|Entwined ... an extra twistPage 3 of 15 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15)|
|Funny that sounds vaguely familar :) love ya teddy you're a silly boy but a wonderful friend :)|
|Entwined ... an extra twist|
Posted: 3/23/2009 1:11:46 PM
|You have a sadness in your eyes|
And a depth to your words
There is mystery all around.
And there are no lies to hide.
High above, flying with the birds.
While the silence does surround.
This is where we are all bound.
We're like cattle within the herd.
With no one here by our side.
This is where friendship should be found.
And where the emptiness is obscured.
Where we should have no alibis.
And no one to continually tell us lies.
Or our love be shattered and blurred.
Where the wind takes us back to the ground.
No longer must we wear our disguises
No longer shall we just be part of the herd.
This is where we come together unbound.
Posted: 3/24/2009 4:25:24 AM
|Lucid thank you so much for posting your poems in my thread, that means so much to me..you just don't even know..they are wonderful. I wish i had better words to explain myself, but alas,..i am just a woman and not a dictionary lol |
My friend Wayne, recently stared sharing his poetry and i am trying to get him to start posting here..he's afraid that someone will put down his poetry and i keep telling him they are wonderful..so would you ALL please leave comments for his poem below..i would appreciate it greatly. he needs some encouragement :)
I missed you today at 3:35,
My opportunity to feel alive,
I know you don't know how I feel,
You think my feelings are not real,
I fear to tell you of my truth,
That I am old and you are youth,
Forbidden thoughts I can not speak,
For fear another you will seek,
My thoughts of you can't be expressed,
without you thinking I'm possessed,
By the charm that makes up you,
The grace that pulls me so close too,
Your spirit I hold so very dear,
I want so much to have you near,
I swore to never Love again,
But clouds split open and you flew in,
And now I'm trapped in the reality,
That you are you, and I am me,
And when you tell me I must go,
I'll miss you more than you can Know.
Wayne P. March 24, 2009 6:13 a.m.
Posted: 3/24/2009 7:39:50 AM
In a joining when we speak
You lay before me inspire peak
In our minds within our touch
Leaving thought members much
Impressions of me left on you
Darkness and bright what I write
Now you’re held upon this wall
A different point will display it all
Driving my point thru your fiber
You’re my paper under pencil
& my push-pin joins our mental
~ Words of encouragement ... looking forward to his style, words, thoughts and involvement to commit ...
Posted: 3/24/2009 2:50:14 PM
|LOL laid, thanks so much for your sweet words...i'm very flattered :)|
Posted: 3/24/2009 6:39:58 PM
|Brought over from mandrake's thread.|
We sit by the fire
You and i
Snuggled up close
Warm and dry
We sit and laugh
As day falls to night
and love leads the way.
I look at you
And you at me
This is how it's supposed to be.
I finally see the light.
Oh what a beautiful night.
And nothing less
Can take away this happiness
Posted: 3/24/2009 6:40:46 PM
|thank you seahorsey for your wonderful words...as always your poems are very much appreciated here. Thank you for stopping by.|
Posted: 3/24/2009 8:11:33 PM
|Shadow..you're beautiful. I know you are a guy, but you're still beautiful..thank you for the beautiful write..you are always welcome in my neck of the woods. :)|
Posted: 3/24/2009 11:42:21 PM
|Lucid..you're amazing as always..never stop being amazing, please.|
Posted: 3/25/2009 4:51:13 AM
|Post # 63...by Wayne...I hope you will continue to write your words. I enjoyed reading the write. Look forward to seeing more from you.|
Love all the writing being displayed here. Keep up the good works.
Posted: 3/25/2009 5:17:57 AM
|omg karmarhine..that is sooo beautiful..thank you so much for sharing it in my thread..i dunno why but something about that poem just touched me in a way i can't really express..it's beautiful..|
Posted: 3/25/2009 5:19:08 AM
|thank you as always for your kind words mandrake...you always have such wonderful things to say and i do appreciate them very much and i know wayne will too. So i hope that when he sees these he will start writing here as well. He has some beautiful poems and he needs to share them with people who care about poetry as we do. :)|
Thank you all!! You are all so awesome!
Posted: 3/25/2009 5:31:37 AM
|Lucid, if you're going to write as amazingly as you are, then by all means i'm happy to be your muse :) Thank you so much for making me feel so special :)|
Posted: 3/25/2009 6:25:33 AM
|This is a response to Lucid's last poem on page 3. I posted this in his thread, just bringing it over|
Words and emotion entwined.
Silent musings shared divine.
In the twilight they shall dance.
Words enveloped in romance.
Eloquent thoughts wrapped in gold.
Inside my heart and mind i hold.
You inspire a passion within.
A river of emotion does begin.
Creativity flows though my soul.
In a fury that i cannot control.
Every written word sparks a fire
And every day i shall enquire.
And keep them within my heart.
And i am happy to be a part.
Your emotions come to light.
And they bring me such delight.
Thank you again lucid. You really are amazing!
Posted: 3/25/2009 6:46:19 AM
|Brought over from shadow's thread:|
Out of the darkness and into the light
He sparks emotion; it feels so right
When he touches me, it fuels a fire.
A fire of love and intense desire.
In the shadows i have always crept.
Sometimes even praying for death.
A mystery seems to always surround
In his arms forever, i wish to be bound.
I cannot believe all the feelings he brings.
He does make this awakening heart sing.
I'm thankful he brought me back to life.
With all the years that were filled with strife.
In the darkness i wish nevermore.
Because of this wonderful man i adore.
Posted: 3/26/2009 9:23:49 AM
|Glad you liked it lucid.. :)|
Wrote for mandrake's thread, just bringing it here.
His memory haunts me
And it taunts me
I wonder often where
But it leaves despair
His memory is etched
He'd like that I bet.
Sorrow seemingly remains
Crashing in like a train
Loneliness drowns me
As thoughts surround me
Heartache dwells on
Of lost but not forgotten one.
Posted: 3/27/2009 1:23:58 AM
|You look down on me because I'm different|
Of which I've become completely indifferent
You may hate me because I'm not thin
But if only you would bother to look within
You would see a beautiful person inside
But, your hurtful words, i can no longer abide.
So point and laugh at me, if you must
There is simply nothing to more discuss
You see me as disgusting, i know
But it has come time for me to go
So go ahead and make all your jokes
But i will not be the one to provoke
All your ignorance and childish games
Your closed minded behavior is such a shame
Posted: 3/27/2009 2:50:14 AM
|that's very perplexing lucid..not sure what to think of that one..but i like it for the most part :p LOL|
Posted: 3/27/2009 3:19:11 AM
|ahh see now hearing, rather seeing, you say that..makes perfect sense to me..and going back and reading it..i get it and i love it....see i told you..you're amazing!|
Posted: 3/27/2009 3:52:52 AM
|well i like that you're abstract..it takes me a minute to figure out what you're trying to say sometimes, but most of the time i get you..|
have a good night :)
Posted: 3/27/2009 6:36:26 AM
|All my life, I have wondered what I did wrong.|
I kept my head up and tried to stay strong.
Obstacle after obstacle I hit a wall.
All I could seem to do was fall.
Then one day you came into my life.
I had no idea what would happen after all the strife.
But one day we fell in love.
Somehow, someway, we fit like a glove.
Like nothing I have ever known
The greatest of love, my Darling, you have shown.
Because of you, I'm alive again.
Ready to make a new start, let life begin.
There is a beauty that is you.
It's in everything you are and all that you do.
Today I wonder what I did right in my life.
To have you here by my side, to someday be your wife.
In a daze, I seem to be
Because your love is all I can see.
I thank my lucky stars everyday,
For a love that I know will forever stay.
You make me happy, you make me smile.
For you, I would walk 200 hundred miles.
As the days pass by, my world seems like a brighter place.
And everyday the smile grows more and more on my face.
I know that this has happened because of you, and only you.
For you there is positively nothing I would not do.
My love for you grows more and more each day.
With you, my heart will always stay.
Thank you for all that you are; all that you do, and all that is you.
I love you Babe, forever and a day.
Posted: 3/27/2009 7:33:00 PM
|hmm didn't know they had a song called that, will have to look it up now...|
Posted: 3/27/2009 8:39:33 PM
|and once again..amazing...:)|
Posted: 3/27/2009 9:06:07 PM
|kick @ss tune lucid..thanks for giving me that link..that's so cool of you.|
Posted: 3/28/2009 12:32:43 AM
|A dream of him would be a dream indeed|
But my heart does sometimes impede
Red my heart may certainly bleed
But it has never really been freed
One left me in a wake of dust
My heart to him i did intrust
But for him it was merely lust
With his hand he casually brushed
I often seek such sweet traits
But in them i've never found a mate
A dream perhaps my mind does create
And no one will probably ever equate
My heart flies with wings of the angels
But sometimes on my sleeve it dangles
And emotions get tied up in tangles
It is sometimes hard to disentangle
Alas my friend, it must be a dream
Someday my eyes again may beam
And not get lost in all these schemes
In a dream perhaps it shall always be deemed.