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 Author Thread: Infinite Memories
 LittleRockerDoll
Joined: 7/15/2008
Msg: 441 (view)
 
Infinite Memories
Posted: 11/25/2008 8:47:38 PM
Oh my goodness...I am just in awe at all of these stories...all of the ones that i'v read so far are so beautiful and have actually made me feel sincere emotions to go along with them.

We could speak of anything
Just you and me...
While so intently
Our eyes would meet
I'd get lost in your sensitivity.
Talking for hours
From sun up to sunset
I'd look for your next text
Each word you sent
even each word said
Made me bubbly inside my head
You held me so dear
And you were so sweet
I imagined nowhere in the world would I meet
a prince as charming
with the most wicked kiss
that always brought us to an instant of bliss
I'll miss you
Forever.
I won't forget you.
You were my first lover.
Those three months we spent together...why...
Is what I will wonder until I die
Did my prince so true turn out to have a secret?
Why must we be stuck to live it?
On his inside hiding
There was a secret lying, dormant...
Those things were not him.
But just lies.
For him to slip soundly in my mind.
I won't forgive myself.
 LittleRockerDoll
Joined: 7/15/2008
Msg: 4 (view)
 
A poem I wrote; please comment if you feel inclined
Posted: 11/25/2008 8:31:52 PM
I think that your poem is extremely beautiful and very catchy. I love it! I love to write poetry too... :)
 
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