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|On Hallowed Ground|
I walked so silently, knowing that this is where I did not belong. This was Longte's realm... a poet known far and wide. So many names I have gone by, yet a friend he became unto me. So many emotions were spilled out in electronic ink. So much passion. So many silent voices.
The bounce around in the poems we toss about. The pains, the losses, the questions that burn inside our soul. Whiskey cant burn them, sleep wont banish them... yet they dance.
My friend. Thank you for your lament. You cared when your own soul toiled over far greater walls.
As always... I call you friend.
Posted: 5/15/2005 8:31:25 AM
Just wrote this , thought I would post it here for you, since the dragon inspired it, I am by far not the best writer but they are my words so enjoy...
The Dragon's Land
I walked along the old brick path
The darkness surrounding me
Blocking out the daylight
Forbidding me to see
Off in the distant I hear a sound
Like something in tremendous pain
The dark thunder clouds are rolling in
I am hoping it shall rain
The rain is my haven
Keeper from evil of the dark
Saving me from the eyes
So vibrant yet so dead and stark
The sound becomes closer
A song of a dragons need
The need to have a young soul
On this night of nights to feed
Hunger brings the dragon
Rambling from his cave this night
If you’re all alone in the darkness
Prepare yourself to fight
The dragon will tear you apart
With a slice of his hand
Whether you’re a gentle female
Or the strongest man
His need and hunger draw him
Making him sing his feeding song
Letting the people of the town know
That tonight he will do some wrong
Tomorrow shall bring daylight
Rest from the dragon’s greed
But for tonight someone must pay
With their life because of the dragons need
So if you see a small town sign
Saying welcome to dragons land
Just pass on by and don’t look back
Or you’re life will fall into the dragons hand…..
Posted: 5/16/2005 12:37:51 AM
|Amazing... seriously.. amazing... as always!!|
Thank you sir!
Posted: 5/16/2005 1:06:43 AM
That is great! Keep going!!!!!!!
Posted: 5/16/2005 4:42:52 AM
|very well done, you made my poem look weak..lol...but your words were great...|
|Suggest a title please ?|
Posted: 5/16/2005 7:21:36 AM
|Dust, Dust tornado of Peace…|
Set the song of blaze, Hymn of the waterless.
Castles of Dark in Vibes bring the color,
As the Death sets in, unsettled heart is born.
Wish of the Land, of driest waves…
Turns stronger than the blood rose together.
Tribes thump the beat, Swords ready, Reigns pulled tight,
Feared Men turn into Soldiers
to cheat the Grave
Would this silence be fatal? Eternal?
The noise makes a lead…
Gallops of the finest stallion hide the nearest star.
Primitive returns…to make fire out of clashes
Cutting the edge of blades.
I see your eyes.
Heart submits defeat, in love.
Sounds not stronger than your whispers,
sands, not warmer than your arms.
Light not vibrant than your skin.
Heaven not bliss than your touch.
I would offend you still.
Promise of the Man is about to turn false,
I would not Return.
Posted: 5/19/2005 4:51:31 AM
|I am hoping that you are getting these wonderful words you spin published so that others may experience the pure joy and thrill we get here when we read them...|
Your such a talented dragon, your words should live on for along time....
I know you have touched my heart and mind with words that you write each day, thank you....
Oh yeah made butter tarts yesterday, was kinda expecting to hear some loud rumbles or feel my floor shake...but nope, was all clear...lol
Posted: 5/19/2005 2:51:09 PM
|it is funny how you think you know someone until its over, then you really find things out, I think that is a lame thing to say though....but hey your better off , you will find someone to hold your hand when your in your eighties and walking down the street...|
Longte, good for you, I wish you the best of luck, but your talent doesn't need luck, your words are empowering and should be told and read....
Well...just saying hi, off to play some cards, the sucker I am , I am good at losing and that is good because it seems all I am doing is losing..lol
Nighters all...take care
Posted: 5/20/2005 4:43:02 AM
|Your very welcome my friend...|
Posted: 5/30/2005 9:42:51 AM
|Longte, DragonN, |
Powerful words! Lets hope things change soon, the Earth is the resource that keeps us alive!
Posted: 6/3/2005 8:16:37 AM
And now she breathes life!
Posted: 6/3/2005 9:56:59 AM
|AND NOW SHE BREATHES|
At first she was just a thought
Then a contour image, began
Her form was taking shape
Her life was in the plan
Was then, when I handed her over
To the one that we know, sees
To create her beauty and essence
And so now, Melenite breathes
Created from an idea to words
Given the ability to be visualized
Is an art form, all in its own
It is a gift to be recognized
Posted: 6/4/2005 1:59:32 AM
Still brings tears as I read it again.
Posted: 6/4/2005 11:05:44 AM
|man you have such talent, I bow to you and am honoured you read my stuff....|
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with the rest of us, and please don't ever stop writing, you are a treasure...
Posted: 6/10/2005 10:42:32 AM
|Longte, I hope your voyage is great!|
Sailing on the salted blues
Voyage winds on glowing hues
Swelling waves rocking sound
New horizons to be found
Harmonistic natural swishing
Of waters and it’s mystical wishing
Carries you to far away distant lands
Of simplicity and pure white sands
A peaceful and personal retreat
To relieve one of the prevailing heat
Sunsets dropping into the depths of night
Inspiring the aura of the melting amber light
Posted: 6/10/2005 1:23:37 PM
|Hey pickles, |
It's getting better each day. 6 weeks to go, before I can really do to much. But look out world, after that!
Posted: 6/11/2005 6:42:06 PM
|Have fun Pickles!!!|
Posted: 6/15/2005 4:34:57 AM
|We miss longte, but I know he will have some wonderful writes to share when he gets back, that mans pen is mighty and I never have fear of it stopping...|
Hey pickles how was ottawa?...hot wasn't it?....lol darn heat almost killed me, sigh if this is any indication as to what the summer is going to be like, I might just hibernate...lol
Posted: 6/16/2005 3:58:25 AM
|nope cause I was going through it to...lol I live an hour and a half north east of ottawa....so I felt it to..|
Posted: 6/16/2005 8:25:44 PM
|COMFORTS OF HOME|
What I remember, from years gone by
Is the evil witch that flew in the sky
Always burning two ends of the fuse
Until she got the fairytale shoes
Same thing we see now
The same hate really shows
Each day in the world
As the crime rate grows
We forget about the simple
And good things see
Like the comforts of home
As in the words of Dorothy
Posted: 6/16/2005 8:58:06 PM
|YET IN THE END|
The Wizards lies
Caused a lot of grief
Yet in the end
He eased relief
He may of left
Without the two
Yet in the end
New hearts grew
Away he went
Yet in the end
They all had made
Posted: 6/16/2005 9:07:02 PM
|Good to see ya Longte! Hope your having fun!!!|
|Honor Karma |
Posted: 6/20/2005 10:30:01 PM
|JUST A BUMP|
While he’s out sailing
We will still play
Until he docks
Back in the bay
Then his words
Will entrance us all
So until then
It’s just our squall
Be it rhythmic
Or be it flop
It keeps his thread
Up by the top
Just another way
To make it jump
Or as Pickels said
It’s just a bump
|Honor Karma |
Posted: 6/22/2005 3:45:57 AM
|I am sure our longte will have many wonderful writes for us when he gets back, he is a master of tales, and now that he has been on an adventure, we will surely have some interesting reads....|
let's keep him bumped up so that he won't lose this thread, that would be a shame...
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