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 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 551
lalalalala She wore a Raspberry beret hahaPage 23 of 42    (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42)
Thanks for dropping by.Hiya kids...Im just sitting here watching the snowfall and listening to princes Raspberry beret.1...2...1..2..3.4..LOL..Does anyone else remember that song?I used to sing it on the bus ride to summer camp with my friends when I was 11 Anyway,Thanks so much yall for posting all this great stuff...Hiya Poet..great to see you. Your words of encouragement to everyone are so nice:)What a lovely poem too.I espescially adore the line,"Angel of the soul" sweet caress68 Welcome to this lil corner O the forums.I can see grooviness and a talent for writing verses runs in your family.Hilarious Holiday poem,and your travels poem was so descriptive and amazing. I just love your mom and think shes such an awesome lady:)Speaking of which...hehe ...Heya supadiva! How are ya girlfriend?Im so happy to see both you and your daughter contributing your works here.Thanks for the compliment.You make me blush because Im pretty humble when it comes to my writing.I think youre a fantastic poetess Hope to see ya soon..Welcome unzipped passion Thanks for bringing more of the holiday spirit to this thread You rock!! xchuck Your night before Christmas write was too funny Youre so eclectic in your style:)Loved it Bernard One of my favourite buddies! yay!You were one of the original posters in this thread,and I love you and your unusual poetry to bits.I hope all is well with you and Im so pleased you dropped in to visit Strutter....That write was hauntingly mesmerizing Id love to see the rest of that writing set.Awesome poem Miltownlver...Powerful write from you Come back and visit anytime. ma-che-fai-tu...Could that poem BE any hotter? I need some iced tea after reading that:)Awesome job kblgal...you made me cry too..How are ya girlfriend?Hope youre getting your homework done.You really are so talented,and your write was so heartfelt..thanks for sharing.Thank you so much for droppin by kiddies.I totally appreciate it.I wish I was around as much as I was before ,but so much has been going on lately its been a bit tighter trying to keep up.I loved reading each and every one of your poems,and Ill try drop in as often as possible.I know all of you are busy too so I appreciate yall taking the time to post:)Have a super spiffy groovy day,Kat((hugs))all around
 om
Joined: 10/16/2005
Msg: 552
lalalalala She wore a Raspberry beret haha
Posted: 12/14/2005 11:18:05 AM
^^^^
you give good heart !!!
 om
Joined: 10/16/2005
Msg: 553
lalalalala She wore a Raspberry beret haha
Posted: 12/14/2005 12:36:44 PM
I don't know good poetry
not bin my study
but if it resonates for me
I'll make it my buddy

I am just a rooky
checking out your write
taking notes from others
who seem to have it tight

the more I read the more I get
to inspire this old spirit
some I grasp some I don't
but I like being near it

so much here I must admit
a little over welming
but great fish food non the less
this is my telling.


homme:

ps. I think I like this thread
bin lookin for a home
to exersise my head.
 Crossfade
Joined: 7/5/2005
Msg: 554
Well hello Kat ..and all
Posted: 12/14/2005 2:25:18 PM
Grip me, rip me, pull my skin from my bones.
Strip me, blind me... you took them from my home.
Open up my life and watch it pour out onto the street.
Open up your eyes, and tell me you are all they desire to see.

Pull the flower from the fresh earth, place it on your mantle.
Pull their choices out of their mouth, force them along like your personal cattle.
This isnt going to work out all that well princess.
And I wont be there when you eventually fall.
 lovestalled
Joined: 12/11/2005
Msg: 555
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/14/2005 2:52:07 PM
Poem For You

put away your second guesses and butterfly kisses
on time for forevers end and you wore jeans
ending of a fantasy in a reality of strugle
my words were not enough to explain this

feeling of hope feeling of terror feeling of grief
only you could know the truth but with disbelief
render me helpless and weak at the knees

you've got me now or so it seems
orange gloss across you lips
under the moon she silently sits
 The-Callebrese-Kid
Joined: 7/10/2005
Msg: 556
For A Poet who cares..
Posted: 12/14/2005 6:18:45 PM
to all those before me who felt the pain
to all those frustrated and had to refrain
to all those who couldnt reach their hips
to all those who couldnt get a grip

to all those who couldnt get to sleep
to all those who could only weep
to those i have one last thing to say
masterbation will take your blues away

, something not squeeky clean
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 557
From A Poet who cares..
Posted: 12/15/2005 12:17:59 AM
For the record - my "Michelle" poem was never composed for any person called Michelle.
It was the product of hearing a name numerous times - perhaps on TV - of that I cannot remember.

4700
To those Michelle’s Loved Before

15 December 2005


Her heart was warm
her feelings soft
With a small ‘Thank You’
and a big one held aloft

Her life an advent to aspire too
her affection of a loving kind
When her own mother was
beautiful in her outlook in find

This Michelle from across the sea
of that land where heritage was made
Her heart so warm that was fair
her love of the world a desire not to fade

From a poet who cares
who cares and really does care
Glad to be of help in granting
a friendly welcome from afar to share


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 kblgal
Joined: 7/29/2005
Msg: 558
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From A Poet who cares..
Posted: 12/15/2005 12:21:47 AM
Aww, poetwhocares, that was very sweet :)
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 559
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/15/2005 2:18:13 AM
4701
Decadent Some Days

15 December 2005


Pain and suffering
takes a world
and steals a soul
Those moments
never to forget
yet unable to feel whole

This decadence of yesteryear
those trials of tribulation
An adversity to combat
not known if tomorrow
would be a day of celebration

Just to be alive
to know you are there
Just to know you did survive
of a world in command
never quite that place in being fair


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 kblgal
Joined: 7/29/2005
Msg: 560
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So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/15/2005 4:58:13 AM
Well poetwhocares, your last poem just hit me like a ton of bricks... thanks for the poem. It is a nice feeling to read exactly what I feel in someone else's words.
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 561
Happy holidays and hugs all around :D :D
Posted: 12/15/2005 8:10:15 AM
heya kids:)Hope all is well with everyone today.Im so excited that my honey is going to be coming in for a visit this weekend.That means after today I wont be around much until Monday.Hes from Canada,so we dont get to see eachother too often...Ok enough gushing from me....wait ..no it isnt..hhahahahaha. yay !I cant wait lol...ok ..Its temporarily out of my system...haha Michelle...Youre an absolute doll and I think its great you and your mom have such a loving ,close knit relationship.My daughter is 8 and she always tells me "Im her best big friend'.Shes way beyond adorable:)Ill check out your new thread as soon as Im done posting here,and I hope others will do the same kblgal..Thanks for dropping by with your kind words for everyone.So good to see you! hey poet..aka Christopher....Your poems rock and Im so glad you shared them with all of us.Would you mind babysitting these threads for me over the weekend?I know I ran it past ya via email,but Im just checkin in again Supadiva...Youre such an awesome lady and a joy to have in our midst.Your poetry has given me strength and courage at times as it reflects your own inner spirit and resilliency.What a testament to the power and resilliency of the human spirit your poem is You and your daughter made me cry with your loving words to one another ...awwwwww.Thats it group hug yall! Bernard...Merry Christmas and have an awesome holiday.Well miss you here,but Ill save a seat for you for when you get back ma-che-fai-tu...So I test drove your poems theory and.... LOL..very witty write with an element of truth lol...great job:) Hilarious!Lovestalled....I really enjoyed your write and i hope youll hang out with us again soon Heya Crossfade Its always nice to see familiar faces here.Excellent work as usual.. Thanks for droppin byOm...Thanks so much for your kind words,and for posting your write here..You rock(hugs) have a super duper day kids...((Hugs)))kat
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 562
babysitter on call - lol
Posted: 12/15/2005 9:49:06 AM
4703
“Friends”

16 December 2005


Sheltered inside a bond of hurt
wrapped inside a cocoon
Unable to be with friends
then television held some in zoom

Those girls called Courteney
or Jennifer by name
Or was it Elle and Joey
who were much to acclaim

As to Phoebe and her foe
unlike that of Chandler Bing
What was it they were to truly bring

Rachel - Monica and Ross
all to love in their own way
Or was it just a story of writers
to entertain as some would say


Six young people, on their own and struggling to survive in the real world, find the companionship, comfort and support they get from each other to be the perfect antidote to the pressures of life. - Friends: A Comedy Television Series based in Manhattan, New York, USA, about 6 young friends, in the struggle to find success and happiness in life.

Jennifer Aniston as Rachel Green, Courteney Cox as Monica Geller Bing (also as Courteney Cox Arquette), Lisa Kudrow as Phoebe Buffay, Matt LeBlanc as Joey Tribbiani, Matthew Perry as Chandler Bing and David Schwimmer as Ross Geller. With supermodel Elle Macpherson as Janine Lecroix.

A television series created in 1994 [TV-Series 1994-2004] to epitomise the lifestyles of the 1990’s , though the eyes of its 6 stars—in having the working titles of “Across the Hall”, Friends Like Us”, “Insomnia Café” and “Six of One” -to be simply known by its on screen title of “Friends”. A television Comedy / Romance created by David Crane and Marta Kauffman.


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 563
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/15/2005 2:13:18 PM
18
A Vision of Love

14 January 1996


It was around midnight
when my eyes fell closed
for just a second or so
when I saw a vision

A young bespectacled woman
sitting on a lawn
grass so green
Isn’t God mean

He showed me my future life
and perhaps also my future wife
for I believe I know this woman
I know that is true

The place I still had to find
Perhaps then I would make her mine
She stood as if to walk with me
like she had once before


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 Moon Maiden
Joined: 9/17/2005
Msg: 564
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/15/2005 8:28:45 PM
wow strutter....that's well done, especially for 1st draft. quite enjoyed
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 565
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 12/15/2005 11:40:17 PM
for those newcommes

I do not write poems - I play with words - write bad grammar and destroy the English
language - and do not care about rules of what a poem is meant or not meant to be - you
get out of one of my words - not the meaning - but the feeling of reading it - start at the
top - read to the bottom and then ponder over the first thought that comes into you mind -
do not try the think what I was thinking about - relate to what you are made to think about
as a result - and how you feel inside - happy, sad, confused - upset -
just take it as it comes
September 17, 2005

Then I've written over 100 of these poem things so far for December 2005
got to keep up the practice

4708
Crazy Horse

16 December 2005


Love was lemon pie
bitter but sweet to try
When poetry was like a peach
to some it was talent less and out of reach

While others could dream
of golden days in the sun
That was if it was not raining
and this day had not been one

What is a poem
what is love at all
No one really does know
because of love they in and out fall

Like to have a heart and soul
all covered in uncooked
scrambled eggs
Hey she looks sexy
and what great legs


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 566
So ya wanna be a poet?yuppers:)
Posted: 12/16/2005 6:04:46 AM
Heya kids:)Hope all is well with everyone:)Poet,moon maiden,sweet carress and bernard...Thanks so much for posting poems,commenting,or just poppin in to say hi:)have a wonderful weekend everyone,and I should be posting again on Monday!Until then ((hugs )) all around,Kat
 rekless
Joined: 11/19/2005
Msg: 567
So ya wanna be a poet?yuppers:)
Posted: 12/16/2005 6:06:13 AM
Exhiled here in my prison

Tho' there are no bars
nor conrete nor fences
i am exhiled here in my prison

i have my warden
and guards
names are
TIME and
LIFE
they keep me here...
exhiled in my prison

and even though it always seems
i'll never share company in jail
that's when i always hear
over half the worl shares my lot in life

like me
in this penitentiary
Exhiled in my prison

Kevin H.
 rekless
Joined: 11/19/2005
Msg: 568
So ya wanna be a poet?yuppers:)
Posted: 12/16/2005 6:07:19 AM
darn, spell check didn't tell me i spelled "world" wrong
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 569
So ya wanna be a poet? sorta do!
Posted: 12/16/2005 1:23:30 PM
4586
Bubble Gum Blues

27 November 2005


Some can be funny - others were true
Then there were really bad movies
and chewed gum on the seats
that was left behind and stuck like glue

While there were topics
at times not all there
Because what was the state
of the state fair

Even if this was a movie
made from some guys play
The subject was merry-go-rounds
and that was another in Carousel you'd say

Some can be funny
as comic as can be
But who left their bubble gum here
because I'm stuck to my seat
and cannot get free


© 2005 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
 kblgal
Joined: 7/29/2005
Msg: 570
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From A Poet who cares..
Posted: 12/16/2005 7:27:23 PM
Hmm, I just want to "apologize", or something, for the fact that all of my poems are basically about the same subject, for now anyway. I typically write when I feel extreme emotion of some sort, and lately it has been much of the same for me. So, sorry if reading my words gets old, lol :P
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Am I wasting my time?
As I sit here and think about you,
Pondering my love for you,
Wondering what you are doing at this very moment…

Am I wasting my time?
 kblgal
Joined: 7/29/2005
Msg: 571
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Posted: 12/16/2005 7:28:21 PM
I want to be yours.
And I am.
But I don’t want just your heart.
I want your hand.

It’s so easy to just slip it into mine.
As you gaze longingly into my eyes.
But I guess it’s just not that easy to change your mind.
 kblgal
Joined: 7/29/2005
Msg: 572
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For everyone on this thread
Posted: 12/16/2005 7:33:07 PM
Sorry that this is off-topic... but if anyone is feeling particularly philanthropic, I started a thread in the "Dating and Love Advice" area, called "I am in love with my ex, but cannot re-start the relationship now..." I'm thinkin' the title of the thread is pretty self-explanatory, so if you care to read the dilemma and leave some words, I would be ecstatic :)

*End ad*
 pixiegrl32
Joined: 11/30/2005
Msg: 573
just a thought
Posted: 12/16/2005 9:57:59 PM
one single milk white petal clinging to a sad allow face, he loves me not.
 pixiegrl32
Joined: 11/30/2005
Msg: 574
just a thought
Posted: 12/16/2005 9:59:55 PM
oops sallow sorry my first time showing my poems.
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 575
From A Poet who cares..
Posted: 12/17/2005 9:52:17 AM
kblgal - never "apologize", for writing or expressiing words and feelings from your heart
Write you heart out if need be and don't give a damn about anyone else in the process
That is what creates 'poetry' - and never be sorry for doing that, if this is your desire

Here's one I composed for Kat (from my Katalist)

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Barefoot and Beautiful

06 September 2005


Barefoot and Beautiful
away from shoes on her feet
Happiness a smile to have
exchanging another when you greet

Heaven maid and heaven borne
her toes made free to air
Of a heart beating softly
to rhythms classical to fare

Through trials and understanding
no shoes being required to ware
Even when not all was roses in a jar
as to other moments to bear

Barefoot and Beautiful
away from shoes on her feet
Happiness a smile to have
exchanging another when you greet


"He hath made every thing beautiful in his time: also he hath
set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the
work that God maketh from the beginning to the end."
Ecclesiastes 3: 11 KJV


©2005 Christopher W Herbert (A New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares
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