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Thread: LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines
DOMUT
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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines
Posted:
11/11/2009 1:59:38 PM
with the cards dealt by life's ripple tides
it's thru the ripple we decide
which way the tidal sway
leads us each day
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
11/4/2009 9:21:03 AM
I beg to differ for I am not them-I am simply me
But I recognize that the fruit does fall from the tree
For in each interaction with another we decide what course of action we will do
Trees produce good and rotten fruit depending upon the conditions with which they are forced to endure
Same as the conditions we are all subject to
Love and hate
Kindness and scorn
Gentle or harsh
We decide what we will embrace or discard
Same as "one bad apple don't spoil the whole bunch"
DOMUT
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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines
Posted:
10/25/2009 11:12:07 AM
and following spirit was really in fashion
seems has everything to do with passion
which in a carnal sense can confuse and trip one up
Physical passion is such a delight and can capture those with the strongest might
Perhaps that is what keeps us from the light
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
10/14/2009 8:33:08 AM
r.
I hope that, as we never page 300, you will still continue to share your talent with the rest of us who contribute to this thread.
I recall you saying you were going to continue until you hit page 300.
Hopefully you will continue sharing.
Beth
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
10/3/2009 9:12:06 AM
Belong in just being
Free to surrender to or fight that which we behold
Questioning
Pondering
Accepting
Forgiving
Nay say to the harshness of our own protective stance
Dancing to melodies pure and true only to be sidestepped by the discord others choose to release into the ether of the atmosphere
Atmosperes of contempt and malice
Bitterness curled and writhing on a deadening vine
Careful where you step as newlife springs forth even amongst the decay
DOMUT
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LAST LINE REPEATED STANZAS using 8 lines
Posted:
10/3/2009 9:02:22 AM
And I fear the sun will be rising shortly
To greet me on this new day
Casting me in shadows of my physical self
Reminding me to keep the dust off the shelf
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
9/22/2009 12:37:52 PM
What is integrity but the manner in which we are to act when no one is looking as if someone actually is?
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
9/22/2009 10:34:23 AM
Absolutely noble provided that in that nobility is also contained humility
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
9/19/2009 9:59:32 AM
If derision were the mortified ghost of centuries full of discourse
would delusion then be like a bead of sweat waiting to fall from the
fevered brow of humanity?
In other words... if we, in our vain arrogance, were the laughing stock of the Creator,
because of our arrogance and prideful nature, is it then not fitting that as we age delusion takes the elderly in an attempt to recognize the vanity with which we lived?
Like specks of rememberance seared through with temperance, our elderly live fitfully, swarmed in reality-based delusion that no amount of pharmacology can correct.
Just thinking today. Glad to have a space with which to leave my thoughts.
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
9/16/2009 11:01:08 AM
Were it not for suffering we would not know grace...
that ageless beauty who surprises even the most dull with a hint of tears at the recognition of such.
Were it not for grace this planet would have seared quite some time ago.
It is the innocents that sparkle at the simpliest of pleasures...a childlike essence that entices merriment at the dandelion fluff.
Were it not for grace what would it be we would further be subjected to in a world of selfish banter that grows as deep as the vast oceans of gratification.
Were it not for grace we would not be.
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
8/23/2009 7:06:08 AM
for each is a scared part of our human family
some torn in the direction of destruction
while others innocent stand with horrified hearts
witness to the totality of mans evil greed and lust for power
surely being exposed to such barbarian actions tends to instill in the heart of the young that this must be a way to behave
limbs and hearts mangled by the explosive nature of corruption
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
8/6/2009 10:46:55 AM
The gift of friendship transcends all
Hurrah to the writer for that making that call
Tis finer than silver or gold
A true gift that won't tarnish or grow old
Like a marriage of hearts
that no object can depict
Tis true friendship that makes love stick
DOMUT
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Quotes From Scientists/Philosophers You Like:
Posted:
8/6/2009 10:40:27 AM
Good, better, best
Never let 'er rest until the good is better than the best
Told to me by a 86 year old friend
No idea who the originator of that saying is but I like it
DOMUT
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Haiku Connection
Posted:
8/6/2009 10:32:25 AM
watch cholesteral...
incorporating fishoil
into your diet
DOMUT
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Quotes From Scientists/Philosophers You Like:
Posted:
8/4/2009 12:55:53 PM
A Human being is part of the whole, called by us "universe", a part limited in time and space. He expereiences himself, his thoughts and feelings as something separated from the rest - a kind of optical illusion of his consciousness. This delusion is a kind of prison for us, restricting us to our personal desires and to affection for a few persons nearest to us. Our task must be to free ourselves from this prison by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature in its beauty. Nobody is able to acheive this completely, but the striving for such acheivement is in itself a part of the liberation and a foundation for inner security.
Albert Einstein
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
8/1/2009 10:45:54 AM
...then what I do to you, I equally do to me
Relatively simple the manner in which to be free
Instead of returning harshness gently offer compassion
Instead of returning a critical reply offer constructive comments
We ALL know the difference and yet we are not also so careful as to actually understand the manner in which our words affect those around us
Words to live by include every word we say
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
7/29/2009 4:48:55 PM
Tis nuance the sweetness of reserve
Tis a subtle and transparent wisp of allure
An intrique that beckons come closer
Yet remains a cautious distance
Half hidden in the gray of shadow
Unknown voyage that harkens caution
Oh to venture boldly forward and capture desire
Familiar trembling that energizes
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WOW!
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
7/29/2009 4:32:27 PM
Let's be happy for a day
Cast the bitterness astray
Hang the anger like a hat upon a hook
Take a glance and just look
See the beauty that unfolds
When the slump has grown old
PUT ON A NEW HAT AND DANCE TO THE BEAT OF BEAUTY
You can always take the damn hat off the hook if you absolutely must revel in distain
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
7/28/2009 8:19:43 AM
renewed and refreshed sharing our noctural heaven
where our desires become made manifest during our purposeful rest
soaring on winged flight
fanciful stirrings throughout the night
sights beheld on noctural wing
what adventures blissful sleep doth bring
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
7/23/2009 12:39:14 PM
Where is the innocence when even a child at an early age will lie because desire has captured a longing in a visual sense
Didn't eat that cookie although the evidence is clearly lined across the childs face
Defiance and desire go hand in hand and hold even the youngest a captive audience
Should we continue to smile at the cuteness of the simpliest of lies or begin to correct
the child?
I've seen commercials on the blasted tube portraying the supposed hiliarity of lies.
No wonder the corruption that abounds.
F*ck now I'm hungry for a cookie!
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
7/21/2009 12:04:26 PM
Dance is also measured words and the manner in which they resonate thru the vocal cords
A movement of humanity that dares to display in an intellectual sense
Frolicking thru a maze of words and meanings to try and capture the attention of an exchange of meaning
Dancing to inspire
Dancing to understand
AAAHHHHHH......the nakiedness of it all
DOMUT
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Do you believe in angels???
Posted:
7/21/2009 11:57:57 AM
I had an experience as a youngster when I awoke from sleep in the middle of the night
There was a being like a cloud in the form of a human although no distinction between gender could be seen
Their hand was placed over my head
I bite the hand and the being disappeared
Pretty scary stuff for a little girl
Yes .......most definately angels do exist
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
7/20/2009 1:50:14 PM
And if the system hadn't been up to some degree of folly what would be the entertainment one could garner from such a day?
And if blunt responses oversee fanciful terms of jargon that spew from the so called educated mouths of the legal systems puppet dance what would be the stimulus that resides where the accused doth sit?
Puppeteer showcase laden with supposed virtue that belies the dreadful circumstance of the dance they have chosen to parlay.
Just spewing a bit of my own jargon.
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
7/20/2009 1:47:22 PM
And if the system hadn't been up to some degree of folly what would be the entertainment one could garner from a perfect day?
And if blunt responses oversee fanciful terms of jargon that spew from the so called educated mouths of the legal systems puppet dance what would be the stimulus that resides where the accused doth sit?
Puppeteer showcase laden with supposed virtue that belies the dreadful circumstance of the dance they have chosen to parlay.
Just spewing a bit of my own jargon.
DOMUT
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James Taylor....................................................................
Posted:
7/17/2009 9:29:18 AM
The signs of the prophets are written on the subway walls and tenament halls
DOMUT
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James Taylor....................................................................
Posted:
7/17/2009 9:28:28 AM
The signs of the prophets are written on the subway walls and tenament halls
DOMUT
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himynameisSarah: That hair in my face, man, shit, I got it bad
Posted:
7/17/2009 9:25:13 AM
What is taken seldom returns
Unless for lessons we learn
What is given always remains intact
Beggars forgiven insulters lack
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
7/17/2009 9:20:23 AM
Any inhalation of emptiness
Is still filled with expectation
As such are the means to an end
Seeking for fragments within the emptiness
To combine within the whole we each desire to fill
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
7/15/2009 12:02:46 PM
Slipped off the page for just a bit
Institution cracks the whip
Coming across hard from a legal stance
Incredible to see the dance with which the system doth profess
Asked if the judge was the law or was to uphold the law
Seems the more brutal the truth with which you stand
The more completely one gets to see the misjustice of those who sit at the seat
It's all good and I didn't mean to whine
Just catching up on a pasttime I had to temporarily leave behind
Smiles and favors and wishes to all
DOMUT
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Old Souls......only
Posted:
5/23/2009 10:07:55 AM
That my mouth could voice with equal measure
A beautiful recreation to the tender
That my mind could travel unrestricted to the heights and deepths in a domain yet unrealized
That beauty which surpasses all understanding would unfold into the populace
Finery from the silken weave of the threads of time
Knowing not the hour
Knowing not the day
Carefully trying not to go astray
Like a grounded feather carried in the wind
That love would gently usher us all in
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
5/23/2009 9:50:40 AM
It's with outward bounds I seek my relief
For being bound to disobiedence is the manner in which obedience is learned
If you do not know what a pair tastes like you never will until you have tasted such
If you do not know what saddness is you will never know what happiness is...comparatively speaking
If you fall and do not get back up again how can you continue on the journey
Circling of circumstance
Opportunities of perchance
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
5/21/2009 12:40:39 PM
archetypes perhaps to release our fear....
for what is fear but the unknown has already been said
take it a bit further and we realize that we have all experienced fear already
fear of keeping our jobs that enable us to support our families
fear of maintaining effective communication with one another so as not to be misunderstood
each day presents a medley of circumstances that could possible come our way and it is quite possible that our interpretation/perspective/thought process of what the outcome of the apprehension of our thoughts regarding that circumstance could come to fruition
in other words...
could it be possible that we all create our own circumstances...
positive or negative...
based upon what we choose to believe?
if we beleive that another is destined to have something bad occur in their life because we believe that is their due because we do not agree with what is occurring in their life, even though we have not walked in their shoes and truly do not know the circumstances of what they have been through that brought them to that point in their life, then in doing so we are acting as if we have the right to determine what occurs in anothers life
So many chiefs and so few braves.
DOMUT
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WTF
Posted:
5/21/2009 9:59:31 AM
They say FOCUS is the key to acquiring your desires
I say, Man, why does it seem the establishment is always trying to FOLK us
Make up this saying, turn it to that, twist it around
MAD CAT IN A HAT
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DOMUT
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Old Souls....only.
Posted:
5/21/2009 9:48:44 AM
The Bee travels from flower to flower gathering the essense reguired to produce the wonderful Honey...a food so pure and sustaining that the tombs of the pharoahs still contained viable honey. So much for what humans know.
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
5/12/2009 8:38:51 AM
I am a child again who chooses to believe
Religion is mans interpretation of the Divine
Man is not Divine therefore that nullifies religion
Money is the manner in which control and power are obtained on the planet
Money, at the source of where it originates from, is paper
Paper comes from trees or whatever means is available to produce the necessary process to turn paper into money
Trees provide us with oxygen
Money provides us with greed, contempt, and a distorted view of what is truly important in life
At the present time money is a necessary component as it is the manner in which exchanges occur
Greed, contempt and a distorted view are the results of mans lust for the supposed power money brings
I am a child again who chooses to believe
Since I did not create the trees there is a source that is beyond my means of sight to which I choose to give glory and honor to
DOMUT
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WTF
Posted:
5/12/2009 8:21:52 AM
Quite simply put........
E
GO.
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
5/11/2009 1:42:50 PM
Unlimited beauty, un pair ah lilled peace
Abolish the age of dis ease
Complicated by a simple inability to merely ask
Please
We teach our children "please "and "thank you"
and give a "you're welcome" in reply
Teach them obedience and let our own slip by
My intent is not to anger or abhor
Simply desiring to gain entrance into the garden once more
DOMUT
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Re: Your Favorite Music Lyrics
Posted:
5/11/2009 1:29:28 PM
Tax the rich
Feed the poor
Till
THERE R NO RICH NO MORE
DOMUT
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Re: Your Favorite Music Lyrics
Posted:
5/11/2009 9:20:33 AM
"Restless spirit sleep alone tonight sending all my love across the wire"
"Restless spirit on an endless flight"
Spear it!
DOMUT
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First Line, Last Line (Part Deux)
Posted:
5/11/2009 8:59:30 AM
We can be bold!
Feed us a morsel of compassion and understanding and we have gained at the spread of creations table
Immerse us with a thirst for this gain and our minds will expand in a selfless sense
Provide us with a satiation that goes beyond merely a means with which to feed the physical body
Let us continually drink in the firmament of creation realizing that the gift, the present, is always at hand
Comfort us with the peace that is provided within the knowledge of grace
Not the author, just one of many receivers.
DOMUT
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Litigious Delusions
Posted:
5/9/2009 9:08:09 AM
Bitterness, hatred , and resentment carry with them a penalty
Being the opposite of contentment, love and acceptance there is the possibility that embracing such will not afford you the opportunity to experience the other
I hope that is not the case
Mindset determines what is present in our lives
DOMUT
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~ Calling For Peace ~
Posted:
5/9/2009 8:34:52 AM
Feed us a morsel of compassion and understanding and we have gained at the spread of creations table
Immerse us with a thirst for this gain and our minds will expand in a selfless sense
Provide us with a satiation that goes beyond merely a means with which to feed the physical body
Let us continually drink in the firmament of creation realizing that the gift, the present, is always at hand
Comfort us with the peace that is provided within the knowledge of grace
My spirit became overwhelmed in the wellspring of tears that flowed with the knowledge of the grace that had been bestowed upon me to pen such prose
I am not the author, merely one of many receivers
DOMUT
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In light of many faces.
Posted:
5/8/2009 9:07:08 AM
"We are human we retaliate"
We are human... we either CHOOSE to retaliate or CHOOSE not to
In retaliating we have then become victim/allowed ourselves to become affected by the actions and/or words of another
In effect, we have then allowed another to suck us into the manner of behavior that we initially found to be unacceptable..hence the desire to retaliate
Where is the solid ground to be found if we are quick to return what was offered?
QUICKSAND.
As a tree is planted in the ground firmly bound to maintain and grow within the area provided so ought we to firmly plant ourselves in a stance that demonstrates we will not exchange ill gain for good intent
It is simply a matter of deciding for yourself which course of action serves you better
Stupid is as stupid does.
DOMUT
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Old Souls....only.
Posted:
5/8/2009 8:50:02 AM
In a blackened void that holds our fright
Reveling in our auditory delight
'Tis the unknown... a cursatory plight
Spurred on by a ferver to bind all tight
'Tis fear..really...that tallies up the score
Each desiring to be free from the negativity that seeks to repel the positive
Polarity governs the axis and yet we seek to upset the balance of simply being honest enough to acknowledge that we all contain aspects of both
DOMUT
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taking silence seriously
Posted:
5/8/2009 8:39:24 AM
There is much to be said for silence
It is serenity escaped from a garden of bliss
It is where we go to enlist
It is calm, peace and quiet
There is no confrontation or condemnation
There is nothing to forgive as all is delight
It is beauty surrounded in light
It is all and nothing at the same time
DOMUT
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In light of many faces.
Posted:
5/7/2009 9:48:05 AM
And would the day ever come to pass when all nations would be still at last
Actually...truly...seeing the condition and plight that has overcome many an individual, population and nation
Stepping outside of the comfort zone that has been so meticiously put into place
Reaching beyond in compassion for the unfamiliar face
Caring more of the plight of another
Embracing each frail, elderly woman as if they were their own mother
Each child as if they had been born of their seed or come from their womb
Give just enough to ease the discomfort that abundance brings and pat yourself on the back for a job done well
Until we go beyond the belief that all we have is based upon the active measure we have taken to accomplish the "items" we have in our life we will never truly know of the goodness we have been fashioned to impart
DOMUT
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The Cranberries..................................................................
Posted:
5/7/2009 9:30:21 AM
Shawn Mullens (sp?)
"We're born to shimmer, we've born to shine, we're born to radiate."
DOMUT
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The Cranberries..................................................................
Posted:
5/7/2009 9:29:33 AM
Shawn Mullens (sp?)
"We're born to shimmer, we've born to shine, we're born to radiate."
DOMUT
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The Hunters
Posted:
5/7/2009 9:26:14 AM
Each stealthly stalking into anothers domain
Each uttered word barring refrain
Each embrace a fatal dance towards death
Each moment a surrender into everlast
Sensing
Reeling
Spewing from our mouth the distaste of what we do not accept
Thoughts passing through the mind seeking victims willing to engage in folly
How long till the stillness of silence echos the refrain of life
Each hunting and hunted
DOMUT
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WTF
Posted:
5/6/2009 5:24:01 PM
All we have came from the planet upon which we live yet time and again some wisea** decides that their idea of profiteering from what was graciously bestowed upon this planet in the first place...way long before any of our sorry a**es were born here... gets to boost themself to a point of greed at the expense of others. Share and share alike? Pity the poor f*ck that can not see beyond their own selfish sight.
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