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 AnotherPinHead
Joined: 9/2/2010
Msg: 25
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Well if that's who you are then I guess you'll need to have a little more patience in your search then since your pool is probably going to be smaller than average. I'd leave the profile alone (except for adding more pictures showing your pearly whites!) and concentrate on reading lots of profiles and initiating all the contacts with potential matches. Good luck!

Edit - after re-reading it sounds like you actually said you don't look better with a smile. I mistook your reply to mean you weren't a very active person. Either way the reply stands. Put up a smiler and see what your target audience has to say. And if you actually are active then show it! If you're waiting for someone else to provide the actual words to insert in your profile then my original impression was spot on, and you actually are lazy. Not good my man. Not good.
 softy63
Joined: 7/13/2008
Msg: 26
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Posted: 10/8/2010 2:19:39 PM
I like watching football and TV and watching DVD's.
My favourite team is Liverpool.And some of my favourite TV shows are Only Fools and Horses,One Foot In The Grave,Family Guy, Fawlty Towers and Alan Partridge.I like all sorts of music from chart music to heavy metal.Some of my favourite bands are Bon Jovi,Nickelback,Linkin Park,Guns N Roses,Aerosmith,Eminem and Limp Bizkit.

I am also a bit shy who likes to stay in.I am a genuine, caring, loyal, kind, honest, loving and romantic and funny.Family is also very important to me especially my nephews,but I only get to see them once or twice a year as they live in Devon.I am open to having children some day and I am open to meeting someone who has children.
The lady I am hoping to meet is bubbly and funny and smart who likes cuddles on the sofa.

YOUR PFOFILE above.


Okay OP, although at your age you shouldn't need to be spoon fed but if you are as painfully shy and insecure as you say you are allow me to suggest the following wording:


START:
I am a genuine, caring, loyal, kind, honest, loving and romantic and funny.Family is also very important to me especially my nephews,

...who I see as much as I can.

I am open to having children some day and I am open to meeting someone who has children

In my spare time........

I like watching football and TV and watching DVD's.

I like all sorts of music including Eminem.......etc etc
I like to go out for a social drink and meeting new people as I get to meet all sorts of people in my work as a retail assistant.


The lady I am hoping to meet is bubbly and funny and smart who likes cuddles on the sofa

END.

As you can see, I've combined your words with a few of my own. Now its up to you to work on your pics becasue as someone said......we don't know if you look wierd smiling....and its only your opinion.
Do you smile at customers? Do you smile at your nephews?
Good luck to you.
 Lion_of_Ireland
Joined: 12/20/2010
Msg: 28
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Posted: 2/16/2011 8:43:13 AM
Pictures are 80% of a profile on a online dating site. You only have two and they blow. Until you fix that there isn't much point in putting to much effort into it. You need 10-15 good pictures,,,good ones!

Headlines only matter of they are bad.......yours is bad. Consider something else.


I am a genuine,caring,loyal,kind,honest,loving,romantic and funny person.I also can be a bit shy untill I get to know someone better.Family is also very important to me especially my nephews,who I see as much as I can.I am open to having children some day and I am open to meeting someone who has children.


Your opening few lines are the second most important part of your page, Yours is not so good. Try, not, to, lump, every, adjective, you, can, think, of, into, one, sentence. Dont say you are blah blah blah blah~~~~~~~~~~Show it!

Shy guys do not have good luck online. And I doubt you are a 'bit' shy...sort of like being a bit 'pregnant' You either are or arn't. When you are online you do not have to be a shy guy........just be yourself and let the person you want to meet decide for themselves.

Your opening few lines are important.....what makes you ----------->You? You start of with a strand of descriptions that fit 99% of the population on this planet and really do not say anything about you. Consider reworking that a bit or a lot. The first thing a person reads about you should be about you-----not a long list of words.


In my spare time I like watching football and TV, watching DVD's,different kinds of music and days out to museums and going to London and Devon but also like to cuddle up on the sofa.My favourite team is Liverpool.The lady I am hoping to meet is bubbly and funny who has similar interests as me.


Yawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwn.

Cuddle up on the couch? Good grief! Cuddling is the kind crap women put on there pages. When men put it on there page it sounds ridiculous. Stand in front of the mirror and say 'I like cuddling' 5 times for proof of how ridiculous we sound as men when we say that. Nothing wrong with liking to c_ddle , but that is something we should be keeping to ourselves. Lets get past the first date and maybe a chicken dinner before we are at home c_uddling on the couch.



First Date

[quote would take her out for a meal and get to know each other better and then do something fun and go for a walk on the beach.Buy her some flowers and chocolates.

Good grief. Please delete this,,,,quickly! A walk on the beach and flowers and chocolates. How about just a meet and greet or tea?





Mail Settings. To message kevinmaloney you MUST meet the following criteria:Female
Age between 25 and 37
Live in United Kingdom
Live within 75 miles.
You must have a picture to contact this user.
Must not do drugs
Must not be married

Ditch all of these. If you are getting slammed by 37+ year old females who are not within 75 miles, who do not have a picture are rabid drug users and are still married......just delete them.
 cmwoell
Joined: 2/25/2011
Msg: 29
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Posted: 3/3/2011 6:46:51 PM
don't take advice from these people. they are simply miserable people under the guise of someone whose intentions are helpful but in reality are just sub-conciously releasing their inner misery.
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