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 hashcannon
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in dreams
idly pressing in
faded impressions when
jerked awake alone and then
sadness

in dreams
whence we were one
the day before I said
goodbye .. you died.. and then I cried
and cried

and cried,
and cried,

of dreams
in your essence
of your precious laughter
in your desperately patterned youth
of love

in dreams
of the crazy
in these that shaped me
ragged, torn and raped of lately
hate me

in dreams
of now of you
in our fathers fathers
coming forward to welcome us
homeward

in dreams
of life, in days of ponderous strain
in time that's slipping away.. everything except the pain
go forth, my son
go forth, my love and conquer
the world is but a bauble,
and now you are stronger
all that was close you all that was dearer
your steps they fall easier, the path is much clearer
one love to conquer us all, one love does bind us
one love to carry us on till the treasured tomb it blinds us
one love left in my heart, one love so scary
all that remains of you on my shoulders carried
go forth, I say... go forth you all be merry
lo' there aside you waits me to be buried

in dreams...
(for Zachary Lee Cannon 12-5-01 / 11-05-10 )

Hash
rewrite 2013



I wrote this originally the day after my son died.. sorry hate to thread jack... but those two words still get me. so I just spent the last two hours trying and crying and somehow I rewrote this whole thing... God I miss him
Thank You Double.. Thank You
had to come back and add this
Lean, reach
Your hand out to
The other who may be
Falling into the dark place of
Madness
did you really just write this .. wtf over that's pretty crazy
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/15/2013 8:44:41 PM
awaits
in dreamed alone
stood in lofts studying
in homes of ghosts & other things
wept cared

wept cared
as the sleepless
cannot portray betrayed
in quests for life finds hard accept
each ways/days

each day/way
adrift aloof
set aloft, pardon young
squires of age apprenticeships
friends kin

&Etcs ToBeCont
 lookingforsophia
Joined: 3/3/2009
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Posted: 4/15/2013 9:02:18 PM
friends kin
came by to say
even dragons prayed
stood together against harm's way
that day
 m8t
Joined: 3/14/2013
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Posted: 4/16/2013 6:23:15 AM
ox my tex~

that day
one good slayer
drew courage from a well
wishing for the greatest defeat
Victory!
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/16/2013 7:03:56 AM
Victory!
an eagle shreeks
circling the skies above
Olive branch in lightning talons
Offers

Peace w/x&o's
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/16/2013 7:58:47 PM
Offers
With each day passed
Don't go away burdened
Take your resolve, limber & new
True Breaths

True Breaths
Yoga Qi Gong
TaiChi's rest, canopy
Brought Ganesha & Whale to refresh
Calm Peace

Calm, Peace
One room in rooms
taught by, to hold, release
adventuring pasts, a hold on beads
hugs kiss

hugs, kiss
with signs donate
fresh markets, antiques browse
quaint & yet abit unsure, hear
boutiqes

Boutiques
minds aromas
books & tests, sell & buy
making yourself after do well
better

&Etcs ToBeCont
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/16/2013 8:28:13 PM
& ever wonder what The Thinking Man was thinkin about?

better?
pecan waffles
blueberry pancakes hot
off the griddle with buttery
syrup
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/17/2013 6:39:52 PM
Just interesting. Thinking Man..? Wonders wondering,Maybe who ever knows about..
But Flapperjacks/Crepes only ought to be plain &well abit butter maybe too..&waffles hmm real whippedcream,fruits with chocolat,..thinks & all

syrup
medicine's twin
too thin too much, clings shut
wads of holistics, tough to do
pine/tree/wood/bark sap

tree/pine ... sap
crying let down
dying, hacks to splinters
chips like dynamite, becomes quiet
spring leaf(s)/leaves

&Etcs ToBeCont
 cesska
Joined: 11/7/2011
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Posted: 4/17/2013 10:18:54 PM
for you
i waited for
you, always you, i wait
i am tired of waiting for
for you
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/18/2013 1:47:50 PM
Spring Leaf(s)/Leave(s)
in the middle
of a story where anyone
is picture perfect melody
Reason(s/ed)

&Etcs ToBeCont
April Showers..Brings May Flowers
But still cold cold go away come again another day..
sighing thinking
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/19/2013 11:03:27 AM
thinking
wind chimes sounding
cottonwood leaves rustling
symphonic nymph muses' dancing
tinkers
 m8t
Joined: 3/14/2013
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Posted: 4/19/2013 5:28:06 PM
tinkers
a little bell
sparkling in the light
hiding away from human life
playing
 cesska
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Posted: 4/19/2013 7:11:12 PM
for you
i write for you
am i doing it correct
cinquain stain on membrane
to you
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/20/2013 7:29:43 PM
<3's

playing
no reason(s/ed), laws,
just a gaze & wish well
time & distance, farewell love sheets
turtle(s)

turtle(s)
inside/in a turtle
longetivity, wealth
head of us, wise, health, comes & soars
red card

red cards
gold envelopes
jade nuggets captures hearts
Luck(s) good fortunes lasts like soapstone
favourite(d/s)

favours
all meaningful
money & fame frees lone
for the best though not, simple fine
candle(d/s)

candle
counts the tales shared
faring by storm wall, few care/try fear
injure hear tears, buries here mate(s)
cremate

&Etcs ToBeCont
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/21/2013 10:06:46 AM
cremate
Earth's molten core
with Theia's virgin grace
made heavenly moon pies and gave
seasons
 cesska
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Posted: 4/21/2013 9:29:29 PM
seasons
change like people
sometimes sunny or cool
or raining or snowing or nice
people
 DoubleParked
Joined: 10/22/2008
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Posted: 4/22/2013 2:14:49 PM
People
Like you and me
Who never see the light
Of a day we did not like, Smile
Again
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/22/2013 5:03:14 PM
Again
Piano Man
B5 on the Juke box
Play it again, three times for a
Quarter
 m8t
Joined: 3/14/2013
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Posted: 4/22/2013 5:24:33 PM
Quarter...
those jazzy blues
down south French New Orleans
with Pat O'Briens Hurricanes
swingin'
 DoubleParked
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Posted: 4/22/2013 7:13:41 PM
Swingin'---
Got a good hold
Of old gnarled vine trunks
Give step to higher younger sweet
Berries
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/22/2013 8:13:26 PM
Lol Nice, Hmm..
...
Berries
Twitters the branch
stems of lush plump gems, wink
colours patterns, plucks Queens sweet tarts
crepes grapes

grapes crepes
jellies, honey
jam, preserved..suckled desserts
handful dinner, sauce or duck wine
the fish

the fish
swam well with pork
crisp, smoothe, a center piece
amongst the left, takes..cold cuts bliss
noodle(s)

noodle(s)
partners cold bread
burnt to tingle just right
heated hearths, food & place paints art
hot cheese

hot cheese
sizzles cocoa/flames dance cry tears/show
Greek/Greece goats jump round horses/ox yolks/heads
flambe quiche, souffle on hair, pouf
such coals

such coals
lits, glows, hands walk
rakes like diamonds from stars
swallows fire roars, freezes free, none
train bridge/one rail

&Etcs ToBeCont
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/22/2013 8:29:55 PM
Berries
Oatmeal cereal
Yogart clad sugar coat
Honey soaked corn syrup and
Coffee
 asianpeachqTea
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Posted: 4/22/2013 8:33:23 PM
train bridge/one rail
divides, subtracts
attempt man hunt, slaughter
caught the bugs who were known, can they
become
...
Good one, now would love berries & coffee &..

Coffee
bitter alarms
betters brew, strong but fair
cleans gullet, bullets chasers work
coke fizz/soda(s)/cola(s)/mom's/ dad's pop/ice/cream float(s)

&Etcs ToBeCont
 lookingforsophia
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Posted: 4/23/2013 6:28:16 AM
cream floats
swirling whirlpool
circles round coffee mug
like long lines in the palm of hand
foretell
 DoubleParked
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Posted: 4/23/2013 3:53:14 PM
Foretell
Future futures
Of those with visionings
Dreaming of what could be when thoughts
Are clear
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