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 cameo80
Joined: 10/18/2005
Msg: 276
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I want to travel,
And see the world unravel.
My plans to head for the heat, and dodge the winter sleet.
I want to travel, in what I’ve only known, and heard in books,
And have a look for myself.
Possibly with no one else.
I don’t want to put my dream back on the shelf.
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 277
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/19/2005 10:10:59 PM
There is so much wisdom and insightfullness in your writes...espescially for someone so young.Im very impressed and enjoyed reading your poems very much.I hope youll post again soon...Thanks for sharing and have a good night yall,Kat
 The-Callebrese-Kid
Joined: 7/10/2005
Msg: 278
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/19/2005 11:49:34 PM
in my dreams i stop and stare
your beautiful face is everywhere
i reach out my arms to feel
your face ,your soul to see if youre real

but my hands go through some sort of mist
causing my mind and soul to twist
seiing that you are so near
calling you but you cannot hear

i wake up and youre not there
without your touch i cannot bare
for you fill my heart with so much love
when youre the one im thinking of
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 279
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/20/2005 8:00:48 AM
heres a nice message for you
I hope youll drop by sometime
And add another poem or two


Welcome to my lil corner O the forums supadiva:)I love the SN...Thats great I agree with you that there are sooooooooooooo many talented writers in the poetry forums When I first started my other poetry thread,I was blown away by the talent here...........ma-che-fai-tu Hi:)Yay!Im so glad to see you found your way to one of my poetry threads "But my hands go through some sort of mist/causing my mind and soul to twist"..I was blown away by that line..You rock!I would love it if you would pop into my "everyone else is doin it..."fellfromheaven thread one day and maybe post one or two of your writes there:)......Keep up the awesome writes...Apparantly supadiva was referring to people like you:)when she mentioned all the talented people here. Have a great day yall and hugs all around,Kat
 Ty1973
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 280
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Posted: 11/20/2005 12:04:59 PM
She smiled at me, and I thought to say
Hi there darling, are you going my way?
Instead I just smiled, and sat next to her
Trying to speak, but my mind was a blur
I wanted to see, to look in her eyes
I paused and delayed, and to my surprise
She turned to me, she offered her hand
We made aquaintance, and my eyes she scanned
So gentle and kind, incredibly blue
Brilliant her shine, Aurorally too
We gazed for a moment, eternal it seemed
Alluring each other, together we teamed
It all came at once, I knew what to say
We sat there for hours, what a wonderful day!
We did meet again, same time, same place
The sound of her voice, she spoke with such grace
Amorously speaking, we've fallen quite fast
For love at first sight, Is a love unsurpassed.
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 281
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Posted: 11/20/2005 5:27:45 PM
Yet another new talented writer in the forums...I really really like your writing style alot..Great write!Feel free to post in either of my threads anytime:)have an awesome night everyone,Kat
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 282
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 1:22:19 AM
4557
I Want to Love

21 November 2005


I want to love you
I want to love you so much
I want to hold you
and next to me clutch

Your beauty
your child inside
This mother of caring
the Lioness of your pride

I want to love you
and the truth is I do
I love you in my heart
because my love for you is true

You are heaven
you are earth
Because to love you
comes in every thing
to treasure in value and worth


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 283
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 2:19:38 PM
^^^Poet you are a true wordsmith..Your poetry rocks:)love ya,Kat
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 284
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Posted: 11/21/2005 4:32:26 PM
Aww :)Youre welcome Jean Hope to see more of your work here in the forums..Have an awesome night,Kat
 LeoWiebe
Joined: 12/27/2004
Msg: 285
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So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 4:47:02 PM
I've never tryed poetry publicly, but i was told i write like one :/

When I look into your eyes
I fall into your darkness,
With the pain of many
and the skys of anguish
I begin my assent
to the depths of your soul

I see the true you
your lies and your deception
To think that im falling
over your misconception
I am not of average
or original by far,
But seeing inside you
is a revalation untold

My love for you grows
with each passing momment,
a momment so rare,
that i wish i could hold it

When i look in your eyes
I see kindness and caring
I'm lifted from sorrow,
and unveiled true love
there is someone there
who i admire and cherish

Your my only true love
and for that, I am yours
I'll Hold you in my darkness,
Till the early morning hours.

haha omg corny anyways was a shot :P
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 286
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Posted: 11/21/2005 8:30:56 PM
^^I thought it was beautiful and I liked it:) Nice!
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 287
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 8:33:44 PM
^^^LeoWiebe


your poem was as good as anyone else's - if not better then most
so you have a talent and that is more than I would say in relation to several here
 Evilenchantress
Joined: 5/23/2005
Msg: 288
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 8:39:36 PM
Passions hidden within your soul
Fight against the rising tides
Of emotions fighting to be free
Walls of protection tower inside
The ghosts of the past
Forming a barrier you cannot see

To love you is to accept you
But only you can fight the demons
That hold you far from reach
Let me in and I will shelter you
For I long to help you be free
To fight along your side
And be your strength when you're weak

Let me in so we can fuel the fire
Of passion that has eluded us
And free our souls
So the demons will win no more.
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 289
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Posted: 11/21/2005 9:26:18 PM
I liked your write evilenchantress:)thanks for sharing it here .come back anytime..have an awesome night kids,kat
 MUSEconnie
Joined: 10/3/2005
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So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 11/21/2005 11:30:42 PM
I AGREE KAT
AWSOME
EVILENCHANTRESS
JUST AWSOME.....

LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER
MUSEconnieHUES
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 291
what beauty?
Posted: 11/22/2005 9:04:21 AM
^^Superdiva:)I think your inner and outer beauty bring light to the poetry forums..great write:) Hope to see ya again soon...Have a wonderful day kids,Kat
 d-belle
Joined: 6/7/2005
Msg: 292
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Posted: 11/22/2005 9:26:20 AM
Okay, so I'll take the plunge.......I wrote this last year after the death of a good friend of mine to cancer. I have written others, but this one has special meaning as the anniversary just passed a few weeks ago. I would love some constructive crit.

Gone

Her beauty pure
White and silver
Splashes of pink

Her friendship true
Soft word and laughter
Abundance of heart

Her shoulder soft
Strength and experience
Unjust tribulation

Her words wise
Heartfelt and sincere
High cognizance

Her life gone
Sadness and frustration
Intense grieving
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 293
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Posted: 11/22/2005 9:31:54 AM
^^I have no criticism to give in relation to your poem.Its absolutely beautiful and made my eyes well up with tears.Im sorry for the loss of your friend to cancer.I lost my mom to cancer 5 years ago as well.My heart goes out to you,and your poem is a lovely tribute to your friend.if you have any more work you would enjoy sharing Id love to see it.Feel free to post it here or in my "Everyone else is doin it..."fellfromheaven(aka me)thread.Great to see you here,Kat
 d-belle
Joined: 6/7/2005
Msg: 294
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Posted: 11/22/2005 9:33:25 AM
Gosh! Thank you! :) I will get to my "stash" later.
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 295
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Posted: 11/22/2005 9:43:17 AM
Its ok to say you have a "stash" as long as you plan to share it with the rest of us Im looking forward to it:)
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 296
what beauty?
Posted: 11/22/2005 9:05:52 PM
Youre so welcome:)A great sense of humour is such a gift when we go through the difficult things in life.Underlying sadness is more than understandable given your current situation..if anything,I just want to say feel free to email me anytime:)if you need to talk.Im so happy you share your poems here.Come back anytime I cant imagine the pain you feel over losing a child and your husband..May God bless you and your family and keep you strong.Youll be in my prayers...and please dont hesitate to email me.I dont bring this up very often but I lost a great love in my life in an accident and my mom to cancer all within the last few years...so maybe I can help since I can empathize with your situation.if theres anything I can do..Im here ...
 SweetTreat
Joined: 11/15/2005
Msg: 297
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Fleeting Anger
Posted: 11/22/2005 10:33:32 PM
Ok...I've been writing poetry for a while ... Poetry is an outlet for my anger/frustration so most poems I will post are dark lol

Rage burning,
Hatred churning.
Love fleeting,
Forever beating, a heart that will not heal.
Sadness growing,
Overthrowing, any thread of decency.
Take my life, for tonight,
I plan to make my last.
Each breathe I take, my heart does ache.
Sweet death, I welcome you


ok...critique...but be gentle!
 d-belle
Joined: 6/7/2005
Msg: 298
Fleeting Anger
Posted: 11/23/2005 5:33:28 AM
Ack! Kat, I can't find them!!!!!!! I looked and looked. :( There was some good ones too - guess I'll have to write some more. I'll be back - seems to only take me a few minutes to write as long as I'm the right state of mind. :)
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 299
Fleeting Anger
Posted: 11/23/2005 4:16:57 PM
Sweettreat...I really enjoyed reading your write.Youre very expressive in your writing..Thanks bunches for sharing it here hey Divisionbell...Ill be looking forward to reading your poems when ya find them.Its a gift to be able to turn out poems that fast..Thats awesome girlfriend. I really hope you find your stash though....My poem are so important to me,Id be heartbroken if I lost them.I hope to see you ladies back here soon.Have an awesome night,Kat
 Evilenchantress
Joined: 5/23/2005
Msg: 300
Fleeting Anger
Posted: 11/23/2005 5:21:52 PM
SweetTreat

I really liked that one. I tend to write darker stuff as well, but hey someone's gotta do it. Life isnt all about love and flowery things....or there wouldnt be so many single ppl on this site lol. Keep up the good work.

The following is one of my 'darker' ones...


You Cannot Hurt Me
For I'm already dead
Faith and hope have faltered
Leaving behind despair.

Darkness reaches
grasping
Calling my name
Pulling me into its embrace
Where pain and sorrow
No longer exist but make way
for comfort and peace

Distance shelters the pain
never shown in true light.
You can no longer hurt me
But I know you still try.
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