_Gummischuh
Posted: 4/2/2007 3:28:13 PM
Your profile starts out with a headline that makes me think of porn. NOT GOOD.
You have 3 of the same picture, which is totally unnecessary. You need more shirts and more pictures.
Awesome: you have no job, that should score you huge points. (Unless you do have a job, in which case, tell us what your profession is.)

My name is Sid and I am me

Don't put this in your profile, it sounds like you're dealing with an identity crisis of some sort.
Your profile is very long, and while you do have some legit points to make, there's a lot of crap to read through to find them.
You need to do some cuting back.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 657 (view)
 
herselftheelf
Posted: 4/2/2007 3:05:43 PM
I'd love to know what's going to make you a 'professional biologist'??? But... either way... I hope you'll find a job...
Your writing skills leave something to be desired.
And I don't think that your profile is an appropriate place to post a questionnaire, since the people reading your profile are not necessarily your friends.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 655 (view)
 
rowdycowboy
Posted: 4/2/2007 2:59:31 PM
Your headline is discriminating and it serves only to push people away... your headline is supposed to rope people in!
You need to quit smoking all together.
A picture of you alone should be your main photo.
You don't have a job, very nice.
I think you meant flying accross a lake not flying across a wake... be more careful with your proof reading... or did you proof read??? I can't believe people can't correct their own errors anymore... I guess that's what's happened as a result of word processors... great...
Otherwise, not bad.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 654 (view)
 
gnr_24
Posted: 4/2/2007 2:45:24 PM
Your headline really isn't doing anything for me... you need to get something new... something that works.
Try not to call exercise a 'habit'... saying that you've adopted a healthy lifestyle sounds much better.
I don't know if you've already had a great deal of help with this, but if not, you've done a fantastic job otherwise on your profile.
Good luck!
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 653 (view)
 
perlebar
Posted: 4/2/2007 2:38:49 PM
Cool, you did the smart think and just deleted your profile. Good on ya.
 kikilynn
Joined: 4/18/2005
Msg: 652 (view)
 
securehandsome1
Posted: 4/2/2007 2:37:19 PM
Take the word 'it' out of your headline. Or, just change your headline... not that its that bad... it just could be better.
You're about me mentions the Vegas scene a bunch of times, which is foolish. Don't tell us what you're not, its not necessary. And don't use capitals in the middle of sentences. Sentences begin with capitals and end with a period (or other appropriate punctuation) and the only other capitals which are required are for formal nouns. Get it?
So clean it all up, cut some of the crap, and you'll have a pretty decent profile.
 
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