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 RANZ1989
Joined: 7/30/2013
Msg: 26
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Keep any feedback coming.

I have made some changes and sent out PMs but have still gotten no results.
 Mark_It_Up
Joined: 3/15/2011
Msg: 27
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Posted: 1/16/2014 3:46:54 PM

Why does something as miniscule as teeth make or break a relationship?

Well, obviously because the other party does not consider it miniscule.

But trying to hide it, everyone will assume the worst. Just a bit discoloured is far from the worst it could be. So by hiding it, you're making it seem worse than it is.
 RANZ1989
Joined: 7/30/2013
Msg: 28
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Posted: 1/20/2014 11:18:43 AM
Added one other pic.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 29
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Posted: 1/21/2014 6:31:14 AM
Been messaging women that match what I look for but none of them reply back. I feel as though I've have tried everything (even posted a picture with me exposing my teeth) but my efforts are in vain.
 Mark_It_Up
Joined: 3/15/2011
Msg: 30
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Posted: 1/21/2014 6:38:39 AM
Re-read replies #17 and #22. They are still applicable.
What do your messages look like? Can you give me an example? What did the last message you sent say?
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 31
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Posted: 1/21/2014 7:09:22 AM
Basically I mentioned something in THEIR profile, introduced myself and then stated that I wished to get to know them better if they wanted.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 32
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Posted: 1/21/2014 7:09:55 AM
I had noticed that people don't seem to reply to long or short messages here.
 Mark_It_Up
Joined: 3/15/2011
Msg: 33
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Posted: 1/21/2014 7:11:05 AM
Copy and paste the last message that you sent to someone, so we can see it. Change any names or other personally identifying information of course.

But message is nowhere near as important as profile. You really need to spice it up a whole lot.
 RANZ1989
Joined: 7/30/2013
Msg: 34
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Posted: 1/21/2014 7:26:24 AM
I had noticed the woman was from VA as well.



I am from Virginia as well!

I was born in Richmond but have lived in Florida since 1992.

How do you like Florida so far?

My name is Randy. I would love to get to know you better.
 RANZ1989
Joined: 7/30/2013
Msg: 35
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Posted: 1/22/2014 11:07:02 AM
OK.

Will change the messsging.

I hope I find someone compatible soon. It's starting to become a bit hopeless.
 GreenThumbz18
Joined: 4/25/2012
Msg: 36
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Posted: 1/22/2014 12:32:22 PM
RANZ - It might not give you much comfort, but you have to play this in a cool manner, if you try to speed up the process you will fail repeatedly and add frustration. This is important stuff, so be yourself, and don't be looking for instant success.
We want you to hit a home run, but we all know if doesn't happen every time you step up to the plate.
 Mark_It_Up
Joined: 3/15/2011
Msg: 37
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Posted: 1/22/2014 3:25:38 PM
You seem rather obsessed that your message is the problem.
It isn't. Your profile needs fixing.
Fixing your message format without changing your profile won't help you in the slightest.
There's already been lots of good advice in this thread about how to improve your profile... time to follow it.
 RANZ1989
Joined: 7/30/2013
Msg: 38
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Posted: 1/23/2014 5:21:05 AM
OK, will take it into consideration.

My goal is to hopefully find someone older than me with similar interests.

I chose Geek as my personality because it best relates what my interests are.

I don't have any other interests other than what is on my profile. I really don't know what else I could put on there.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 39
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Posted: 1/27/2014 6:14:50 PM
Added some things to it.

Haven't gotten around to taking new pics yet but I will soon.

I am hoping someone that has similar interests responds or messages me.

Keep any pointers coming.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 40
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Posted: 1/28/2014 6:15:43 AM
Added another pic!
 Smthn_Like_Olivia
Joined: 12/28/2013
Msg: 41
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Posted: 1/28/2014 9:37:26 AM
The pics are great. I really like the main. But the write up? Zzzzzzz....

You have some great interests and activities but it reads like a book report or resume. BORING!! You need to spice it up and make it interesting!!!

Delete this:

I was born in Richmond, VA but live outside of Boca Raton, Florida.

It's just unnecessary, uninteresting filler. If you were born in South Africa or grew up in France, then that would be an interesting tidbit. Richmond? Eh.

The whole school and occupation thing? Make it more interesting, i.e. "By day I'm hitting the books at FAU and working in sales. By night you can catch me spinning tracks and dropping beats at a local (insert) as a DJ extraordinaire. I'm hoping my life cards will deal me an opportunity to build my own record label or business someday."

Don't SAY you like to seek new adventures whenever possible. Give an example!
i.e.,
"I once spent 2 days hiking in the mountains of Colorado with only a backpack and a walking stick. I'm pretty sure I found bigfoot!"

Take all this great information you have about yourself and spin it so that it keeps the reader interested or intrigued.
 respect_your_carnal_needs
Joined: 3/25/2011
Msg: 42
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Posted: 1/28/2014 10:29:10 AM
http://www.pof.com/viewprofile.aspx?profile_id=26729645 please review my profile and tell me where im going wrong?
 Lankyyankee
Joined: 6/25/2013
Msg: 43
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Posted: 1/28/2014 11:03:06 AM
Exactly what Olivia said. The write-up is boring. What she wrote is closer to what you're looking for, but you have to explore why you do what you do. That will bring out the passion within you and make your profile stand out a lot more.

You're a DJ. Why do you DJ? What specifically about DJing do you like? Those are the things to talk about in your profile to make it better. Women don't care WHAT you're passion is. You express your passion by showing it, not telling it.
 Smthn_Like_Olivia
Joined: 12/28/2013
Msg: 44
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Posted: 1/28/2014 12:41:51 PM
@ Carnal - you can't hijack someone else's review thread. Start your own and you'll get some feedback.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 45
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Posted: 2/5/2014 12:20:09 PM
Used the last few posts to rewrite my profile. Hopefully, I should get some responses.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 46
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Posted: 2/12/2014 10:53:55 AM
Rewrote the profile, elaborated on some bits, added new photos and sent some lighter messages but nothing.

This is looking hopeless.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 47
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Posted: 2/12/2014 11:16:10 AM
I should mention that I have Asperger's Syndrome which often inhibits my ability to find loyal friends or a relationship.
 RANZ1989
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Msg: 48
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Posted: 7/3/2014 11:38:41 AM
Quite a number of changes made.
 RANZ1989
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Posted: 7/8/2014 12:48:09 PM
Posted new pics.

Thoughts?
 Indira46
Joined: 8/19/2012
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Posted: 7/8/2014 2:17:53 PM
Photo 6 should be your main.
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