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 xlntlyxacuted
Joined: 7/17/2005
Msg: 176
So ya wanna be a poet?I hope so or this thread is tankin LOLPage 8 of 42    (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42)
^^^ Well thank you, here's one with a touch less gloom...

The Flower
The most exquisite flower in the garden,
You stand above all for the world to observe.
Your petals so soft, your fragrance so sweet,
To possess you is more than a God should deserve.
Yet the mortals they come, from far and away,
But still none can hold you, try as they may.
So alone here you stand for the whole world to view
waiting for the one worthy enough to pick you.
XX
 TiredDaddy
Joined: 5/20/2005
Msg: 178
I don't need you
Posted: 9/30/2005 11:31:48 AM
I don't need you.
I have no pressing need that you fill
I color my own world and make my own peace.

I don't need you.
I live my own life and make my own dreams
On terms that no one but I have set into stone.

I don't need you.
The sun rises and sets each day
It's beauty constant no mattter who I admire it with.

That is why I believe it is fate,
I believe it is something bigger than both of us,
I believe that God and nature has determined we belong together...

Because I cannot live without you.
 slyrick2005
Joined: 9/15/2005
Msg: 179
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 9/30/2005 3:07:20 PM
Thanks everyone for your kind comments.

I am also thankful for your contributions because like to you I am always more thought provoked and inspired by others talents.

More to come..

Rick
 sycophant
Joined: 9/25/2005
Msg: 180
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 9/30/2005 4:03:49 PM
Be a bit much for me to repost them, but I posted several poems of mine in this forum yesterday or thereabouts and would appreciate some feedback.
 blitznboltz
Joined: 5/4/2005
Msg: 181
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 9/30/2005 6:42:56 PM
Hey sychophant, I'd be more than willing to comment on your poems but I couldn't find any on this thread....

This is an oldie but it's one of my faves



Closer Than They Appear

Why am I still here, just anticipating
Always waiting, waiting, waiting
Seems like Im always in your rearview mirror
Getting smaller and smaller till I disappear
I must stand alone and need you from here
Objects in the mirror are closer than they appear
 xlntlyxacuted
Joined: 7/17/2005
Msg: 182
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 9/30/2005 7:38:09 PM
Failed Rescue
Onward I fight the Demon War
Where Thousands of Minions die by my sword,
But how many more lie instore?
Never will I find out, never more.
For I am mortally wounded,
No way to repair.
I'll never save the Maiden fair,
Save her from the Evil Beast,
With ripping claws and gnashing teeth.
All I can do is use my last breath
And keep fighting to save her
Until I finally know death.
XX
 cheatingheart
Joined: 8/12/2005
Msg: 183
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 9/30/2005 7:56:05 PM
I dedicate this little piece to Brawnydog who told me to post it because it was "too hot". He said if I didn't he would copy it and post it himself. I have removed the names to protect the innocent. Enjoy one and all!

"Cerebral Exchanges"

Green eyes watch as passion begins.
My lips so full, to take you in.
Trembling hands await to undress.
Bountiful breasts erect for your caress.
Silky skin longs to be touched.
Oh, how I want you so much.
My juice is flowing, take a drink.
Please bring me to the brink.
Honey milk coming fast and I taste you so;
Swallowing slowly as we go.
I'm burning deep with in.
I want to feel you; hurry let's begin.
Rocking, thrusting and riding you so,
Take me to places I long to go.
You make me tremble, shake and quiver.
My orgasms will be like a river,
Slow and steady then coming fast.
Take a ride and make it last.
Hurry now and don't be late.
I want to you at my pearly gate.
So, take the key and open the door
There is so much for us to explore!
 xlntlyxacuted
Joined: 7/17/2005
Msg: 184
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 9/30/2005 8:48:42 PM
Amen!
 blitznboltz
Joined: 5/4/2005
Msg: 185
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/1/2005 7:51:38 PM
Great writes on here, way to go everybody

And sychophant i went through your threads and read your poems, just incredible, your love for words is obvious
 Shrouded Embers
Joined: 9/29/2005
Msg: 186
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/2/2005 9:51:53 AM
With heavy hearts we do depart,
To be whisked away on the wings of dreams,
Carried off to a faraway place,
Where nothing is what it seems,
Nightmares will hide while I'm by your side,
And unspeakable evils will flee,
Lying here in my arms, you will come to no harm,
I will watch over you whilst you sleep,

So dream your dreams and sleep in peace,
I'll be here when you wake.

~A.S.
 sycophant
Joined: 9/25/2005
Msg: 187
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 9:22:53 AM
bernard2504,

Your stuff is great! Love it!


i must be getting old right now...
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 188
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 1:58:59 PM
I enjoyed your write alot shrouded embers:)Very cool stuff..Bernard....Always a unique and yet very enjoyable experience reading yours:)Im back kids,and looking forward to seeing some new writes...have an excellent night,Kat
 1tuffQT
Joined: 9/25/2005
Msg: 189
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 8:25:11 PM
Baby Bird - Leaf.

Tiny bird, feeble wings
still too young to learn to sing.
Baby eyes, fragile beak,
frame so small and still so weak.
Tried for freedom - his first flight...
jumped the nest with all his might.
Took to the air - that little bird
his breathless gaspe was never heard.
Tiny bird, who fell so fast,
his innocent life has come to pass
he fought his death right to the end,
held on strong - yet lost the win.
Tiny bird, baby eyes,
stares blankly now - how still he lies.
Died so silent, we now must part,
Oh baby bird, you broke my heart.
 Ali Kat
Joined: 8/14/2005
Msg: 190
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 8:46:13 PM
^^^^ Post that in Oohpie's poetry contest forum....
 1tuffQT
Joined: 9/25/2005
Msg: 191
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 8:54:24 PM
I already have 2 poems on there...boo
but thx for the vote of approval!!
 Canadian Romantic
Joined: 5/10/2005
Msg: 192
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 11:21:09 PM
"I certainly am a Poet,
And my feet sure do show it"

(I try to post a different poem weekly on my profile)
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 193
So ya wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/3/2005 11:45:01 PM
^^Hi Blitz Thanks for looking out for my thread:) Much appreciated girlfriend..Mwah!I was camping over the weekend and just got home Monday afternoon so I fell a bit behind...sorry kids (hugs all around)Canadian Romantic.....I read the poems on your profile....Have you ever thought about entering the poetry contest that Im hosting?..awesome stuff Before I forget...The contest is actually kinda disguised as a thread called "Because I can LOL :D" by oohpie:)I just changed my name again...Anyway,any of you who are interested in entering should get your poems in in a timely fashion(LOL so formal)cause the contest closes on Thursday.Lil prom wave,Kat aka Alis kat Oohpie,fellfromheaven
 _DarMar
Joined: 6/22/2005
Msg: 194
Anatomy of a Poet
Posted: 10/4/2005 5:16:12 AM
A poet is a purveyor
of rhythmic rhymes
A word weaver...
filled with metre and time.
Blank pages are the canvass..
the pen...a mighty brush
His pallet full of textures...
giving readers ...such a rush
of joy and tears...
of loss and gain...
A poet is a seeded cloud...
his words fall down ...like rain.




dar
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 195
Anatomy of a Poet
Posted: 10/4/2005 10:11:30 AM
Hey Dar...I love your words have you ever thought of starting your own poetry thread?wink wink....Something to think about to give all your amazing writes a home of their own...have a great day yall and keep em coming...Lil prom wave,Kat
 _DarMar
Joined: 6/22/2005
Msg: 196
Anatomy of a Poet
Posted: 10/4/2005 10:52:41 AM
thanks for the kind words.
 poetwhocares
Joined: 5/1/2005
Msg: 197
Anatomy of a Poet
Posted: 10/4/2005 12:23:22 PM
Yes Dar . . . I second Kat's comment above - you have a great way with words Dar - it is always nice to read your writes
 GalliGirl
Joined: 3/7/2005
Msg: 198
view profile
History
Life is TrageComedy
Posted: 10/4/2005 1:30:34 PM
Charity, prosperity, despair
Tears and laughter to share.
Sunset is as rebirth
Awaken to a new season.
Fresh Autumn. Fragrant Spring.
New Day, New Time, New Journey
Explore. Expand. Live
 ~SpiffyKat~
Joined: 8/16/2005
Msg: 199
so you wanna be a poet?
Posted: 10/5/2005 12:00:12 AM
Canadian Spanky.....interesting write for sure....oh and any double entandres are indeed more than welcome here lol in fact they are embraced LOL Galligirl..I enjoyed your expressiveness...good job hugs all around and hope to see yall soon,kat
 sexynickers
Joined: 9/30/2005
Msg: 200
wanted
Posted: 10/5/2005 12:57:08 AM
Roses are red the sky's are blue,
send down a few angels ,
to come down and watch ,
over the rainbows ,
as i dance full of joy,
knowing some day,
i just might meet you,
................................
Roses are red ,
The skys are blue,
the night is dark ,
and god knows i should be out there,
meeting new people instead of crying over the likes of you,
And deep down even i know that your my past time to move on,
and find that some one new so how do you do!
May i sit in and write a few poems to.
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