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 revoskeepnus
Joined: 8/7/2010
Msg: 26
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I'm saving myself for that man...
decided to take a stand
and wrestle the emotions
and wants of mere man...

Masturbation is just as good
really it is
sort of...

I am not going to let another notch develop
my belt will surely fall to pieces if I do...
I'm gonna wait
for the date
when My True Love comes knocking...
It's really no big deal
for he's the one I want
and if I didn't... I wouldn't be talking...

Ha, whatever... :)
I say this after one month... and school starts again real soon
I'll be busy
as a ****ing beaver
and my beaver is weary
during such moments...
always waiting for him though
because I'm just a love sick fool
 *mandrake*
Joined: 9/19/2006
Msg: 27
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 10:49:46 AM
^^^ and what, may I ask, is your age again? [wink]

The whisper falls prey
to it's own sanctuary,
imprisoned in a tomb of voiceless
silence, searching destiny
on the walls
of charcoal halls,
dreaming of a safe harbor
to be heard,
yet alas! the whisper falls prey
to it's own echo!
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 8/7/2010
Msg: 28
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 10:55:40 AM
beautiful manny, nice to see you back around...

I'm 84 today, 27 in a few months... and have the naive blush of a 16 year old when next to that man...
 iceaxe
Joined: 3/13/2008
Msg: 29
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Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 11:08:33 AM
here it is all wrapped and ribboned
and covered with hearts sincere
yes its a cake with ingredients wisdom
and you can eat it all right here
I am sorry if the taste is not for you
if it was baked a little too long
your palate being much younger than mine
may result in a flavor too strong
but eat it or go without dessert
for your sister there's another batch
what is that you say, take it away?
you want to bake your own from scratch?
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 8/7/2010
Msg: 30
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 2:13:48 PM
What he wanted to say...

Don't wait on me
I'll never be any good
I'm the Shallow Hal
in the world of food...

My heart is gold
but he wants platinum
plus
tanned
big boobs
blonde hair...
**** if I care
I'll wait anyways
and be happy for the day
when I've saved it all for him
but finally run into the man
worthy of my love...
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 31
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 2:22:58 PM
revoskeepnus, sweet love, thanks for being just who you are:)
mandrake, sir, your presence says a thousand words:)
Mr. iceaxe, you have inspired me the whole way, thank you once again.

Dedicated to everyone who, can:))
.........................................................................................................................................."The Toucan"'

Tell me who can
Catch a toucan?
Lou can.

Just how few can
Ride the toucan?
Two can.

What kind of goo can
Stick you to the toucan?
Glue can.

Who can write some
More about the toucan?
You can!
By: Shel Silverstein
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 8/7/2010
Msg: 32
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 2:29:54 PM
Surely you have more to whisper about than that...
 *mandrake*
Joined: 9/19/2006
Msg: 33
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/13/2010 6:20:21 PM
I am humbled Sir! Thank you...let this entry be my last...I leave you with this, written a few years ago, but one of my favorites. I dedicate this write to Sarah!

Trail of Whispers"

I felt the softest whisper,
nick the back of my neck,
playfully and yet shy,
it darted off in a sec.

I followed up the scent
your deliciousness that wows,
the second whisper giggling
somewhere among the bows.

I search the lower branches,
your scent of lingering peach
blowing kisses in the wind,
floating, just out of reach.

I hear the next whisper,
beckoning from afar,
I hear you laughing playfully
yet, know not, where you are.

The next whisper bolder ,
covering up my eyes,
I heard the water splashing,
then, to my surprise

Your voice spoke out more clearly
No longer whispering scents,
"Don't peek, I'm swimming naked!"
yet, not feeling tense.

She collected up her whispers,
the apparel that she wore,
and hand in hand, we walked along
the shores of forever more.
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 8/7/2010
Msg: 34
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/15/2010 3:25:31 PM
Words of wisdom flow through my mind
I disregard them as the passing of time
People attempt to open my eyes
I see the humor in such simple advice

But, they resonate in the back of my mind
someday soon I will have the time
to sit back, relax
and figure out the proper path...
right now
I'm having fun :)

bye manny...
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 35
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/16/2010 6:59:39 PM
....rad radical random thoughts of repressed emotions
like when the river meets the ocean, wide
and the tides take you against your will
and still, you fight with all your courage
never discouraged, strive inward, weather the whether
or whatever the storm, even if the war is inside yourself
cause you were born, with a purpose-filled purpose,
whatever the circumstance be told, stand firm, be bold,
and never let yourself get too controlled,
where you cant see the other side,
of you....
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 36
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/16/2010 8:28:44 PM
...and the wind continue to blow, calm
as clouds filled with Utopian bliss, drift,
upon a single breeze, provides perfect shelter,
hence, that's where I stand tall and dwell,
where all my hero's have now become ghost,
sold all their sorrows, to the one's who paid the most,
to be no longer chased by false reality hoax,
'it is what is is', and that's broken down clearly,
a place where happiness and pain become friendly,
and patience is the medicine that heals the heart freely,
my secret place, that I no longer pass by,
my secret pleasures, in abundance on display,
my secret palace, where there is shelter, and refugee for today....
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 37
Whisper's in the Dark.... Road being traveled...
Posted: 8/17/2010 9:31:20 AM
A Dream Within A Dream
Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow--
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand--
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep--while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream? --Edgar Allan Poe
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 38
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 8/19/2010 1:16:44 PM
"The Truth Slayer"
Truth is the truth and you just don't have it
Guess you lost it somewhere like a ill bad habit
or did you believe it freely despite its masking
truth be told just curiously asking
or was it all a lie with a truthful snare
wrapped beautifully in lavish Christmas wrap
words spoken so eloquently when told
or was it all a lie the entire episode
truth that was disguised in fashioned clothes
or was it a wolf dressed up looking fine
you now see as just cheep sheep skin
bought at your local five and dime
truth is the truth that truly
liedtruth is the Truth, that truly lied
filled with paranoid eyes
discussions she made, despite tries
countless efforts, negated cries,
now you can see the other side
no longer enslaved,
no longer let down,
no longer bogged down,
by her frown, empty smiles,
freedom to lay it down again
with the next female, surly then
you can tell, what she has for sale,
or to offer next time,
no cheep sheep skin wolf design
can't fool ya mind, twice, with the same
insane game, Russian roulette style,
single bullet, already****d and ready
but this time, there's no surprise,
when realized, the difference between,
truth less lies, hidden within,
truth's disguise....
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 39
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 8/21/2010 12:44:18 PM
"Life Of My Own"

Living risky,
never scared, wander
Closer to the edge
Nothing valued think no fear,
Always wondering why you’re here
All your purposes are gone, nothing’s
Right and nothing’s wrong
Nothing ventured, nothing gained
Feel no sorrow, feel no pain
Kiss me while I’m still alive
Kill me while I kiss the sky
Let me die on my own terms,
Let me live and let me learn
Now I’ll follow my own way, and I’ll
Live on to another damn day
Freedom carries sacrifice,
Remember when this was my life
Looking forward, not behind
Everybody’s got to cross that line
Free me now to give me a place,
Keep me caged and free the beast
Falling faster, time goes by,
Fear is not seen through these eyes
What there was will never be,
Now I’m blind and cannot see
Kiss me while I’m still alive
Kill me while I kiss the sky
Let me die on my own terms, let me
Live and let me learn
Now I’ll follow my own way, and I’ll
Live on to another damn day
Freedom carries sacrifice,
Remember when this was my life
Kiss me while I’m still alive
Kill me while I kiss the sky
Let me die on my own terms, let me
Live and let me learn
Now I’ll follow my own way,
And I’ll live on to another damn day
Freedom carries sacrifice,
Remember when this was my life."
--BY:3DD
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 40
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 8/23/2010 6:18:23 PM
Dedicated: Kelsey16th bday.......

"Daydreams"

Cherish these fleeting summer daydreams,
For they too, shall fade out in time.
Never let fear, alter your journey,.
The destination is the least traveled by.
You show me your friends, and I'll show
Your future, this had to be learned on my own.
It's the pain in struggle, it's the gain by the inch
That the souls of your feet stay worn......

Determined by God's faith, grace, and his mercy,
Beauteous his blessing,from depths up above.
Be a servant unto 'divinely inspired' talents,
If unused they will turn to dust.
Love with your mind,
Live within your heart,
Fail to succeed,
End with a start,
So embark!
If 'when' opportunity you find left without a 'KNOCK',
Smile as you build the DOOR......
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 41
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 8/24/2010 1:55:51 AM
"Mid-Summer's Dream"

"Cherish these fleeting, mid- summer dreams,
For they to shall fade in time.
Never allow fear, to alter your journey,
The destination is least traveled by...

You show me your friends, and I'll show
Your future, this had to be learned on my own.
It's the pain in struggle, it's the gain by the inch
That the souls of your feet stay strong.....

Seems like only yesterday, when life belonged to castaways,
Nothing left to see from the past, I can barely feel them anymore.
So I hid my secrets despite the lies, that road I traveled yet meaningless,
Trodden like a nomad wondered on.......

So I lie here in the dark, as I close my eyes,
So I lay here alone with, all my secrets and regrets alive..........

It's now the past that I can't kill, World Universal Enterprise,
filled within despite the lies, find a reason to hold on to, RIGHT?.......

Memories that are shelved like books, I could barely feel you anymore,
Unforeseen images of the past, now I'm left standing here all alone,
Ghost inside mind monotone, colors past monochrome
What will be, will be...

Round an plump, ripe precocious,
With no dead end road to ruin under,
No cold street lights looking back,
Prisoner no longer enslaved to her love,
Lies...
Tears....
Cries.......
Hate............

You saved me the day you come alive
Now I lie here in the light with my eyes open wide,
Daydreaming under the moon light skies,
Lucky days burning bright, like a flame but how high?
Felt like everything was all said and done.
BT


 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 42
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 8/24/2010 5:25:32 PM
Ms.Rose, thank you for your thoughtfulness of presence:))
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 8/7/2010
Msg: 43
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 8/31/2010 5:31:37 PM
Atore, where have you gone?
let me guess, you finally got a job
I've no time to write
just wanted to revive
the lovely words and gentle thoughts
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 44
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/2/2010 2:55:44 PM
Revos,
Thanks for thinking about me friend...It is truly heartfelt and inspiring equally..Just took a week to reflect and mature. How r u??
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 45
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/3/2010 8:13:10 AM
After Great Pain

After great pain, a formal feeling comes --
The Nerves sit ceremonious, like Tombs --
The stiff Heart questions was it He, that bore,
And Yesterday, or Centuries before?

The Feet, mechanical, go round --
Of Ground, or Air, or Ought --
A Wooden way
Regardless grown,
A Quartz contentment, like a stone --

This is the Hour of Lead --
Remembered, if outlived,
As Freezing persons, recollect the Snow --
First -- Chill -- then Stupor -- then the letting go --
-Emily Dic k inson
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 9/2/2010
Msg: 46
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/7/2010 5:09:27 AM
Took a week to reflect and mature
don't really know what fer
I make it to work
I try to read my books
but I'm distracted throughout the day
thinking he might look
at me
what will be
will be...

just as long as the sun peeks over me. ha ha ha
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 9/2/2010
Msg: 47
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/8/2010 8:13:28 PM
Burying the hatchet before it cuts me too deep
following my heart instead of the whims of some creep
asking forgiveness
when I've done nothing wrong
chasing the stars
singing my songs...

Wetness and frustration
good girlfriend of mine
was probably hitting on me tonight
I know she likes me
but she doesn't have a****br>and I'm really not quite sure how women
can say it's the same...

Oh well, I'll go drown my sorrows
in a pile of books
this chapter will tell me
how to analyze the politics of a global society
**** globalization
everyone stay the same
or breed like rabbits

either way you look at it
I've got this terrible habit
of writing whatever I think
and it's brought me to the brink
of insanity
come to me
and cure this warped sensation
just a moment of elation
might help
**** it
I'm driving to Versailles....
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 48
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/9/2010 8:37:12 AM
Bitter Sweet


Indistinct chaos Dis-sociable desire
Sharing laughter Sharing tears
hours of inflection infinite affection
inwardly consuming blinded stare

Indistinct chaos Dis-sociable desire
Sharing triumphs Sharing fears
minutes of reflection endless rejection
outwardly professing guilt sincere

Indistinct chaos Dis-sociable desire
Sharing smiles sharing frowns
seconds of bewilderment forever
completely opposite bitter sweet
 revoskeepnus
Joined: 9/2/2010
Msg: 49
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/9/2010 8:51:15 AM
didn't drive to Versailles
in truth the sex pales
to the passion flowing within' me
why can't it just be
whatever it wants
stupid little kvnts
always get in the way
 Erota
Joined: 12/28/2009
Msg: 50
Whisper's in the Dark.... Thoughts and Visions.............
Posted: 9/9/2010 8:57:04 AM
Ravos, your truly crazzy. and I respect that...jk..:)))
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