|Keep em coming kids:)wowza :DPage 11 of 42 (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42)|
|Beautiful dreamer...Your above write was mesmerizingly written.I was so drawn into your write. (almost like an entire novel in poetry form) Excellent Deshance..Im glad to see you coming back.You are very diversified in your writing style..Impressive Stairwaytoheaven.. Welcome to my lil corner O the forums.I enjoyed your heartfelt post.The last two lines did an excellent job of conveying the entire premise of the poem..Good job!Poet...thanks for dropping by I can feel the hope and longing in your poem..unique and well executed:)SoosyQT..Good to see ya girlfriend..Hug your sis for me ok?Thanks for droppin in Chriscusack..I love your writes.. You remind me of sopmeopne else who drops in from time to time, whose interesting and at times off the hook hilarious writes I just adore:) Nice job...Thanks for stoppin by today kids,and keep the most excellent writes coming...sleep tight,Kat |
|Ninja of Suburbia|
Posted: 11/27/2005 8:41:46 AM
| Great stuff, chriscusak!|
And thanks for the compliments, folks. Here's a link to those kits: http://www.magneticpoetry.com/
golden urn soiled
by a confused cat
|Ninja of Suburbia...peeing my pants laughing :D|
Posted: 11/27/2005 11:28:26 AM
|Great stuff both of you!Speaking of "stuff hehe ..loved your little write I misread it and thought it said "decorated" instead of "desecrated" hahaha..Youre a trip,and your write rocks! Chriscusack...Glad to see you again too.Could your poem be any more original and funny?You are absolutey hilarious and creative..id love to see you both here again.Awesome job and hugs all around,kat PS..I have two magnetic poetry kits :)|
|Saying good bye|
Posted: 11/27/2005 12:05:30 PM
|Always and forever will I hate|
You left me and that was my fate
To never see you again
That bullet was your end
Your selfish ways have made us morn
The lives that your have torn.
You left us my love we are forever in the dark
You life has left its mark
You will never know the hate I feel
You have made the final seal
Never again to see you face.
Never again to grace our place
Good bye my love you will be missed
Never again to be kissed.
I hope one day I'll see you soon.
Till then all is in the gloom.
This is for my husband By K.W.
|The Tell Off!|
Posted: 11/27/2005 2:58:16 PM
|Nice write Dewkiss! And here's one in that vein too!|
How can you go on living?
Living with yourself,
treating people like you know what they're all about.
When you don't!
You don't know what passions they have
or what they see in a person.
Where do you get off?
Saying what you say?
Can you even imagine
how one could take what you just said?
What actions you've just precipitated?
Do you feel any guilt?
Oh, you are so righteous,
in your search for Mr. Perfect.
Although you shall never find him,
you won't pause in your
relentless flailing to drag under those who reach out to you.
You see, you just wouldn't be satified.
What ever you acheiveit won't be enough.
You seek your own self-image,
but no matter how hard you look,
every mirror has its' flaw.
Medusa did not die at the sight of herself,
but at the reflection of her perception.
She just could not accept fate
and take fortune as providence befitted.
|The Tell Off!|
Posted: 11/27/2005 11:39:29 PM
|Hiya everyone..Thanks so much for adding more of your amazing writes to this thread:)Dashance..I love the flow and originality of your write...The last four lines were absolutely standouts and amazing Youre incredibly talented:)Dewkiss...I could feel the pain and longing for a lost love your poem exudes and in contrast the dark shadow it casted on your poem.Beautiful and sorrowful in tandem...excellent.Sometimes I feel so odd coming in here and telling you guys what I think of your poems and thoughts.All of your workd are awesome simply because they are yours Have a super spiffy day,Kat |
|The Tell Off!|
Posted: 11/27/2005 11:39:57 PM
|Hello all! Thank you very kindly for the comments!! I hope you didn't think I was ignoring, just gone for the holiday. I loved all the writes I missed in that time. Vegan: I've always wanted one of those magnetic poetry things. Thanks for the site name. Dash: I, too, tend to write only when the feelings are already gushing about something. I suppose I should try to nourish it more often, but c'est la vie. Dew: I liked your post in 349 the best. It just spoke to me. Reminds me a lot of some of my earliest writing. Will post an example. Thanks again to all for the kind comments!|
"In this circle, I have no name
Merely a shadow in this game
Against my fate, I try to fight
So I can do just one thing right
Still, I find nothing I can do
Fate's dagger has run me through
My heart gushes, bleeding dreams,
Coming apart at its seams
All night I lie in bed and weep
It is the only thing that helps me sleep
And the memories of days before
Come back to haunt me ever more
In this circle, shrouded by night
Protected from the fiendish light
Rain pouring down the essence of my soul
Lightning's beauty helps to mend the hole
Immersed within the falling dew
Its warmth and solace get me through
Everything I love has been lost
And I am still bearing the cost
My soul floats through the sable void
Having been completely destroyed
Looking back, filled with disdain
All I sacrificed was in vain
In this circle... almost dead
Only one thing left to be said
I loved you always, I thought you knew
So, what have I ever done to you?"
Posted: 11/28/2005 8:23:00 AM
|Good Vs. Evil|
Good and bad, light and dark
Each of these hit their mark
Love and hate, pleasure, pain
Pooling out into a stain
Ecstasy etched upon my face
Strong as leather, soft as lace
Betrayal floods my soul with pain
Falling down like drops of rain
Revenge is such a strong emotion
Inspiring only true devotion
Lust and greed now fill my heart
Both of these will play their part
Pleasure, pain, love and hate
Bring me close to heavens gate
Light and dark, good and bad
Tell me, am I going mad
|All styles of poems are awesome to read:)|
Posted: 11/28/2005 9:15:24 PM
|Chris...I absolutely love and enjoy your writes You totally rock!Hope to see more from you again soon Mean Jeanne..Welcome to one of my lil spots in the forums...I loved the imagery and contrast you created within your write.Awesome awesome job!Hope youll visit again soon. Bernard...for a second you scared me..lol...I thought you were having a serious moment.You know I love all of your edgy writes..Youre a trip...I think you and Chris here would make great friends I enjoy you both so much! I mean your writes...hehe Vocaleze...so happy to see you posting again.Amazing job Thanks so much for visiting everyone:)Cant wait to see more from all of you kids:)...Have an excellent night,Kat|
|celebrating the 400th post|
Posted: 11/28/2005 9:17:42 PM
|Ok...401st...so Im slow Thanks everyone for making this thread such a success.Ive really enjoyed reading all your work Time to party lol...lets celebrate |
Posted: 11/29/2005 12:47:33 AM
|supadiva..I loved your lil write:)Its great to see you here again.I hope you and your grandaughter are having a blast ,Kat|
Posted: 11/29/2005 10:46:35 AM
|In Memory of Darla, Dusty and John Taken to Their Lord April 1,1999|
April fools day arrives each year
The calendar turns and brings it here
As the years tick by we miss you more
But talk about you less than we did before
Dusty you would be twenty-one
Your life would be busy and full of fun
Darla you would be twenty-three
I try to imagine - too hard for me
John as the oldest you'd be twenty-four
You had one child and would have had more
Jamassa Derring put a gun to your head
He pulled the trigger and now you are dead
Three life sentences is what he will do
For taking three lives, for killing you
I hope his time will be bitter and hard
Maybe someone will jump him at yard
But we have to put all that anger aside
We're still alive - along for the ride
I keep all three of you close to my heart
Taken too soon, lives ripped apart
One yellow, one blue rose and one pink
When I see them, of you all I think
Posted: 11/29/2005 11:08:37 AM
|I am what I am,|
and I am what I be.
I am what I am,
and I am what i see.
I am what i am,
and I am what I do.
I am what I am,
and I am you.
Posted: 11/29/2005 11:11:54 AM
round and round.
Cant get my feet to touch the ground.
Trying to find my place,
in this life of maze.
Can you be my path of light?
Help me find a way through the darkest night?
Through this dark and misty haze,
round and round.
Help my feet to find the ground.
|All styles are awesome :D|
Posted: 11/29/2005 12:45:40 PM
|Hi everyone..Chris I enjoy your comedic writes,but I have to say,this one is so beautiful it makes my heart blush.You have such a diverse writing talent. I hope youll come back and share whatever you like with us....funny,happy,..love em all... Red welcome to this lil corner o the forums.Youy have a very unique writing style.I enjoyed both of your poems very much.Hope to see you again soon mean jeanne..Thank you for sharing that heartbreakingly sad and touching write with all of us.Im so sorry for your loss and for the loss of your loved ones taken in the springtime of their lives.I can relate to your write and my heart goes out to you.I hope yall have a good day,and Ill stop by again soon.Thanks for droppin in, kat|
|All styles are awesome :D|
Posted: 11/29/2005 12:46:26 PM
|Hi everyone..Chris I enjoy your comedic writes,but I have to say,this one is so beautiful it makes my heart blush.You have such a diverse writing talent. I hope youll come back and share whatever you like with us....funny,happy,..love em all... Red welcome to this lil corner o the forums.Youy have a very unique writing style.I enjoyed both of your poems very much.Hope to see you again soon mean jeanne..Thank you for sharing that heartbreakingly sad and touching write with all of us.Im so sorry for your loss and for the loss of your loved ones taken in the springtime of their lives.I can relate to your write and my heart goes out to you. Supadiva,Im glad you guys had fun:)Hugs!I hope yall have a good day,and Ill stop by again soon.Thanks for droppin in, kat|
Posted: 11/29/2005 5:16:37 PM
|I get my love |
from my music
This is the only way
I've ever received the
love that I need.
Forget the passions of the flesh,
that for which I still much yurn.
It is the essence of
emotion that I truly seek.
How many times
have I been attracted?
And how long does each last?
Music is my one true love;
that for which, I will not part with.
It demands no changes of me,
as willing as I might be.
I get my love
from my music.
As noble that I may strive to be,
and as fate would have it,
music shall be all I need.
Posted: 11/29/2005 6:43:42 PM
|Dashance:)I loved your above write.It seems we share the same passion for music.I love it all from classical to alternative Thanks for stopping by..I hope yall have an awesome night and Ill see everyone soon...hugs all around,Kat |
|So ya wanna be a poet?|
Posted: 11/29/2005 7:19:19 PM
I'm not asking
That's nice but it's
not enough for me
I need you to do
what you need to do
I want you to be
who you want to be
Then if everything's
right between us
You may choose
to do it all with me.
(c) Mike Benstead
Posted: 11/29/2005 7:27:00 PM
|"My Cookie Philosophy"|
Surround yourself with cookies;
but not the broken kind.
Surround yourself with whole ones
with a heart, a soul, a mind.
Whenever you meet a cookie
with bits all chipped away
be warm and kind and smiling
as you bid him a firm "Good day".
If your friends are broken cookies
crumbs are all you'll find
They're sure to insult your intelligence
and crumble up your mind
They say "Two halves can make a whole"
but with cookies you can't be sure
for the half he lacks may be the half
that you've been looking for.
So, surround yourself with cookies,
the company's always good;
and one is sure to notice you.
This must be understood.
Be a good little cookie.
Be as whole as you can be,
for somewhere there's a wholesome cookie
to make "you" and "him" a "we".
(c) Mike Benstead, 1994
|So ya wanna be a poet?|
Posted: 11/29/2005 7:30:35 PM
|although i wouldn't go so far as to call this a poem, i have a liking for stupid jokes, etc. and i guess i've reached a new low by making others suffer like this but i can't resist. it's intended for a prospective mate and i call it "domestic bliss"|
do you know how to make a bed?
do you own a needle and thread?
do you have some pots and pans?
what's that, a rolling pin in your hand?
wait, i was only teasing you!
now my black-eye's turning blue
that's ok, my mistake.
but can i have some chocolate cake?
|celebrating the 400th post|
Posted: 11/29/2005 7:50:15 PM
|in the clouds|
a circling white, of ancient light
who, with lucid rays of perfect blue
unrolled across a canvas sky
to lay His softest shade on you
while headwinds of a holy kind
blew sweet dreams behind your earthly eyes
love's colors filled your sailing mind
and pushed you through to paradise
beyond the ecstasy of white
above cloud-cover, pristine blue
your gossamer wings unfurled bright
and wet with newborn love you flew
past earth-limits of waking scenes
to play in worlds of dreams come true
you spread His light through prism wings
in rainbow tones of heaven-hue
you were soaring, soaring, soaring high
your head was in the clouds
as love was circling by
|celebrating the new emoticons|
Posted: 11/30/2005 3:51:26 AM
|Youre welcome Chris...I really enjoy all your writes.Believe me everyone in the forums knows what its like to have writers block at one time or another.Ive gone for an entire week without posting anything in my other thread.I love everything youve shared so far I also love this emoticon and this one Ok Im a bit silly ..havent had my coffee yet..Too beautiful..welcome to this forum..I was about to say your words are too beautiful...the imagery youve created and your expressiveness is amazing...anything else you would care to share Id looove to see chemistry and magic...your cookie poem was good enough to eat ok ok...enough with the slap happy from me...In all seriousness I love your unique writing style.I also enjoyed your take on relationships and what key things make them blossom and work...couldnt agree more...have an awesome day kids! Kat|
|Loved em both :)|
Posted: 11/30/2005 1:07:57 PM
|Heya Chris..(awwwwww what a cute baby in your new pic:)Im so glad you and others are making this thread home to some awesome writes..Your above poem made me chuckle..very well written,clever and cute....I also thought your other poem was very emotionally expressive .Great writes on both counts in very dfferent ways Hope ya;; have a great evening...see ya soon,Kat|
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